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  1. #1
    Newcomer

    EXP: 12,400, Level: 4
    Level completed: 68%, EXP required for next Level: 1,600
    Level completed: 68%,
    EXP required for next Level: 1,600



    GP
    345

    Name
    MetalDrago
    Location
    Corone

    Reborn - MetalDrago Level 4 Remastered

    (I was Level 4 with 12,500 EXP and 345 GP - http://www.althanas.com/oldworld/sho...9-It-Continues ) I will be completing redoing his abilities from scratch due to the shift in his story going forward.

    Name: MetalDrago Scorpius
    Age: Irrelevant

    Appearance: A draconic individual with dirty gray-silver scales, white hair, and emerald eyes. He stands roughly 6'6" tall and exhudes the lack of respect for the world around him that would be expected of someone who has been abandoned by his gods multiple times. His flesh is sunken in around his bones, and where there is no flesh, eldritch aqua green energy pours through, indicating the unnatural means through which he is allowed to remain in this world. Hidden behind his shell-like armor breastplate is an orb of solidified magic that he guards as though his unlife depends on it.

    Deteriorated horns sprout from his head and white-silver hair flows down his back between a pair of ancient looking wings filled with holes. His emerald green eyes appear soulless and broken, as though the person within them doesn't register a single thing going on around them.
    Personality: At one time, Drago was an exuberant individual with a fixation on righting every wrong he came across, no matter how minor. His good nature often ended up with him as the butt of the joke, however, as though more street wise than he would make him out to be a fool or fleece him for all of his gold or items. Toward the end of his stint as a would-be hero, he encountered the powerful trio of Reiana, Terrasus, and his older half brother, Seraius. The three of them tested his strength of will and pushed him to the boundary between life and death more often than he could keep count, eventually causing him to doubt whether he would ever become a real hero.

    Enter his former master, Lorenor, who would feed that doubt and tell him to throw away his dreams of heroism for something a bit more realistic, serving a god. Particularly, the Goddess N'Jal.

    After that transformation, MetalDrago became cruel, merciless, and swift to take out his anger on subordinates, particularly those he found himself with little trust for. However, he found himself again the butt of the joke as after Lorenor withdrew from the worshippers of N'Jal, the dragonian was seen as no longer a part of the group as well. He fought to stand by his Mistress's side, but was in the end subdued and sealed away for a number of years in Berevar.

    Awakened now from years of tortuous unrest within his crypt, the dragonian monster has no one to turn to, only his unrelenting desire to survive... and get even with those who worship the dark goddess. His cruelty and mercilessness, cultivated during years of service to the Dark Thayne, will serve as the beginning.

    However, MetalDrago is rarely openly antagonistic to anyone. He is combative, but tends to save that for people who either get in his way or decide they want to fight him in the Citadel. Outside of that he is rather passive most of the time. However, with his new monstrous appearance, it would not prove intelligent of him to go about in public undisguised.
    Equipment:
    Dragon’s Betrayal- A masterwork katana of some strength, it’s about as strong as Dehlar, though it has no enchantments on it whatsoever. It’s just a really good sword. It has a serrated edge made to tear into flesh and create a more lasting pain.

    Nocturne of Madness Katana – A sword with the power of madness. The sword has the ability to intensify the madness of the wielder, in MD's case, his insatiable bloodlust.

    If it hits an opponent or NPC of a lower level, it will slowly begin to intensify their strongest insane traits (if used on a PC, it will only work with the permission of the opposing character's player).

    If struck into the ground, the sword sends out a madness aura that affects a 5 foot radius to begin with, which grows by two inches every post up to a maximum of 10 feet. This effect only works if the blade is stuck into the ground, and affects everyone within the area of effect by intensifying their madness. Again, if this is used on a PC, it only works with the player's permission. All effects are temporary and cannot last longer than ten minutes, IC, or until the sword is sheathed.

    Update: As of this update, the effect of the sword on MetalDrago is entirely neutralized and it acts as a regular sword. It will be treated as such in all future updates, as his Energy Syphon ability has robbed it of its magics.

    Broken Endless Armor - A husk of its former self, in the most literal sense, the armor's protective qualities are all but diminished, only covering the dragonian enough to protect him about as well as a set of iron plate mail. The creature died years earlier from its master losing his contract with the Goddess they once both served.
    Skills: Swordsmanship - MetalDrago has fought enough opponents in sword combat he could be considered an expert in this field. The likelihood of him being caught by surprise during a straight up sword fight is very unlikely.
    Lying - MetalDrago can lie without missing a beat, and will do so to protect his interests without so much as a pause in his speech.
    Abilities:

    Energy Syphon - MetalDrago can absorb any energy he comes into contact with, from life energy to magical to even the radiation energy produced by molecular reactions. The energy is processed and stored in the magical orb located in the center of his chest, under his armor. This energy is used to extend his unlife and can be sent to various parts of his body in order to grant him a bonus to his physical abilities in regards to the limb or organ in question (for example greater strength of arms or improved eyesight and tracking in low light).

    There is a limit to how much energy he can absorb at once, and if his orb is overfilled, it has the potential to go into an overflow state and indiscriminately release destructive energy that can damage the entire area around him and could potentially incapacitate MetalDrago himself. Any energy he cannot or neglects to absorb will have the normal intended effect on him.

    He can use the ability actively about four times a day to fully absorb any energy based ability. However, any energy within three meters of his body will have roughly one tenth of its power absorbed by him passively, slightly weakening any effect it would have on him.

    Energy Projection - MetalDrago can use the stored energy in his magical core to increase his physical characteristics, as described above, but can also use it to project energetic attacks, either from his hands, his eyes, or from his weapons. Depending on the amount of power used, he can increase his strength, speed, reflexes, and senses up to eight times that of a normal person for intervals of about five minutes at a time. The energy blasts and beams he is capable of producing would be able to punch through dehlar, and could easily dent or crack prevalida if concentrated on a single spot for more than a few seconds.

    Range is limited to about ten meters.

    Dracolich - MetalDrago can not be killed by normal means. His heart does not beat, his veins do not issue blood to various organs, and his lungs do not inhale or exhale save for when he is consciously attempting to force himself to do so. The magical core at the center of his chest is his sole tie to his unlife, however, and should it shatter, MetalDrago's body will crumble to dust... temporarily. Due to the curse now etched into his body, in roughly three days' time, the dracolich will revive at the site of his 'death,' hungry and fresh out of energy.

    Undead Charisma - An ability that even MetalDrago doesn't particularly understand. Lower tier undead not directly under the control of another master are likely to consider him their new master and will become docile and obedient in his presence.

    There's no real limit to the amount that will follow him. "Homeless" undead are simply likely to follow his orders. This will not apply in competitive threads, however.

    Illusion - MetalDrago can mask his undead body from being perceived by others through use of low level illusion magic. Should a person touch him, the illusion will break. He only really uses this in populated areas to prevent people from panicking and thinking that they're being attacked by a large zombie dragon man.

    Eternity's Grasp - An active ability where if MetalDrago manages to catch his enemy in his grip, he will begin absorbing the life essence from their body, feeding his own. For every ten seconds he maintains contact, Drago's prey will weaken and Drago's own body will heal, filling in holes in his flesh and regenerating lost pieces (think the Mummy from the Brandon Frasier movies). If he ingests enough pure life energy, he can pass as a living being for up to a week before needing to "feed" again.

    When used on Player Characters they will feel their energy diminishing, equivalent to growing tired at a rapid rate. Prolonged exposure can cause signs of rapid aging

    Sword Magic - MetalDrago can imbue his weapons with any of the following elemental properties: Fire, Lightning, Ice, Darkness, or Wind. Depending on the element, Drago can swing his sword and unleash an attack based on the element. The attacks follow a straight path based on the arc of his sword swing, and will travel straight in a thin line if used in a thrust. If the blade is shoved into the ground the elemental charge will dissipate after exploding outward from Drago in every direction. He can change the element of each blade once every four posts.

    Range is 10 meters at most and he can only imbue an element once at a time. Damage is equivalent to a slash from the weapon itself.


    Background / History: Once a Servant of N'Jal, now seeking something far more for himself, MetalDrago rises once more from his sealed chamber in Berevar to claim his vengeance and grow beyond the need to serve anyone but his own interests.

    Drago was a hero, then a villain, and now he's purely out for his own selfish interests, with no greater purpose in mind than to survive and thrive.
    Last edited by MetalDrago; 08-02-2021 at 04:16 AM.

  2. #2
    Legend

    EXP: 127,650, Level: 15
    Level completed: 55%, EXP required for next Level: 7,350
    Level completed: 55%,
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    Philomel's Avatar

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    Philomel van der Aart (+ Veridian)
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    Hello there, I can have a look at this today. I will also get you levelled up again with experience etc.

    Could I just ask you to lay out your abilities a little clearer, maybe with bold as headers?

    Do you have any links to your weapons/equipment?

    Edit: updated your gold and experience points.
    *admin at your service*

    Matriarch of the Gilded Lily and of its brothels, associated establishments and the army.

    Characters:
    The family triplet: Philomel, Vaeron and Celandine.
    The god and kenku triplet: Stare, Avin and Vixen.
    The Primordials: Professor Charles and Moros.

  3. #3
    Ice Ice Baby

    EXP: 22,697, Level: 6
    Level completed: 39%, EXP required for next Level: 4,303
    Level completed: 39%,
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    Rehtul Orlouge's Avatar

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    Rehtul Orlouge
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    Ability formstting done. As far as the weapons they're in the link at the top of the page to my old profile

  4. #4
    Legend

    EXP: 127,650, Level: 15
    Level completed: 55%, EXP required for next Level: 7,350
    Level completed: 55%,
    EXP required for next Level: 7,350


    Philomel's Avatar

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    Philomel van der Aart (+ Veridian)
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    Okay doke, thanks

    I've just got a few questions to work over. I'll post them up here soon
    *admin at your service*

    Matriarch of the Gilded Lily and of its brothels, associated establishments and the army.

    Characters:
    The family triplet: Philomel, Vaeron and Celandine.
    The god and kenku triplet: Stare, Avin and Vixen.
    The Primordials: Professor Charles and Moros.

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    Legend

    EXP: 127,650, Level: 15
    Level completed: 55%, EXP required for next Level: 7,350
    Level completed: 55%,
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    Philomel's Avatar

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    Name
    Philomel van der Aart (+ Veridian)
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    For energy projection is there a limit to the range of his projected attacks? Also when he powers up an attribute is it one at a time or potentially all of them together?

    Is there a limit to how many undead he can control/have following him at all? Is it more that zombies or skeletons without a direction will follow his direction?

    For Eternity's Grasp, if he held onto another player character, what would be the consequences here? What would they feel etc?

    For the elemental attacks could I please ask for details such as range and how much damage it does? Vague is fine here. I'm happy to count it as one schooled ability.
    *admin at your service*

    Matriarch of the Gilded Lily and of its brothels, associated establishments and the army.

    Characters:
    The family triplet: Philomel, Vaeron and Celandine.
    The god and kenku triplet: Stare, Avin and Vixen.
    The Primordials: Professor Charles and Moros.

  6. #6
    Newcomer

    EXP: 12,400, Level: 4
    Level completed: 68%, EXP required for next Level: 1,600
    Level completed: 68%,
    EXP required for next Level: 1,600



    GP
    345

    Name
    MetalDrago
    Location
    Corone
    Fixed

  7. #7
    Legend

    EXP: 127,650, Level: 15
    Level completed: 55%, EXP required for next Level: 7,350
    Level completed: 55%,
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    Philomel's Avatar

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    14,025

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    Philomel van der Aart (+ Veridian)
    Age
    30 (+10)
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    Approved.
    *admin at your service*

    Matriarch of the Gilded Lily and of its brothels, associated establishments and the army.

    Characters:
    The family triplet: Philomel, Vaeron and Celandine.
    The god and kenku triplet: Stare, Avin and Vixen.
    The Primordials: Professor Charles and Moros.

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