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    Hayate Amatsukami
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    Sins of the Past (Hayate Level 4)

    Considering the Check-in thread I believe I'm done holding onto this for now. No rush on this profile.

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    Name: Hayate Amatsukami
    Alias: The Last Amatsukami, The Corpse King, Bastard
    Age: 22
    Gender: Male
    Race: Human
    Height: 5’5
    Hair Color: Long Black Hair
    Eye Color: Blue
    Profession: Sannin, Brotherhood Agent, War Criminal
    Alignment: Chaotic Good

    Personality: Hayate is true to his heritage and presents himself as an upstanding chivalrous man. Being a descendant of the great Amatsukami clan of Akashima a lot is expected of him and he tries his fullest to never disappoint anyone. In a common setting he could be found meditating in the shade or honing his skills with his sword. Though he tries his best to withhold the high moral standards of the Amatsukami he has been known to decide for himself what is right and wrong and act on his own personal beliefs.

    Appearance: Hayate is a tall slender man standing about six feet tall easily towing over many others from his village. After the loss of his arm by Hiruzen, the Shogun of Akashima, Hayate received a new titanium left arm that he wears with pride as a symbol of his past. Recently the Last Amatsukami has undergone a major wardrobe change, trading in his white garbs for a skin tight black body suit and a silk cloak to better hid his appearance. Other than his scarred face, which he can do nothing about, he tries to remain as indescribable as possible while he is on the lamb.

    History: As with many families that have lived and thrived on the island nation of Akashima the Amatsukami clan is one of the most well respected families and thought to be one of the strongest as well. In each generation there is one Amatsukami male chosen at birth to become the next head of the family and to be given the power of their ancestors. Hayate Amatsukami, born under the sign of the bull, was the first male son of the Seventh Clan leader and the next to inherit the Avatar of War from his father before him. Thanks to this Hayate was given a life worthy of a king, being waited on hand and foot for most of his youth.

    During his adolescence he, alongside of his father, participated in the Eiskalt war and this is when he learned firsthand the atrocities of war. At the young age of fourteen Hayate killed his first person, forever changing him, and continued until there was no war left to be won. The effects this had on his life were profound as from that day onward he vowed to never raise his blade for anything less than to save himself or those he loves. He vowed to be the person who changes this world and to never do anything that might hurt the world further.

    Years passed and on the day of Hayate’s seventeenth birthday he finally inherited the Will of the Amatsukami, the Avatar of War. With the passing of his father energy unlike anything he had ever felt before rushed into him and within his mind he began to hear a strange voice. This voice started off small and insignificant and for a while Hayate tried to ignore it. But soon he came to understand that this voice was his father’s, and his father’s before him. Within Hayate lived the consciousness of all the past Clan Leaders and carriers of the Avatar.

    Hayate is the leader of the Amatsukami, even if he feels it’s a drag most of the time, and operates out of his clan’s compound in the southern region of Akashima. He dreams of one day leaving this small nation and expanding his horizons across the world. Like he saw in Eiskalt, many people around the world are in the need of revolution and reform, something he believes he can do.

    In the more recent months Hayate has formed a connection with the Brotherhood, a secretive organization with ideals that line up with his perfectly. After meeting the do facto leader Shinsou Hayate began his tutelage in order to become as strong as possible. After swearing allegiances to Lord Osiris the young lord of Yukon had uprooted his family and moved them to Whitevale and continued to act as one of Shinsou personal hands and bodyguards.

    Upon arriving to Whitevale Hayate learned that his family never made it to the rendezvous with the Brotherhood. After a brief rampage Hayate was calmed by the officials of Whitevale and given his official initiation to the Brotherhood. This included a personal estate located just an hour’s walk from the Barracks. Due to his trauma Hayate awakened the latent power of his clan, the Kanashimi no me was an ocular abnormality caused by an imbalance of chemicals in their brain.

    After the events of the coup Hayate finally received Ruin’s Grasp from John Cromwell and became a complete person again and with his new prosthetic Hayate started to formulate his plans for the future. He wasn’t sure what the future held but now everything was for the taking. His first course of action would be to form a team and plot his revenge.


    Skills:

    Hand-to-Hand- Hayate is a master in this unique for of combat focusing on the use of his sharp titanium arm.

    Expert Swordsmanship- Hayate is well versed with One-handed bladed weapons of all kinds. He has shown his expertise with his modified katana.

    Assassination- In the simplest terms possible Hayate has mastered the art of the kill. He knows the vital points of most creatures and the easiest way to end a life.

    Abilities: (Tiers indicate how many times the particular ability has been upgraded since first approved on the profile. Ie, Tier 1 abilities are brand new and each additional tier indicates that the ability has been improved upon the corresponding amount of times.)

    Rise Up; Corpse King

    Ability: 1
    Duration: 7 Comp Posts
    Tier: 2

    Hayate is able to conjure a large spectral soldier which acts like his puppet, subject to his will. In addition Hayate may conjure the Corpse King and wear it like a giant suit of armor or in some cases may only conjure a small portion of the Corpse King. (Currently: Avatar stands 20 feet tall and is only able to be conjured within a 17 meter radius of the Caster. The ability may be triggered with the activation phrase “Rise up” and once activated manifest near instantly. The Corpse King may be active until it is defeated in PvE scenarios and active for 7 combat posts in competitive PvP scenarios.)

    Corpse King; Mantle

    Ability: 2
    Duration: Passive
    Tier: 2

    Hayate’s Avatar has a body as strong as solid Dehlar giving it great durability and allowing it to endure much more that a regular person. In addition if Hayate chooses to summon only the skeletal rib cage or a solitary limb for a defensive measure they will be of the strength Dehlyn. (This also allows the Avatar to have a 5x strength boost compared to a regular player.)

    Corpse King; Armory

    Ability: 3
    Duration: 1 Cast Per Comp Thread 7 Comp Posts
    Tier: 2

    Hayate and his avatar possess the ability to conjure weapons that appear as hard light constructs relative to the size of the caster. (Currently: Hayate can summon any bladed or polearm based weapon which are of the same strength as Prevalida and may only have one at a time.)

    Kanashimi No Me

    Ability: 4
    Duration: Passive
    Tier: 1

    As hard as it is to put into words Hayate once described this as a form of or deviation of traditional color blindness. The world appears in different shades of grey yet whenever he is in danger said objects or forces are highlighted in bright red. He is alerted to any attacks that poses a threat to him in his field of vision immediately, granting him the most time possible to react in an attempt to avoid danger.

    Assassination Art; Reflexes

    Ability: 5
    Duration: Passive
    Tier: 1

    Through extensive training Hayate has honed his combat reflexes to roughly 3x that of a regular man. In conjunction with his Kanashimi No Me, Hayate is capable of responding to fast attacks with ease.

    Assassination Atr; Agility

    Ability: 6
    Duration: Passive
    Tier: 1

    As well as being trained in combat Hayate is nimble and agile like a shinobi should be. He is able to leap, climb, keep balance, as well as other dexterous activities 3x better than the average man.


    Weaknesses:

    Fatal Bond

    Weakness: 1
    Duration: Active
    Tier: 1

    Any damage sustained to Hayate or the Corpse King is shared between them, thus a killing blow to Hayate is also going to dispel the Corpse King.

    Sword Release

    Weakness: 2
    Duration: Active
    Tier: 1

    Upon summoning the Corpse King Yamato shatters into dust but is reformed when the ability is complete.

    Total Exhaustion

    Weakness: 3
    Duration: Until Long Sleep
    Tier: 1

    When the Corpse King has reached its limits and forcefully dispelled Hayate falls into a coma. The longest he has ever spent in one is 57 days.

    Equipment:

    Yamato:

    A blade imbued with a wicked curse passed down through his family for generations. It possesses a mind of it's own and often speaks to its owner. (Currently: Yamato is an iron quality Nodachi.)

    Ruin’s Grasp:

    A titanium prosthetic left arm made by John Cromwell to fit Hayate Amatsukami. It is completely customized with an array of modifications making it a deadly tool in his arsenal. At the elbow is a titanium wakizashi he uses to swiftly cut his foes. On the outside of the forearm is an iron quality retractable grappling hook with thirty feet worth of chain coiled within his arm. Lastly on the inside of the wrist hides a chamber from which he may reflexively fire a reloadable supply of five shuriken at his enemy as quickly as if thrown by a well-trained shinobi. Any shuriken Hayate owns can be loaded into the chamber. (Purchased Here)

    Silk Black Cloak:

    A cloak made of the finest silks crafted to be the rogue’s best friend. It easily covers Hayate’s entire frame and allows him withstand the elements a bit better than regular. (Purchased Here)

    Magin Beast Vest:

    This hard leather vest fits neatly over his wrapped chest and underneath his tunic. It is where he stows his extra shuriken hot currently loaded in Ruin. (Purchased Here)

    Shuriken Reserve:

    Hayate has on hand about fifteen spare iron Shuriken hidden inside his vest. (Purchased Here)


    Battle Dress:

    Hayate is dressed in grey tunic that has had iron plates woven into the fabric to allow for better slashing damage reduction.

    Mask of Bone:

    A ornate Oni mask carved from the skull of a direwolf.
    Last edited by Hayate_Amatsukami; 05-07-2019 at 01:55 PM.
    "Just shut up for once! What the hell do you know about it?! It's not like you ever had a family in the first place! You were on your own right from the beginning, what makes you think you know anything about it?! Huh?! I'm suffering now because I had those ties, how on earth could you possibly understand, what it feels like to lose all that!" -Sasuke Uchiha

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    Philomel's Avatar

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    Hey there!

    I will have a quick look over this and comment.

    Phi.
    Matriarch of the Gilded Lily and of its brothels, associated establishments and the army.

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    The god and kenku triplet: Stare, Avin and Vixen.

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    Philomel's Avatar

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    Hey Hayate:

    So I just have a few questions:

    In Kanashimi No Me is it just able to see things coming towards them? He is not able to slow them down or anything?

    In Assassin Art; Suppression is it complete and utter silence? In this case this would be a very high skilled art. We may need to look at reducing this.

    Phi
    Matriarch of the Gilded Lily and of its brothels, associated establishments and the army.

    --
    Characters:
    The family triplet: Philomel, Vaeron and Celandine.
    The god and kenku triplet: Stare, Avin and Vixen.

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    War Criminal

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    Hayate_Amatsukami's Avatar

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    If these answers are good I'll edit this all into the original post.

    With his adapted sight ability I envisioned it that anytime something(arrows, magic, sword swipes, punches ECT.) would essentially flash bright red when he needs to react to it. Like he would see flashes of red when he is in danger.

    And I'll go ahead and reduce it from no noise, to 50% percent less noise for this update.
    Last edited by Hayate_Amatsukami; 05-06-2019 at 01:51 PM.
    "Just shut up for once! What the hell do you know about it?! It's not like you ever had a family in the first place! You were on your own right from the beginning, what makes you think you know anything about it?! Huh?! I'm suffering now because I had those ties, how on earth could you possibly understand, what it feels like to lose all that!" -Sasuke Uchiha

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    War Criminal

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    Hayate_Amatsukami's Avatar

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    I've taken out the Noise ability entirely for this update.
    "Just shut up for once! What the hell do you know about it?! It's not like you ever had a family in the first place! You were on your own right from the beginning, what makes you think you know anything about it?! Huh?! I'm suffering now because I had those ties, how on earth could you possibly understand, what it feels like to lose all that!" -Sasuke Uchiha

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    Philomel's Avatar

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    You are approved for now. However, this is put on hold for being formalised until your EXP comes through to properly put you into level 4.

    Please let me know when this happens.

    Please do not use this profile until it goes through.
    Matriarch of the Gilded Lily and of its brothels, associated establishments and the army.

    --
    Characters:
    The family triplet: Philomel, Vaeron and Celandine.
    The god and kenku triplet: Stare, Avin and Vixen.

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    As Hayate has now hit level 4, I am approving this profile for use and archiving it accordingly.

    Any questions, please do ask.
    Old does not mean dead – New does not mean best – No hard feelings, I’m tired of being right about everything I’ve said – Yours does not mean mine – Kill does not mean die – We are not your kind

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