I've only been on the site for a few years, but I'm game.
Early me:
http://i.imgur.com/ZYiAqi3.jpg
Current me:
http://i.imgur.com/DodrFhR.jpg?1
Type: Posts; User: Otto
I've only been on the site for a few years, but I'm game.
Early me:
http://i.imgur.com/ZYiAqi3.jpg
Current me:
http://i.imgur.com/DodrFhR.jpg?1
Otto eyed the Cardo Maximus uncertainly. Many buildings on either side had the look of old rural cabins which had been renovated and expanded over the years, and well-maintained in the meanwhile. It...
Claiming for Otto, ta :)
Here, just the muffled rasp of wind and the systematic plink of water seeping through the stones. The room was small and cold, but the prior did not notice either of these things any more. He also...
I would like to volunteer as a mentor!
Think about and play with your dialogue's punctuation. In some instances it is lacking, so that speech reads like it's come out as a Hawking-esque drone. I also noticed it was cloned a bit in your...
Your PC may be a certified genius/font of raw magic/unstoppable killing machine, but they are up against a master. How is your character thoroughly trounced at their own game?
A bit belated sorry, but I hope you had a lovely birthday :)
Happy birthday, partner in crime :)
Here they were, smack bang in the middle of the orcish army's strength. Three against a horde. Not good odds, no matter how you looked at it. If only they could change it from a number game...
Or...
Absolutely. And it can be scary to submit your stuff for judgement, but the judges are there just to provide a service for you; you don't owe them anything (except patience and civility!). Write what...
As soon as the plate finished rattling, Resolve began to shepherd the children towards the kitchen sink. They formed a sort of haphazard production line; dirty dishes went in one end before emerging...
The frigid slurry kicked back against Otto's boots as he took three long steps outside the tent. It was deep night, and although the fires had been fed to ward off the cold, the ravine was still a...
I think technically I dropped out, but you missed the boat on that one. Sorry!
Forgiveness pics. Can do.
Cheers!
So I flaked on my own no-flakes thread; my apologies to all of you. I'm back and picking up writing now again, but I want to check if everyone here is interested in continuing this thread after I let...
Sorry for the wait, folks. Been hammered by uni recently, but I have been chipping away at another post. Hope to have it out in a few days!
I liked the look of The Chronicler's character sheet, so I have offered to cover the excess cost of upgrading the lance from iron to steel quality. Please see Otto's registered discount on lower tier...
Otto picked a tall porcelain pitcher up off the table and upended it over a mug, frowning as a couple of sad, lonely white drops beaded on the lip. He sighed, put it down, and glanced around at the...
Happy birthday, mate : )
It's 1996, the glorious Age of Sitcoms, and your character has the lead role in their own 'family-friendly' show. Write a quintessential scene from one episode that best shows off how they've adapted...
Everything I write is golden. Duh.
Now, I don't remember this next part very well.
I've had some rough times in the Citadel. You might well plan to kill your opponent cleanly and quickly, but they generally don't plan on getting...
Yep, was just going to say. Also: feel free to bunny Otto, everyone!
At the moment, Otto's just going to get everyone informed on what the plan is: go out of the city heading north, meet an...
The ground shuddered as though hit by a tap-dancing earthquake. Otto had barely registered the terrifying blur which blotted out the sun before it swept up Mongrel. He could just about see the poor...