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    Your Flesh, My Canvas
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    Aurelianus Drak'shal's Avatar

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    Aurelianus Drak'shal
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    Tiefling
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    So you're the judge we drop bribes to now?
    "My talent's for lying. For sticking the knife in when people least expect it. Then walking away with a smile and a wave before they even realize they're bleeding."
    - John Constantine

    "Self-control is for those who can't control others."
    - Gavin Guile

    "There are two secrets to becoming great. One is never to reveal all that you know."
    - Anon.

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    hoytti's Avatar

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    Sorish Mon Larsh
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    Coralian
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    I don't take bribe :P
    Thought
    "Telepathic Communication"
    "Yelling"
    Emphasis
    "Talking"

    Theme Song
    "Year of the Reef"

  3. #13
    Wayward Scribe
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    Luned Bleddyn
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    25
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    Human
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    Lady
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    Chestnut
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    Blue
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    5'4"/Average
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    Chronicler

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    Vignettes are judged within two weeks of the close date, though the Cell special is taking a bit longer due to a change in staff. Thank you for your patience!
    • • • art

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    Name
    Robin Mercedie
    Age
    22
    Race
    Human
    Gender
    Female
    Hair Color
    Black
    Eye Color
    Silver
    Build
    Average tall/Light
    Job
    Adventurer/Thief/Treasure hunter

    What about writing a scene were your character is out of their mind bored and how they deal with it?

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    Maul-Slayer
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    Joshua Breaker Cronen
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    Ageless (looks 28)
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    Demigod (human)
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    Male
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    Light Brown
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    Hazel
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    6 feet / 202 lbs.

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    Question about this month's vignette... does "just met" mean it must be an origins story regarding the enemy, or can it be an interpretation of any encounter with them? I ask because Cronen has two clear "worst enemies" and he met them both in quests, so I'd basically be re-writing a scene. Which I don't mind doing, but I'll do a different encounter if that's permitted :P
    ... They fell to him as prey to bluefin
    for the Jya's warriors knew not how to swim...
    13-3-2

    I wrote a book! ~ Most Suave Character 2010

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    hoytti's Avatar

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    Sorish Mon Larsh
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    Either one would do. In your case, you would probably want to do another encounter with them. But others may want to do an origins story.
    Thought
    "Telepathic Communication"
    "Yelling"
    Emphasis
    "Talking"

    Theme Song
    "Year of the Reef"

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    hoytti's Avatar

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    Sorish Mon Larsh
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    Coralian
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    Male
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    White
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    Adventurer / Historian

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    BlueGhost, the November vignette can be found Here
    Thought
    "Telepathic Communication"
    "Yelling"
    Emphasis
    "Talking"

    Theme Song
    "Year of the Reef"

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    Maul-Slayer
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    Breaker's Avatar

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    Joshua Breaker Cronen
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    Ageless (looks 28)
    Race
    Demigod (human)
    Gender
    Male
    Hair Color
    Light Brown
    Eye Color
    Hazel
    Build
    6 feet / 202 lbs.

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    Awesome! Now I just have to pick which nemesis to feature...
    ... They fell to him as prey to bluefin
    for the Jya's warriors knew not how to swim...
    13-3-2

    I wrote a book! ~ Most Suave Character 2010

  9. #19
    I'm asking you icely
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    "Ayleth" Ashla Icebreaker
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    20
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    Human/ Elf Hybrid
    Gender
    Female
    Hair Color
    Black
    Eye Color
    Blue in the left, dark brown in the right
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    5'6" / 109
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    Vigilante

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    (New ideas I'm throwing around. *Hurdles the following towards Hoytti* "CATCH!")

    - Your character meets their alternative selves. They have all the same traits and powers as them, but they have the opposite personalities of the real one. (Meaning that if your character is good, the alternate one is evil.)
    - Zoom forward in time to you character exactly thirty years later. How have they changed? Are they the same? How did they grow, mentally and physically. Or are they just dead by then?
    - Your character meets their author (YOU!) what do they do? Thank you? Try to kill you?
    - Practice battle!! Your character goes to the citadel to have a training experience: there are fifty foes in the arena, how does your character deal with them? The setting can be anything you like.
    - Write a song/ poem about your main character. It can be about their personality, what they've been through, what they may become... As long as your character is the focus of the lyrical passage.
    How I Shall End my Citadel Battles from Here on Out.


    Those who are the most unlovable... are those who need loved the most.
    A misguided anti-hero who only wanted to make the world a better place - but did it wrong.
    ...

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    Fox Owen Xavier's Avatar

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    Fox Owen Xavier
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    22
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    Kitsune
    Gender
    Male
    Hair Color
    Fox Red
    Eye Color
    Light brown
    Build
    5'4 / 120 pounds
    Job
    Potion Crafter

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    (Haven't seen the previous ones so not sure if these are repeats)

    • Your character is being interviewed for a newspaper article. What would your character like to say for their best points? Does he/she/it have plans for the future?
    • What is your character's biggest dream? What is his/her/its deepest desire?
    • What is your character's greatest fear? Is it his/her/its worst enemy or something else? Becoming powerless? Dying?
    • Your character is teleported to Earth for a day. What happens? How does your character react?
    • Your character loses all abilities for a day.
    • Your character meets the inspiration(s) that created him/her/it. (I know that most of my characters are based on another character or a mix of a few different ones)
    • The town your character was going to visit was destroyed. Your character needs to find food, water, and any other necessary supplies.
    • Your character has been teleported into some mad wizard's maze. How does your character get out?
    • Magic Genie comes out of a lamp and grants a wish (or three). What would your character ask for?
    • Your character finds an abandoned child who seems to be almost dead. What happens? Does your character just leave it, adopt it, tries to find a home, has some fun torturing it, or something else?

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