~Theselak Rising.~

[Nosdyn]

(Closed to Cerna WILL contain erotic content. Thank you. Continues after the events of: ~Theselak Forged~ (https://www.althanas.com/world/showthread.php/2876-Act-2-Theselak-Forged?p=24505#post24505))

One year later...

Theselak was booming.

The Undead quietly increased their numbers as the overall forces grew in power and influence.

Nosdyn was pacing back and forth that day, he was nervous.

That day on the exact year he had sent the letter to his friend and ally, Crux over in Stonevale, Cerna and Nosdyn were to wed officially.

Nosdyn wanted Crux himself to oversee the ceremonies and overall procedure of the wedding.

He was waiting for the arrival of his old friend Crux that day the journey from Stonevale was a few weeks on a hard ride.

He could see the horses already on their way after the fifth hour that day.

It was a Thursday...

Nosdyn and his ally, Crux had shared many letters and documents since that first letter.

The hot wind came in from the west. Nosdyn's clothing was rippling in the breeze. His eyes narrowed as he watched Crux's approach. His eyes started to dart around. They had enemies on two fronts, N'Jal had recently started to stir anew, and, that new enemy the orcish king named Aranor....

He was trying to be extra careful with Crux's safety...

He had his arms folded across his massive chest. He was waiting for Crux to arrive and his mate, Cerna, stood by his side. He held her closely and observed Crux's group of horses on the horizon....

They were almost there at that point.

[Cerna]

Cerna smiles as her pet bat Fang led the Caravan to them. She stood at her Soon-To-Be-Husband's side and looks toward him with a light smile "You nervous love? This is a special occasion after all" She asked as she stood closer to him, Her tail around his thigh. She was admittedly a little nervous herself. She had never gotten a chance to marry in her mortal life, and even in Undeath, she couldn't help but be a little nervous.

Much of Cerna's afterlife was spent as a tool of war. So She was always aggressive to strangers or enemies. Some things will never leave her, But she Knows allies when she sees them. Crux and his caravan is no exception. Although Cerna has many Skeletons in her closet from her time with Aranor, She is unworried. After all, She has the wards in place to protect her from external control.

[Nosdyn]

Nosdyn growled softly with pleasure once she wrapped her tail around him.

He wrapped his arm around her and held her as close as he could.

His eyes were narrowed making sure that nothing threatened his friend's approach. There were five horses all together in Crux's group.

He let the question that Cerna asked linger between them for a minute longer. He looked at her and nodded. "Yeah." He began. "I'm a little nervous I don't know the Stonevale ceremonies and I don't want to mess anything up." He chuckled. "But with you by my side we should be all right." He told her confidentaly.

A short while after Crux arrived. Crux was much older of a human at that point and he had silver coloured long hair. He walked up to Nosdyn and hugged his old friend and his wife. "Good to see you both in good spirits." He said to Nosdyn gently.

Nosdyn nodded. "And you my old friend." He looked at Crux's escort gently. "You all will be treated well while you are here in Theselak." Nosdyn promised them. "As you have requested in regards to the ceremony in question, we have prepared suitable space and a building for the events." He promised. "All will go smooth as possible." He was in fact, quite nervous.

Crux must have seen that and nodded. "All will be well Nosdyn and Cerna the procedure and ceremony are relatively simple enough. And we w will stay a while to get to know you and your people." Crux said calmly.

Nosdyn nodded as they walked to his house. "Follow me to my place."

[Cerna]

Cerna nods And perches Fang on her arm as she walked with Nosdyn to their house "I should thank you personally, Crux. The wards you placed have saved my afterlife on multiple occasions" She smiles at Crux as she walked alongside Nosdyn.

[Nosdyn]

Crux and his companions stay close to Cerna and Nosdyn. Crux and his group were priests of Stonevale so naturally they did not yet fully trust Nosdyn's undead. Crux turned his attention towards Cerna. "Nosdyn is an old friend of mine. He saved my life too many times to count during my early studies so I am glad I was able to return the favor." He had a small smile on his jovial face.

They finally arrived at Nosdyn's large house. Nosdyn looked around for a moment and then turned his attention to Crux and his companions. "Here is my house. You folks are welcome to stay here while you're here." He told them. "Cerna, I am going to get dinner ready." He said and opened the front doors to the house.

Crux noticed there was no need for keys and he raised his eyebrow at that. "You don't lock your doors, Lord Nosdyn?" Crux asked kindly.

Nosdyn shook his head no. "No. This is a safe place for all." He said calmly. "As long as my people are respected."

Crux nodded. "Very good." He looked at Cerna. "You're very lucky to have tamed Nosdyn." He told Cerna, giving her his blessing. "His heart was in flux for a long time." Crux told Cerna. "I've known your mate for many years now."

[Cerna]

Cerna chuckles "We tamed each other is more like it, Crux" She again gave a chuckle as Fang chirped at her "Though i can't say our trials to keep this land a safe haven are over just yet. We've had a few clashes with my former king more then once already. the most recent being just last year"

[Nosdyn]

Crux nodded as they enter Nosdyn's house. "It seems our world is fill with strike and war." He began. "But it gives me hope that you two have each other and are strongly bound to one another." He said calmly. He looked at Nosdyn gently. "I trust you have good drink and food here, I'm parched after all Tular Plains are a hot place..." He raised his eyebrows saying that part of it.

Nosdyn nodded. "I have drink for us all. Nothing too fancy or vintage, but some ale yes." Nosdyn chuckled. He went to go gather food and drink for them from the cooking area, the kitchen. He gathered a large serving of stuff for them all. He placed everything at their table. "Help yourselves to good food. Tular Plains cooking." He chuckled. "Hope you lovely folks enjoy." He felt uncomfortable, he was not the most social animals, but he was trying for Cerna's sake.

He folded his arms across his chest indicating he was nervous. He looked at Crux. "Try the ale, I think you will like it Crux."

[Cerna]

Cerna smiles and wraps her tail around his leg to calm him "Calm Down my dear Nosdyn. we're among friends here" She smiles

[Nosdyn]

Nos was feeling extremely nervous but her presence was helping keep him centered. He wrapped a large arm around her and pulled her close. Nodding gently he took a deep breath and attempted to calm down. He wasn't pissed or anything like that, it was just nerves that made him extremely uncomfortable. He was having a distinct feeling of dejavu, like he'd been through that same exact thing once before in Ettermire herself. He sighed for a moment as he attempted to shrug off the ghosts of his past...

Centering his mind proved a useful trick at that point. "We have several bedrooms here in my house Crux." Nosdyn began. "Feel free to sleep anywhere you folks choose to." He let them know that part of the bargain and sighed after. "I'm getting a little tired it's been a day folks. We'll start the prep work for the ceremonies later this week." Nosdyn explained. "There is no rush and I want you folks to enjoy your stay here anyway." Nosdyn said calmly. He looked at his wife. "Come my love let's get some rest." He knew Cerna never slept, and neither did he. He had other hunger and desires though and he just needed to rest a bit and relax his nerves...

[Cerna]

Cerna nods and smiles at Nosdyn before going with him to their chambers

[Nosdyn]

Nosdyn smiled and picked his woman up.

He took her himself to their bedroom. He always did enjoy their closeness. Once they were done interacting with Crux and the others he sighed with relief. He wasn't the most social of people and he was trying really hard for Cerna' sake. He placed her on their bed gently. And smiled at her calmly sitting next to her.

"Gods that was...rough." He said to her calmly. He shook his head but he was glad that his friend and his people had made it to their city safely and without incident. There was always too much at stake and he did not want an international incident on his hands. He'd already had too many skeletons in his closet. He held her hand gently breathing softly...he needed a moment or two to relax himself....

[Cerna]

Cerna smiles and wraps her tail around his leg gently, Massaging it to help him calm his nerves

[Nosdyn]

He nodded at her, his mood was not sour or anything but he was nervous and that was a feeling he did not like.

He wrapped an arm around his woman and pulled her close to his hot and warm body. He noticed her warmth and smiled. The secret technique had worked wonders on Cerna...he kissed her deeply.

"Thank you my love." He told her gently, and placed her on his lap.

"I am still very nervous, the socializing aspect of this was always very difficult for me." He explained as he held her close...

[Cerna]

Cerna smiles and kisses him deeply "I am well aware. Honestly it's no easier for me... But you are doing well my dear" She said as she kissed him

Fang trills eagerly as he once again teased Cerna earning a chuckle from the undead Draenei "Oh hush Fang"

[Nosdyn]

Nosdyn eagerly kissed his woman back...with hunger that was undending.

His hands, large in nature, rested on the small of her back.

He kissed her lovingly for a good while. "My love...we have too many clothing on." He said with a chuckle. He got up and took off his and her own clothing and armour placing everything gently to the side. He admire her skyclad body for a few minutes and returned her to his lap.

He wrapped his arms around her calmly...

[Cerna]

She purrs and kisses him more as she made love to him. She wrapped her tail around his leg and purrs

"You know with Fang being my pet, he's gonna tease us all the time now. Better get used to it love" She chuckles

[Nosdyn]

"I helped breed an entire generation of this age's undead. Distractions or no we will be fine my love." He chuckled he didnt mind their little one's, Fang's constant noises. He'd been through much much worse...he wrapped his arms around her firmly.

He kissed her deeply.

His large hands firmly on her ass. "Why don't you put that lovely tail in me?" He suddenly asked with a sly wink. He was feeling bold and adventurous that night. His erection already inside of his woman...she sat on him and had easy access to him...

[Cerna]

She blushes and smiles slipping her tail inside of him with a soft moan "You mean like this?
She smirks as she watched her man's reaction

[Nosdyn]

Feeling his woman slide her tail inside of his tight anus, he held her close and growled with pleasure. "Yes...like that my love." He felt extremely good with her inside of him as well.

He opened his legs a little for her as well.

His hands still massaged her lovely ass, he reciprocated and put two large fingers in her ass as well.

He held her closely the entire time, still grinding his powerful hips against her own. His thick erection sensitive in her tightness...

[Cerna]

She moans in pleasure and purrs. She was enjoying the pleasure he brought her. "Don't stop, love" She purred out

[Nosdyn]

He knew what his woman liked and needed, and she knew him as well.

Feeling his woman deep inside of him made him moan with pleasure.

He held her very close his hand gripping her ass firmly.

Kissing her deeply, he sucked on her tongue gently.

His hand massaging her ass lovingly and erotically.

He held her close as he could as they made love. "Push yourself all the way inside me love." He said to his woman...

[Cerna]

Cerna smiles and kisses him deeply as she took him that night She pushed herself in entirely at his request, her body shuddering in pleasure

[Nosdyn]

He enjoyed every moment of his woman deep inside of him, just as he was inside of her...

He growled and panted with pleasure as he held her close to him. They made love to one another. About an hour or two later, Nosdyn blasted his liquid hot seed deeply into her undead womb once more. He kissed her deeply as he filled her...

His hands greedily grabbed at her ass massaging it with hunger.

As he filled her up, his own seed slid down his shaft. He called out her name..."Cerna..." He panted with sublime pleasure. His hands grabbing at her ass with hunger. After he filled her up, he picked her up and laid her gently in their bed. Her tail felt good inside him, damn good. "More." He told his woman...

[Cerna]

Cerna smiles and kisses him deeply as she made love to him more, Her tail pushing in deeper, bit only as far as the jewelry on her tail was, she didn't want to give him any kind of metal poisoning while they were making love

[Nosdyn]

The pleasure he felt he was sublime.

She expertly pushed her tail deep within him. He growled and moaned with tremendous pleasure. He held his woman closely, kissing her deeply and hungrily. His hands massaging her lower back gently. He sucked on her tongue gently as they kissed lovingly.

His large hand continued to massage her ass firmly. Squeezing periodically with the pure lust he held for his woman...

He filled her undead with a lot of hot seed that night. Making sure she was filled completely. He growled and moaned for her loudly...

[Cerna]

Cerna smiles and kisses him deeply as she made love to him more and more. She growled with pleasure as he filled her up

[Nosdyn]

His large arms were wrapped firmly around his woman. He held her closely.

He knew that soon they would be wed...it was what he wanted more than anything. His hand massaged the small of her back very gently.. He held his woman closely. He enjoyed their closeness, and he enjoyed her tail inside of him.

He was moaning with pleasire/

As they took each other, the nerves of the wedding and it's ceremony filled him with partial fear...but it was slowly melting away. He kissed her deeply keeping himself insde of his woman....

[Cerna]

Cerna smiles back Kissing Him Lovingly as she took him, Making Love as she Did So

[Nosdyn]

A couple days later...

Nosdyn was pacing back and forth that day. He was listening to Crux's instructions on the wedding ceremony.

Never had Nosdyn wanted to get everything right for Cerna's sake as he had wanted to get their wedding right. He went over the ceremony precepts making sure that he memorized everything. Crux gave Nosdyn the notes for the ceremony on hand, documentation, scrolls and parchments. A large volume of text that Nosdyn had to memorize.

He was following a traditional Stonevale wedding rites, he didn't want to offend his old friend and his people. So he was trying extremely hard knowing full well Cerna, in a separate locations of the wedding grounds, was learning her part of the rites. Nosdyn needed a break a few hours later, his head hurt and he had rapidly consumed all of the information he needed to know. He looked at his old friend Crux. "Like that yes?" Nosdyn asked of the particular steps of the rites.

Crux nodded. "Yes. Exactly like that, you're doing quite well Nosdyn." Crux complimented the old demon.

Nosdyn sighed with concentration. "Thank the Thayne." Nosdyn said. "Can we take a break now? My head actually hurts."

"Study that last part of the rite. To appease Lady Y'edda that is when you must get the rites exactly correct my pupil." Crux said. "Yes, study that portion of the ceremony everything must be done exactly correct."

Nosdyn nodded. "I will not fail."

[Cerna]

Cerna was studying the rites as well although she herself was incredibly nervous. Which was beginning to show as she saw Xelldra come over. Xelldra was one of her best friends ever since she came to this world and saw her through some pretty difficult challenges. She as well wanted to make sure this went off without a hitch. "Oh! Hi Xelldra. Perfect timing...My nerves are starting to get to me"

[Nosdyn]

That day...

The Lady Xelldra walked up to her friend and Demon Lord Nosdyn's wife to be, Cerna. She smiled at her best friend. The two had become very close over time. Xelldra wore her long blonde hair in a single braided lock and wore her priestess robes. She hugged her friend. She served as an advisor to Nosdyn and Cerna. She made sure to offer her expert advice on all sorts of matters. Including at that point, during their wedding. Xelldra hugged her best friend closely.

"You look amazing today." She told her best friend. "You will make our demon lord melt." She promised. Xelldra had her eyes on the high priest Crux and had begun to make moves on him..."Remember the breathing techniques I have taught you. It's just nerves and fear, don't let fear win here this is a very special day for all of us." Xelldra said calmly. "If it helps your husband to be is also a nervous wreck right now to."

The ritual they were about to undergo was heavy on rites from the husband's point of view.

Xelldra kept her lovely face calm. Her glowing yellow eyes observed Cerna calmly. "When the hour comes me and you will face this all together." She promised Cerna...

[Cerna]

Cerna chuckles a bit. Xelldra always did know how to calm her nerves "Oh is he now? Here i thought he had nerves of steel" She mused "Then again i suppose this is all new to him. As it is me"

[Nosdyn]

Lady Xelldra smiled at her friend.

She knew later that day the procedure for marriage would begin in front of the Thayne Lady Y'edda.

Lady Xelldra worried for Lord Nosdyn's composure in front of the Thayne. She knew Lord Nosdyn despised the Thaynehood but was being diplomatic for Crux's sake. She knew Nosdyn didn't want an international incident, too much exposure to Theselak. He was a noble of sorts after all.

Xelldra understood the necessary trepidation.

Xelldra looked away for a moment deep in thought.....

[Cerna]

Cerna looks toward her friend and ally. "You seem nervous yourself my friend. What troubles you?"

[Nosdyn]

Lady Xelldra listens to her long time friend for a moment. She looked at Cerna carefully and placed a hand on her hand gently. "Lady Y'Edda is a Thayne." She began. "The Thayne are our enemies." She stated. "I worry for Lord Nosdyn's capacity to remain neutral here." She shook her head as she spoke. "But worry not Cerna, these are worries for older minds."

She paused for a moment. "But yes I am worried for Lord Nosdyn.

***

Later that day...

Nosdyn was in a conference with Crux and Lady Y'Edda preparing for the ceremony.

Lady Y'Edda looked at Nosdyn carefully. "Do you have so much hatred for us Lord Nosdyn?" She suddenly asked.

Nosdyn sighed and narrowed his eyes. "I do but I'm undergoing this ceremony for my mate's sake and Crurx and his people. You have no idea how difficult it is for me to be here in front of you like this. And not..." He sighed.

Lady Y'Edda nodded. "And not attack me?" She chuckled.

[Cerna]

Cerna was anxiously waiting for the moment where she and nosdyn can see each other At the altar. This is the longest they've been separated

[Nosdyn]

The training took a few weeks but Nosdyn made sure he got the ritualistic aspects of everything sorted correct. He would allow for no failures. Lady Y'Edda had no idea how much danger she was actually in, but he would keep his word and allegiance intact with Crux. The ceremony was underway and he looked at his wife to be in that amazing dress. He wanted to take her right then...in front of them all. However, he held restraint there would be plenty of time that night and in the futuer.

Lady Y'Edda stood alongside Crux. He was their high priest. Nosdyn went and ahead and recited the exact ritual words for word. His eyes locked on his woman. He held her hand the entire time the ritual hand fasting ceremony went on. Lady Y'Edda herself tied the ribbons around their two hands.

They were ceremonial ribbons.

At the final part of the ceremony, Lady Y'Edda nods and smiles. "You are now one before the eyes of the Thayne." She stated. "GO with our blessing Nosdyn and Cerna.' She smiled once more. "You may now kiss one another, you're wed."

[Cerna]

Cerna smiles and kisses nosdyn happily. She had been patiently waiting for this day and it was a touching sight for all involved

[Nosdyn]

He kissed his woman before the eyes of the Thayne and his people gathered in ceremony.

He held her closely to him and smiled. "I did it all right." He said with a large sense of relief. He hated that the Thayen was on their turf, but he allowed it for the time being. Holding his woman he thanked Crux and Lady Y'Edda. He raised his woman's hand in celebration as they were officially one. The gathered clapped tandem with his actions.

Later that day...

Nosdyn was in his bed chambers with his wife Cerna he looked at her. "Gods that was horrible." He finally told her. "To be in front of our enemy like that...and not able to attack." He shook his head. "I'm glad we sorted it..."

[Cerna]

Cerna smiles a bit. "You did well my love. You've come a long way. We both had" She smiles

[Nosdyn]

He sat calmly next to his woman, calming down after his great rage almost exploded.

"I hate them all." He said to her finally. He had shown a great deal of restraint in the face of their enemy. His experiences with N'Jal had cemented his views in fire. He looked at her calmly. But his eyes told all, there was a rage there now, a fury. A man who knew what he needed to do. He held his woman's hand.

"I will let Crux know that we are settled and to never allow Y'Edda back here." He stated to her with an audible sigh. He kissed his woman deeply, he needed her. He had agreed to Crux's offer for Cerna's sake. To help her heal more.

He wrapped his arms firmly around her and pulled her closely...

[Cerna]

She smiles lightly "I understand where you are coming from, my dear. But I think it's time I told you....when I first came to this land I had not come alone. And I'm not just referring to Aranor...i came with a child. A baby girl. She was born bro before I became undead. A thayne took her. She wasn't killed, but she is in their ranks. Little more then a prisoner" She admitted

[Nosdyn]

He didn't need any more reason to hate the Thayne. That was one more reason. He held his woman closely. "Given all of the skeletons in my own closet, I can say this does not surprise me honestly." He nodded calmly. "If she is out there, we will find her together. This I promise you." He told her carefully.

Her warm skin felt good against him.

He kissed her deeply.

They were both sitting on their bed. And it was time to take his wedding gift...

He grinned as they kissed with hunger. "We will find her." He said in between their kisses. "This I swear."

[Cerna]

Cerna smiles and kisses him deeply as they made love. She felt reassured that they'd look for her child "would you take her if she became a Thayne?" She asked of her husband

[Nosdyn]

The lights flickered on and off at that point in their bedroom. He sighed when she posed the question. There were two truths to Nosdyn at that point: one he hated the Thayne. Two, he loved his wife, Cerna. He took her hand in his hand for a moment and looked deeply in her eyes. In his youth he'd been rash and brazen, but as he got older he'd learned to quell the fires within.

He looked into his wife's eyes carefully.

"As I said earlier. Given the skeletons in my own closet. I can't really harp you too much if OUR daughter happens to be one of them. As long as she doesn't become hostile to us after she is rescued." He told his woman. There were too many unknowns and variables in that situation. He did not like it, but their child regardless of race he would accept. He held her closely for comfort.

He needed his woman.

He slowly began to undress her and himself....on that their wedding night.

[Cerna]

She nods and smiles kissing him deeply as they made love "Kura? Hostile? Hardly. She's very sweet in nature. Who knows how much time will change that, But She can be worked with if necessary. even as an infant she had always been a fighter"

[Nosdyn]

He had a name for their child at that point.

He nodded gently. The lights continued to flicker from the fire place. He held her closely to him. They were both skyclad by that point. He picked her up and placed her gently into their bed laying next to her. He wrapped his arms firmly around his woman. He considered what he was learning at that point. "Our daughter will be fine once we save her." He told his woman and kissed her quite deeply.

"Worry not. Even if she is the enemy I will show as much restraint as needed." He told her gently. He meant that too. He would move the pillars of the celestial vault for her....he kissed her deeply and softly.

[Cerna]

She kisses back gently and nuzzles him lovingly. If Kura is her child by blood then she'll likely be of her race. A draenei

[Nosdyn]

His woman was held closely as they kissed one another.

Heat and sweat began to flow form their bodies. His hands massaged the small of her back gently. He kissed her with deep hunger. sucking on her lower lip and her tongue gently. His heart raced by that point.

He felt himself growing stiff and hard for his woman...

The large head of his erection resting against her stomach. He ached and needed her...

[Cerna]

She smiles softly and stroked him off gently. She likely had a question for y'edda about her child so it may be wise to ask. The thayne was kind enough to get then wed. Maybe She isn't like other thayne?

[Nosdyn]

Given Nosdyn's experiences with N'Jal he admittedly had a negative view regarding them all.

Holding his woman closely he moans softly as she began to stroke him off. He was thick and hard only for his wife by that point. He kissed her deeply and softly. "You know...here in our world...Undead can't birth children." He thinks for a moment out loud to her. "We have a daughter presumably you were already Undead when that happened." He told her. His sharp mind already working.

"That means, if your womb has been repaired this whole time me and you may have offspring yet." He told her gently. He wanted to raise many children with his woman. their own race. He sighed happily as he held her. "Put me inside of you." He commanded his woman.

[Cerna]

She nods and put him inside of her. "I had an ally back then. One who sympathized with what we scourge went through. She was a paladin. Blood elf if I recall correctly. Her name was Aelld. At least that's what I called her." She recalled of her pal from her world

[Nosdyn]

He nodded as he slid his large erection inside of his woman.

He held her closely to him. He once knew an Aelld in his younger days. He wondered if that was the same Aelld he knew. As he slid himself inside of her he growled with sublime pleasure. The pieces were coming together. His wife had many mysteries too her, but he would help her find their daughter. He already accepted her daughter as his own. He held her closely she was not barren there was more to her type of undead than he initially had considered...

He made love to his woman for hours that night...taking her over and over...he wanted to fill her womb up. He wanted to see if she could give them both child.

[Cerna]

A few nights after she turned up pregnant. But She and her mate were taking an approach that would surprise many that know nosdyn. Cerna was explaining about Kura to lady y'edda and asking the thayne if her child had been seen. Cerna may see something in for thayne nosdyn did not initially

[Nosdyn]

Lady Y'Edda looked at Nosdyn calmly. "I wish you did not hate us so." She began. She looked at Cerna calmly nodding. "Your childe, Kura I know of her location. I can tell you where she is." Y'Edda said calmly.

Lord Nosdyn had his arms folded across his chest as he looked at the Thayne woman. He looked at her with rage in his eyes, a storm was present there but he was trying as hard as he could for his wife's sake. For their children's sake. He KNEW at that point that the Undead were not barren and could give them children. He would become even more protective of Cerna and his family than before. His eyes were narrowed and the storm was ever present.

"You...would help us...? Me...despite it all?" He was incredulous.

She was showing an extreme amount of patience and understanding towards him.

"What do we have to do?" Nosdyn was showing a tremendous amount of restraint there.

Lady Y'Edda nodded at their potential allies. "To find your daughter you must..." And she explained everything they needed to know to save their child.

[Cerna]

Cerna nods and looks at Nosdyn giving A reassuring smile before continuing "we'll need a way in that won't endanger Kura in the price process" She spoke to y'edda determined to rescue their child

[Nosdyn]

As a showing of good faith, Lady Y'Edda looks at Cerna and Nosdyn. "I can get you guys directly where your child is being held and tortured. We will need allies against the coming storm." She explained.

Nosdyn considered the situation carefully. Perhaps...JUST perhaps...not all of Thayne were villains and deserved death by his hands. He looked at Lady Y'Edda calmly. His people were all present waiting on his word alone. Upon his command they would usher a new age were the living and unliving could co exist...he looked at the woman carefully. "I agree to your terms." He told Lady Y'Edda finally and Theselak breathed a sigh of relief. Nosdyn would work with that Thayne at least for the time being.

At least while their daughter's life was in danger. He was trying as hard as he could for Cerna's sake. He looked at Y'Edda calmly. "Where do we need to go?" Nosdyn asked.

[Cerna]

Cerna nods "we'll follow your lead" She told the allued thayne at that point

[Nosdyn]

In Alerar, on the boarders between Alerar and Raiaera there was a small city.

Nestled alongside a mountain range it housed the rage and intellect strategic of one of the Lesser Thayne, of which there were thousands all together plotting and scheming on Althanas. There were about one hundred cultists living there following the will of that particular Thayne. The Lesser Thayne was an entity named Cool.

In his youth, Nosdyn once encountered followers of Cool. They were a devious lot and extremely tactical. Nosdyn wore his great cloak and kept his masked wrapped around his face. He had his people with him. Thanks to Lady Y'Edda's information he knew where they had to go. Nosdyn could not afford a national crisis. He stood next to his wife. His eyes were narrowed into thin slits as he looks to the guards of the temple and he nods. "I seek audience with your Lord Cool." Nosdyn declared.

There were hushed whispers from the gathered and movement soon after. Lord Cool soon arrives...

[Cerna]

Cerna stood with her mate. She also wore a mask and her Death Knight cloak to avoid being identified as a Draenei to this thayne. While also wearing her hood in a manner where their child will see her

[Nosdyn]

Nosdyn distrusted and even hated all of the Thayne. But he knew he needed them from time to time to get things done. He looked at Cool for a long moment, he was sizing the man up. The Thayne could take on humanoid forms. Nosdyn knew this was the case and so they took humanoid forms to be easier for mortal minds to accept. The storm raged on in Nosdyn's eyes. He looked at Cool carefully. "I'll be brief to respect your time Lord Cool." Nosdyn began, he was showing a tremendous amount of restraint. "You have someone in your possession we are after. This persona is mine and my wife's daughter." He explained to Lord Cool.

He continued to look Cool directly in the eyes. Unafraid of the Thayne. Nosdyn awaited the man's response.

"You speak of the demi Thayne Kura." Cool began. "What you want is here...however it won't be free." Cool said suddenly. "For us to agree to give you your child you have to give me something of equal value in exchange."

Contracts. Nosdyn knew the Thaynehood dealt in contracts. His eyes narrowed. "Something of value you say? I would be willing to give anything up for Kura." He begins to undo his Prevaldia mace, his prized weapon.

Cool raised his eyebrow. "You would give up your legendary weapon in exchange for that woman?" Cool asked.

"I would give anything for her and her safety." Nosdyn handed Lord Cool his weapon. "In exchange for Kura."

[Cerna]

Cerna watched As the cult unclaimed their daughter. She called Kura to them once her hooves touched the floor

[Nosdyn]

Cool looked at Nosdyn's prized weapon and whistled for a moment or two. "Real Prevalida." He chuckled a moment after. Cool looked at Nosdyn calmly. "You know what you have to give up." Cool said. "In exchange..." He looked away to his followers for a moment and nodded. "This bargain gets more and more interesting." A moment or two later, Kura was brought to them. "You will find that she is quite interesting." Cool chuckled gently.

Kura saw Nosdyn and Cerna she ran up to her mother and hugged her closely.

Nosdyn kept his eyes on Lord Cool. "You're not like the others..." Nosdyn suddenly said.

Cool nodded. "You see, we're all very different from the Prime Thayne. The so called greater Thayne. There are many of us." Cool explained. "I have an interest in you Nosdyn. Keep things going as they are and you will make incredible progress going forward." He said. "Take your daughter and go for now. This trade is complete."

Nosdyn frowned. His world was being turned up side down. He looked at Cool carefully. "You helped us. One day I will repay the favor in kind to you Cool." Nosdyn said and nodded. "In time perhaps there can be an accord between men and Thayne." Nosdyn walked towards Kura and his wife Cerna. "You're free now." He told Kura...

[Cerna]

Cerna smiles and picks up Kura to look her over "Kura, Meet your new father. I assure you, He's a good man" She promised her softly as the mother introduced her offspring to Nosdyn while looking her over for wounds

[Nosdyn]

Nosdyn moved towards Cerna and Kura.

There were no injuries on Kura. She just seemed to be somewhat exhausted. Nosdyn thanked Lord Cool and looked at his people. "Let's get out of here." He said calmly and walked towards his people, the Undead. He nodded to them.

One of the Undead named Henk prepared a portal back to Theselak. Nosdyn nodded once more back to Lord Cool and they all made their way back home...

[Cerna]

Cerna hugs Kura tightly "I'm Glad to see you're unharmed Kura. Would you like to rest?"

[Nosdyn]

They all step through the portal to Theselak.

The question Cerna poses to Kura lingers between them for a few moments. She's not hurt in anyway what so ever and was actually treated quite well by Cool and his people.

They travelled through the portal quickly and made their ways home.

Nosdyn knew he gave up his most prized weapon to save their daughter. He didn't even have any regrets over it.

Once they arrived at Theselak, Kura walked up to Nosdyn. "My lord, you gave up something of value to rescue me. Why did you do so?" She asked of Nosdyn.

He nodded calmly knowing full well what he gave up. In exchange for her freedom. He placed a large hand gently on her shoulder. "Don't worry about it. I just wanted to save you." He said truthfully to her.

They arrived at Nosdyn's large estate. He looked up for a moment and looked at Kura. "You can live with me and Lady Cerna in my house child." He told her gently. He nodded. "I'll have to thank Lady Y'Edda for helping us." Nosdyn said calmly to them . "That will be tomorrow though, tonight is for us." Nosdyn explained to Kura and Cerna.

He looked at them both. "Let's get some rest yes." His idea of rest was far more adult.

[Cerna]

Cerna nods and on the way to the master chambers, Cerna explained everything that had gone on to Kura over the duration of their separation. She Told her that nosdyn and Cerna were married just a few days ago and that Kura has a sibling on the way

[Nosdyn]

Kura was an astute student of Lord Cool. The teachings of Lady Cerna, her mother, she absorbed like a sponge. She learned everything she needed to from her mother. The Demi Thayne spares Nosdyn a curious look. She memorized everything about his physical appearance and chosen attire. She nodded towards her mother. "We will make up for lost time." She said calmly to her parents. She knew of the demon's appetites from past encounters with them...

She kept her eyes curiously on Nosdyn. "Does my lord need anything?" She asked, for her freedom, she knew Nosdyn had given up a considerable amount for Kura' s freedom from Lord Cool.

Nosdyn nodded. He looked at Cerna and Kura carefully closing the door behind him. "We're all going to share my bed together." Nosdyn explained looking at the two woman. "For your freedom I gave up a lot." He looked at her calmly, at Kura. "You will do nicely." He said to her and to Cerna. "We have our whole lives to explore one another."

[Cerna]

Cerna nods and looks at Kura "I am aware this is different from our world Kura. But are you all right with this?" She was perfectly fine with Nosdyn also claiming their child, but She wanted to be sure Kura herself was ok with it. A instinct of being a mother

[Nosdyn]

Kura understood her mother's concerns. But she was also bound to the laws of the Thaynehood. She listened to what her mother was saying. She licked her lips gently as she looked at Nosdyn. She nodded for a moment. "I am fine with all of it. I owe our Lord a great deal." She said to Cerna and Nosdyn. She leaned against him at that point.

"Your mother is also carrying right now." Nosdyn suddenly said. "We will have a proper family soon." Nosdyn said to Kura and Cerna.

Kura knew from the sect of Thayne followers that followed Cool of such open relationships. For some reason the idea of being her father's mate did not bother her what so ever. Her parents had gone through a great deal to save her.

Nosdyn held his Kura for a long moment, keeping his eyes locked on Cerna. His eyes were full of lust. He had a vague idea of what was about to occur. He loved every moment of it...

[Cerna]

Cerna chuckles looking at him "I'll see about replacing your blade. You gave up a great deal for our child." She kisses him gently

[Nosdyn]

The Thaynehood had slowly begun to change the old warrior.

He listened carefully to what she said. He held both of his mates closely to his warm and hot body. "There's no need Cerna." He suddenly said. "Weapons are just tools for war." He stated. "My time as your husband, has changed me a great deal." He stated truthfully. He held both of the woman in his strong arms. His woman. He'd symbolically also given up his desire for warfare and battel. Replacing it with the need to keep his people and family safer. He kissed his woman Cerna for a long moment and then kissed Kura deeply who responded in kind.

They had given Nosdyn back his humanity.

Once, long ago he'd been a demon who was forced to kill off his entire house with his own hands. At that point in his older age, he had his own house and was the leader of his own city and people.

A free city.

He held the both of his women closely. He picked them both up gently and took them to their bed. He place Kura and Cerna next to one another and sat down next to the both of them.

Through Cerna...Nosdyn had changed...

[Cerna]

Cerna can't say she was much different in the past. But one thing was the same throughout.

She'd give anything for the sake of her family

She was also once a stone cold killer with boo further intent but to kill in aranor's name. But once she bore her child. There in the frozen tundra on her world, She gained an instinct she thought she lost when she died. The instinct of a mother. She also in meeting Nosdyn, had become less stone cold. She had a heart. Something she hasn't had since her death. Her child and mate had worked to return that sense of being to her

[Nosdyn]

Nosdyn held both of his women closely. He sighed. In the contract with Lord Cool, he understood deeply what he had given up. He gave Cool his weapon, but he also gave a lot more than his weapon. He gave the man his will to fight and commit tactical warfare. He sighed for a moment holding his two women close. He was surprised that Kura leaned against him and played with his long beard gently.

"Nosdyn is quite handsome wouldn't you agree mother?" She asked softly as they leaned against one another.

Nosdyn found himself grabbing both of those lovely bottoms, their asses, massaging them with hunger.

Kura kisses her mother gently. "Our lord is very stiff mother, we should take good care of him tonight ." She teased gently.

Nosdyn was silent. In him, there had been a massive transformation.

He knew. The storm within his eyes, the rage within, was now gone.

He held his two women closely to his heart...Needing both of their love and hearts.

He kisses his Cerna deeply and then Kura shortly after. Tasting the both of them...

[Cerna]

Cerna chuckles "Oh trust me my child. I know well how he is. Been with him a long time now" She said as she nuzzled her mate

[Nosdyn]

Kura listened to her mother carefully. She was an eager student and wanted to please their lord as much as possible. She followed her mother's lead knowing the older woman was far more experienced. Kura did notice something interesting though, Nosdyn was merely looking at the both of them with a soft smile on his face. Kura leaned against him, and gently stroked off his large erection. It was huge, much bigger than any other man she had ever slept with! Kura looked at her lord for a long moment. She stroked him off softly but she sincerely needed to know what was on his mind, what he was considering at that point. She played with his long and thick beard. "My lord what are you thinking of? What worldly desires do you need?" She asked him.

Nosdyn had a soft expression on his face as his women pleased him. His hands greedily massaging both lovely asses. "I have what I need in both of you." He said truthfully. "Tonight I am going to take the two of you to new heights of euphoria." He told his women. He stood up at that point on their sturdy bed. He smiled at Cerna. "Rub my sac my love." He commanded to Cerna. He looked at Kura at that point. "Open your mouth." She dutifully did so and Nosdyn slid his large erection deeply in her throat.

[Cerna]

Cerna smiles and does so. She chuckles at himsoftly "Always to the point aren't you Nosdyn. She chuckles

[Nosdyn]

The lights in their room flickered. Creating an almost eerie shadow across the three of them. Nosdyn moaned softly and he licked his lips as the two woman pleased him. He nodded gently towards his wife. His two wives. He felt tremendous pleasure from the woman who sucked him expertly off. He held the back of her head against him firmly. His moans of pleasure were loud and hungry. Sweat trickled down his blue and chiseled flesh. He was hungry for his two women.

He smiled at Kura as she expertly sucked him off. He kept himself lodged firmly in her throat. Her moans were glorious as were the moans of his wife. He considered carefully what he gave up with Cool that day. There would have to be changes going forward. He knew. But for now h e was a man getting his dick sucked. Simple pleasures mattered to him greatly his hands massaging the back of Kura's head gently. "Suck hard." He ordered his girl. She did as he commanded, soliciting more moans from him.

About an hour later he exploded hot seed into her throat, deep inside of it. "Swallow all of it." He commanded, and she did so.

[Cerna]

She smiles a bit

[Nosdyn]

Seeing Cerna's reaction, Nosdyn smiles.

Kura sucks Nosdyn off and drinks his liquid hot seed. She dutifully swallows all of him.

Nosdyn is extremely hard at that point. He smiles and licked his lips at Kura but before that was done, he smiled at Kura. "Take my erection and put it in Cerna's mouth." He ordered of Kura.

She agreed and held his erection large and stiff with both hands. After she was done swallowing all of his see, she placed his large member inside of Cerna's throat. "Suck mother." Kura said with a soft smile.

[Cerna]

Cerna chuckles and begins to do so skillfully. She was surprised to see her shy little girl taking charge

[Nosdyn]

A few days later...

Lord Nosdyn observes Lady Y'Edda. He had a confused expression on his face. Lady Kura and Cerna stood by his side as per always. Nosdyn took a deep breath and walked right up to Lady Y'Edda. "My lady..." Nosdyn began. "I am troubled by a matter that never sat well with me."

Lady Y'Edda smiled and looked at Nosdyn calmly. "What troubles you Nosdyn?" She asked.

"When I gave Lord Cool my weapon something I did not expect happened within me." He said. "I changed somehow. I gave him more than just a weapon. I think I gave my desire to fight." He was confused by all of it.

She nodded. "When dealing with the Thaynehood. You will find contracts and agreements often are much more than they appear."

He nodded. At that point he looked at Cerna and Kura. Then he looked towards Lady Y'Edda and made his firm decision. He gave up and set aside his desire to destroy the thaynehood...instead.

Nosdyn knelt before Lady Y'Edda offering his services to her...

A choice N'Jal never gave him.

[Cerna]

Cerna smiles at nosdyn and stands by his daughter. It was nice to see him put aside his personal rage and see the good in a being he once thought was an enemy. She too offered her services to lady y'edda but as she knelt to do so something happened that surprised the group. Cerna had gone into labor

[Nosdyn]

Immediately, Nosdyn was by his wife's side. Reacting quickly, he picked her up and took her form to Lady Y'Edda's side. "She's with child my lady. Please help us." He begged their new sire.

Lady Y'Edda nodded and called High Priest Crux to their side.

They began the process of delivering Cerna and Nosdyn's child.

Nosdyn stood by his wife's side the entire time. His large arms folded across his bulging chest. He watched Crux and Lady Y'Edda work on his wife. A look of concern was etched on Nosdyn's face. He noticed the Lady Kura, their daughter was by his side as well.

With the healers working around the clock, the process took three full nights.

Soon Cerna and Nosdyn's daughter was born. Nosdyn looked at his beautiful daughter she would be half undead and half demon. A hybrid. He looked at Lady Y'Edda. "May I carry her my lady?" He asked.

She nodded and handed Nosdyn the child.

"Yuna." Nosdyn whispered her name. "Yuna Kortar."

[Cerna]

Cerna was exhausted after the entire ordeal. But at the same time, She was glad the baby was born without incident. She watched her mate interact with the newborn and smiles At both of them tiredly

[Nosdyn]

Nosdyn held their beautiful child in his large arms. The rage within, the storm in his eyes had been taken away to calm cinders, ashes of the fury they once held within. He held their child closely, his large arms wrapped firmly around the little one. He spoke to the little one gently, she was nuzzle her head against his beard.

He was standing right next to Cerna and Kura.

Crux was applying a few more spells upon Cerna, to assure her survival.

He held their child closely against his warm body. A short while later returning Yuna to her mother for feeding.

The sweet nectar of Cerna's breasts. Nosdyn himself often drank of it...

He sat down next to Kura he was also quite exhausted. He looked at Lady Y'Edda. "Than you for saving her."

[Cerna]

Cerna smiles and nods at them as She fed and held her child "and thanks for the assist also crux. Again you had come to our aid"

[Nosdyn]

Crux nodded gently to Cerna as she breast fed the little one.

Nosdyn approached her and ran his hand gently through her hair. He looked at Crux and Lady Y'Edda he had a calm expression on his face. Studious silently learning all he could. His hand gently running through his woman's hair. Nosdyn learned a truth that day, a huge truth about life and death. He narrowed his eyes thoughtfully and looked at the Thayne before him. "Undead are not barren as we once thought. The secret technique works in it's entirety." Nosdyn suddenly said.

Lady Y'Edda looked at him. "I know you must have many questions right now. But we will discuss this matter at length another time."

Nosdyn nodded. "Yes sire." He said calmly to her. He indeed had many questions about the situation at hand. He had no answers for what he needed answering for. In a few short hours, everything he thought he knew about life and death had been flipped on it's head. He considered the whole situation carefully. Undead could give them children. What would that mean? He thought to himself. He looked at his lovely Undead wife. His hand still massaging her hair softly. "Too many questions..." He sighed. "No answers, but the answers will come." His hand gently played with Cerna's hair. Their daughter, Yuna, rested softly as she drank from Cerna's large breast.

Nosdyn looked at Kura carefully. "Kura I have a job for you."

Kura nodded and walked up to her sire. "Yes my lord what do you need?"

Nosdyn handed Kura a letter. "Give this to my son."

[Cerna]

Cerna looks at Kura "and take Fang. He's a playful bat. But he knows his way around. He'll lead you to him" she instructed as Fang flew to her

[Nosdyn]

Kura nodded towards her parents and went on her way.

Nosdyn, deep in thought looked at Crux. "Can I take my wife home now?" He asked Crux.

"Yes Nosdyn she should be good now." Crux explained.

Nosdyn nodded. "Sorry to keep you here extra time after the wedding Crux."

The priest nodded. "It's all right I like it here anyway." He was spending a lot of time with Lady Xelldra. "Besides, I've become quite close to Lady Xelldra."

Nosdyn chuckled. "She will treat you well." He promised Crux. At that point, Nosdyn picked up his wife and their child and took her home...

[Cerna]

Cerna smiles softly as she held their new child. She again thanked Crux as they departed and leaned into Nosdyn

[Nosdyn]

Nosdyn at that point is only concerned with the well being of his woman and their child.

He carries them both to their home and takes them upstairs. He held his family in his large arms. Massaging her close, wrapping his woman in his great cloak to keep her warm and protected. He was being as careful as possible. One they were in the master bedroom, he placed his family on their bed. He gently kissed the top of his woman's head.

He wrapped the bed sheets around the two of them. "Rest loves." He said to them gently. "I'll go make us some food..."

[Cerna]

Cerna nods and rests as Yuna suckled on her breast still feeding. She was exhausted after the birth of their young one

[Nosdyn]

A short while later, Nosdyn readies the dinner in the kitchen area of their large house.

At some point during that situation, Kura returned from her errand with their bat, Fang, in tow.

She walked over towards the kitchen, kisses her Lord Nosdyn, hugs him and smiles. "My lord. I gave Tharak the letter." She said.

He nodded gently. "Come Kura, help me gather this food for Lady Cerna." He ordered.

She nodded and assisted Lord Nosdyn. They both gathered a large amount of food for themselves and went upstairs to Lady Cerna and their daughter, Yuna. Nosdyn placed the food quietly on their bed and kissed Kura deeply for a moment in thanks going back to Lady Cerna's side. He pulled Kura with them in their bed gently with a chuckle. Nosdyn's appetite knew no limits...

[Cerna]

Cerna smiles as Fang eagerly pulls on Cerna's horn. This woke her but she knew it was only her bat

[Nosdyn]

Lady Kura, their daughter, had placed Fang gently on Cerna. The large bat had proved a loyal and useful ally.

Nosdyn and Kura brought everyone plenty of food.

The food was placed in between everyone gently and he looked at Cerna in the eyes with a soft expression on his face. Notably, the storm and rage in Nosdyn's eyes was gone and replaced with something far more human in nature. It would due very well in tandem with the point that he was now a proud father of two daughters. He kissed Kura deeply in front of his wife. He was a demon, and they held largely open relationships with one another. He then proceeded to kiss Cerna deeply as well.

Smiling softly he hungered for his tow women. But his appetite would wait until Yuna was asleep. He massaged his woman Cerna softly. He fed her himself. Also feeding Kura gently. There was a gentle nature to the demon that had not been there before. The pact he made Lord Cool had changed him considerably. He took off his clothing, Kura's and his wife's so they would all be comfortable.

"Much better." He said gently admiring his two naked women...

[Cerna]

Cerna smiles softly and looks at him and Kura softly "Kura Fang didn't give you any trouble did he? He can be a prankster at times"

[Nosdyn]

Later that month...

Lady Kura sees the parcel that arrived from Lord Cool himself.

She picked up the package in silence and handed it over to Lord Nosdyn. Her father and her lover.

She knelt before the demon and gave him the package.

In thanks, Nosdyn hugged Lady Kura once he undid the package. His weapon, his prevalida mace was in the package along with a letter from Lord Cool and his acolytes. Nosdyn read the letter and nodded. That confirmed Lord Cool's destiny was entwined with Nosdyn's.

He looked at his two women.

He kissed Cerna deeply and then the Lady Kura.

Their daughter, Yuna was growing rapidly.

Nosdyn held his two women closely as he read the letter Lord Cool had given him and his people.

He knew at that point Lord Cool wished to be allies...

That would be a journey for another tomorrow.

Some of The Thaynehood could be trusted. Nosdyn held his two women and made love to them for many hours that day. He explained to Cerna and Kura what Lord Cool and Lady Y'Edda wanted. They wanted to be allies. Some of the Thayne could be trusted...

Nosdyn considered all of that very carefully...

~The End~

[Cerna]

Cerna nods and picks up her lover's mace from the box and handed it to him "there is more to the Thayne then meets the eye. But I saw no malice in either Lady Y'edda or Lord Cool. Perhaps having them on our side will aid us in some manner"

She took her man and daughter for many hours that day. Their family was growing rapidly and Cerna had another surprise in store for the demon family

~End

[Preston]

~Theselak Rising.~

If either of you would like to have any further critique please reach out to me and I would be happy to help. I am also open to discussion if you would like to discuss the feedback. Otherwise, it was a pleasure to read this thread and give the following judgement. <3

Strengths
Cerna - the opening post you wrote was very good! You put in some backstory, character, personality… just try and continue developing that and working it in. You can always put a little bit of personality, your setting, and things like that into your posts.
Cerna - It was interesting to see you had a new storyline with the kid taken by the Thayne and used that to work it into the story.
Nos - you did a good job of trying to add more to the story in your posts with narrative and setting. There could have been a lot more, as it was almost non-existent, but your posts were a bit more full so added to the thread as a whole.


Weakness
Mechanics: The writing style, of having multiple one line sentences separated, attempts to make a flow but makes it hard to follow more. I think a lot of those sentences could be elaborated on to fill in story and character!
Try to be conscious of your tense. If you are writing in past tense (as things had happened) try to be mindful so you don’t write present tense (things are happening). It just makes the reader get caught off guard a little.
There were a lot of general grammatical mistakes, missing punctuation and misused words or capitalization that was unnecessary.
Why is Y’edda there in the thread? I understand you want to incorporate the Thayne in your story, but this didn’t make any sense. In your following posts you mentioned that she didn’t know she was in danger… she’s a Thayne (a god) what danger? - an additional aside, Lord Cool? That is like Freeza saga DBZ names that doesn’t fit.I literally don’t know how this character fits with anything at all…
Story: Nos, towards the end when you start writing about having relations with not only Cerna but her daughter, together and at the same time… I get this is a mature thread, and I’m not judging, but it was not only out of place but was not written well to the point where I was, as a reader, cringing.



Stars

Overall, with the star system I would give this thread a 2/10

Rewards

Cerna - 320 exp | 50 gold

Nos - 1100 exp | 50 gold

[Preston]

Exp and GP added.

Nos is now level 9

Cerna is now level 3