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    Workshop: Old dogs, new tricks

    What is the name of your thread?: Old dogs, new tricks
    Who participated in the thread?: Shinsou Vaan Osiris
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    upon the cheek of night

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    This thread has been judged but I'll leave the workshop open for another week in case anyone would like to add their commentary.
    "The breeze did not stir. The stars did not twinkle. The trees did not sway and the brook did not babble.
    For the world did not turn when Am’aleh wept, and a tear had tumbled down her cheek."


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