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Thanks breaker, the feedback was very useful, on metaphors and narrative perspective especially.

Hey Fenn, Hyst here.

I quite liked your story. It was quite small, and felt quite separate from the larger story of your character, but with enough ties back to his search for his lineage that it...

Hey Breaker. I didn't think we included item magic with the characters abilities. Is this a recent change?

Plot
I liked the way you managed the magic and the tower. I think it is a challenge to describe the particular magic spells while managing your character and the reader. You did a good job pushing...

Raksha the Swordsman

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Real Name: Raksha
Known As: “Rak, Raksha”
Age: 16
Apparent Age: 29
Race: Seeker...

Accepting items!

Sword hit sword as Rak landed easy on the stone. Already the Seeker felt the match was going well and he lifted his sword high into the air for another attack while his opponent fell backwards. Talen...

Raksha's open blue eyes watch the youth with slight confusion. He was far younger than the Seeker had expected to be fighting, but caution niggled at the back of his mind. The tall warrior’s face...

Raksha was a creature from a race of beings known as Seekers. The Seekers were a subterranean race that lived deep underground in groups referred to as tribes. The only tribe that didn't do this was...

posted under the wrong account! Can someone delete/ archive this?

Never before had Rak been as relieved as when he walked through the gate into the Caulderbottom residence. The Seeker's pace quickened as he made his way around the house towards the back entrance...

“What?” Mrs. Caulderbottom's voice was flat and annoyed.

“Well, I'm only ten years old.” Rak shrugged and pulled his pants back up.

“WHAT?”

“I tried to tell you, I haven't reached that...

“Remember, this is the boss's girl and wife. If something happens to either of them you can not only kiss this job good bye, you can then put your head between your legs and kiss your butt too.”
...

“So what does this Caulderbottom guy do anyway? A merchant or something?” Rak’s eyes moved over the massive house as he and Vern walked slowly around it.

“Something completely unlike a merchant...

Rak stepped to the side as the one man’s sword cut through the air beside him. The Seeker’s hand was already moving instinctively and caught man in the jaw. A spray of saliva and the man stumbled...

Raksha stood straight as a little fat man looked him up and down. The tall ivory warrior glanced at the man’s bald head and then back up before it was noticed. Being stared at like a piece of meat...

Rak shifted his backside to a slightly more comfortable position on the hard wooden seat. He was sitting in a room filled by city watch and hired guards. Grim faces were the dress of choice, many...

Rak couldn’t believe the ineptitude of the watch. They faired only slightly better than the two guards and again the little kid napper had escaped. The warrior jogged towards the trapped men. The...

The Seeker stumbled backwards as fire ripped over his fellow guards. The warrior had seen many things in his travels across Althanas, but a small child like figure with a mask who was unhesitant to...

Rak pulled his coat tighter around himself to ward off the night air. The tall white warrior stepped side to side in annoyance as he looked around idly. The warrior was wearing a thick fur leather...

Rak poked the last of the firewood as it crackled away. The small shelter he and Alicia had made could just fit two people inside its quite creepy walls. The warrior had spent a lot of time traveling...

Rak grinned broadly as he slashed across the side of one of the wolves.

“That’s what I have you for!” Shouted the Warrior as he slammed his shield into another beast with a sickening crunch....

Rak looked with shock at the sudden demise of his second team mate. The Warrior had heard of the effects of extreme cold could be extreme and that in some cases people were known to have shed...

Rak had been searching for wood for a few minutes when he lifted his head and glanced around. To his shock he found himself completely along. The warrior did a three-sixty turn scanning the scattered...

The lifeless head of Tracy sank into the sand with what appeared to be a slight look of surprise on it. Raksha swished his sword a second time and sent what little blood was on the blade splattering...