Ricter Wulf LVL 1

Name: Ricter Wulf

Age: 25

Race: Kitsune

Appearance:
He has dark red-brown fur covering most of his body with cream fur on his belly, arms up to his elbows, and legs up to his knees. He has a lean build with a long fluffy tail. His eyes are a softly glowing blue-gold.

Personality:
He tends to be a bit of a jokester, always keeping a grin on peoples faces, even in stressful situations. He doesn't put up with stupidity very well and can be seen as "snarky". He isn't trustful of people, being raised by bandits has taught him to always be wary of peoples intentions.

Equipment:
He wields an Oak staff with an iron blade on the bottom, a remnant from his lost parents. He wears a light, loose fur robe allowing easy movent and doesn't impede his ability to wield his staff and magic.

Skills:
Staff/Blade Combat Proficiency
Elemental Affinity
Spell Scribing

Abilities:
Fire magic-lvl 1 (basic firebolt (the size of a volleyball, on impact it explodes hitting with the force of a heavy kick enough to push a body of similar size and a little heavier, back a few steps in a 8' feet radius. The explosion hits harder the closer to the center, about 3 feet, and is like a fullbody tackle to the gut, knocking several targets prone .) and firestrike (magic melee atk that sheaths the blade of his staff in flames, allowing his cuts to be partially seared or igniting clothing)

Water magic-lvl 1 (Water wall (able to erect a wall of water about 4' feet wide and 3" inches thick, enough to slow some projectiles, giving time to dodge) and water blade (a crescent blade of pressured water (thin as a chopping hand and about 3'feet wide) , shot as a projectile and has the cutting power of a sharp iron sword)

Kitsune Prowess- Enhanced Agility (enhanced reflexes and reactions. Using his bestial instincts for survival, he is able to telegraph a strike and react faster than an average adventurer, leading him to move a fast enough to evade a sword strike.)

Background / History:
His parents had left Akashima when he was very young. During their travels, their wagon was attacked by dark elf bandits on the edge of the Ettenmire region. His parents had perished during the encounter, but before his mother had been cut down, she had hid him in the undergrowth. A bandit had found him, of course, due to his crying. The bandit had took pity on him and took him to raise among their group. As he grew, he had discovered his ability with fire and water magic. His adoptive father had gifted the staff his true father had wielded back then, the bandit holding onto it (being unable to sell the weapon). Once Ricter had come of age, he had left the bandit group, looking to make his own way using his talents.

Welcome to Althanas! This looks like a good start, but could you expand on Ricter's abilities a bit? Try to give me an idea of how powerful his magic is and how enhanced his agility is.

I'd also encourage you to expand on his personality and history a bit. That isn't necessary for you to get approved, but it'll help guide you as you start writing on Althanas.

ok ive edited it, hopefully i did what was asked lol

Thanks! That's helpful, but could you add more detail such as how big/damaging the magic attacks can be, and how enhanced the agility is?

Im still new to all this lol so i hope this works this time

Looks good. Thanks, and enjoy Althanas!