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He grinned widely and kissed her deeply.
Making sure he moved on top of her. His erection strong and throbbing.
He slid himself firmly inside of her, filling her womb with the tip of his bulging erection....it felt like a physical slice of heaven against him.
Cerna purred as he entered her, relaxing in his embrace as she allowed him to lead
He moved slightly so she could wrap her legs around him.
His large hand resting on her lovely ass, her tail felt good around his thick leg.
He held her close and made love to his woman. He grinded his powerful hips against her. He continued to kiss her deeply massaging her gently....
She kisses back softly and relaxes in his embrace allowing him to hold her close. She was beginning to match his pace as her tail winds further down his leg like a snake on a branch. The tail squeezed and relaxes around his leg as it winds around
Feeling the sensation of her tail constricting around his leg made him growl with hungry pleasure.
They'd been at it for a few hours by that point already. He took his mate. He placed his fists against the ground gently thrusting into her hard. His large erection deeply inside of her.
He kissed her deeply the whole time. And once the constriction of her tail reached a certain apex he growled loudly with pleasure and released hot seed into her undead womb in several large bursts. He holds her close as he releases calling her name in her ears gently. His hand massaging her hair and and lower back. He thrusted into her slower after he released, holding her closely...
Cerna relaxes softly and loans against him, panting softly she still kept her tall winding around his leg
Her constricting tail drove him mad with pleasure.
He was no stranger to pain.
He held her close as she tightened herself around his leg...
The constriction felt extremely good and a short while later he released into her once more. He gave her a lot of hot seed that night taking her repeatedly. He was considering using that secret technique on her but it would happen later, with her permission. He held her close as they made love to one another. He took her repeatedly that night...knowing he was good for it.
A few days later they would be ready to return to Tular Plains...home.
~The End...~
Cerna was packing up the tent and their supplies to make the Journey to Tular Plains. She was ready to move onwards as she stood by Nosdyn. She knew there was gonna be many challenges ahead, But she was no stranger to this. She would be ready no matter what. Nosdyn had given her a sense of a renewed life. She didn't want to be the one to squander it.
~End
Judgement
Hey guys, I’m going to be taking this thread for judgment with the star scale as requested (basic judgment). I want to start with a bit of a preface to the judgment though and say that this thread is 38 posts long, and it reads almost the exact same as the first 30+ posts of Death Undone. The phrasing is the same, the opening is the same, there really isn’t much that differentiated the two threads other than the fact that this one diverged into intimacy between two characters and the other continued on towards a story. That being said, here’s the commentary:
Pros -
- I’m glad you enjoyed knocking out some posts and getting a thread completed!
- The first 10-12 posts had a bit of writing that expressed the characters a little, so I could at least get an idea of the background for Cerna.
Cons -
- Due to the fact that there was almost no character background or information, it was hard to understand the interaction between the two. I wasn’t sure how they met, why they were where they were… etc
- There really was no plot to this thread, which means that there was no story and in the end it didn’t feel like I read anything that connected to your characters.
- I mentioned it in the beginning, but this was almost post-by-post the same opening to Death Undone, so the thread itself didn’t make sense as a standalone thread.
Final Score: **
Rewards:
Cerna: 850 exp (includes the 1.5 bonus for Stonevale) | 75 gp
Nosdyn: 865 exp | 75 gp
Rewards were added.
Welcome to Level 2 Cerna!