So, delete the throwing up sentence at the end? That's an easy tweak, lol.
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So, delete the throwing up sentence at the end? That's an easy tweak, lol.
How's that look?
Looks good!
Another post filled with angst amd zero setting coming up! :D
Anyone want to write a thread with Hanuh? I might start an open thread in Stonevale or something.
Replied, Yvonne! Wow, that post was dramatic...
Such awesome Fel. Here's the point where we get the character development you asked for at the start of this thread, 9 pages ago, haha. We've come a long way. I knew we could do it! *high five from a dwarf?*
That poor Drakari service assistant, dude, he be having a bad day.
Poor drakari! xD Poor little fellow!
Yes! Character development! It leaves a window for Yvonne's development too! She now knows Felicity is pretty much the living vessel of an uncontrollable magical power, and the very paranoia that had her screaming at that Fae guide at the beginning may very well act up again. I'm so pumped for the rest of this thread!
It's like 5:39am here but I've gotta get outta bed and write the next post. Yvonne's inner turmoil over this be threatening ta tear me apart, lol.
Wow, your post was amazing! Blew me away! I loved it!
And I replied! Hope the mild bunnying is okay. Yvonne wins xD And Felicity zonked out.
Teehee, yer, kinda blew myself away with that one. Like I said, had ta exorcise it all early this morning. It had ta be written.
I don't mind the barely-bunnying. It adds effect.
I'm tentative to continue the thread much further. We should finish on a high note, hey? What should I do ta round it out? Could have the drakari help Yvonne carry Felicity to the outskirts of Donnalaich, make a little camp and makeshift bed to help Fel eat and recover. I'm sure we could improvise a stretcher, hehe. Unless you had a better finale?
It looks awesome! Want to submit it for judgement now? Would you prefer workshop or moderator judgement? I think I have the AP to submit it for a full judgement and really, this thread is good enough for one! Up to you :)
Yea, I'm keen to see how these full judgements go down. I'm really proud of what we accomplished, and I'd like to know anything a moderator can teach me to make the next one even better.
Go for it dear and great work by the way. We make a wicked pair.