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    Once again Drusilia was left to watch everything in slow motion. There was nothing she could do as yet another competitor put themselves in between her and the mage she had been fighting. Citing friends wronged by the Tiefling, Drusilia could understand the revenge motive even as the gunshots rang through the arena. Her eyebrow raised at the technology that was in this particular chamber having passing knowledge of the weapons. When Alerar was falling behind in the magic race they had turned to technology to keep up, only to find Raiaera was ahead of them in that regard, having set up what the Kyorl termed the Tech Barrier.

    To see a gun used within the Cell shocked her to say the least, even Alerar had problems mass producing firearms. She was not however gun-shy as she had at least fired a rifle and pistol once or twice and been accustomed to the noise they made. She preferred the bow for the simplicity of design, the ease of access, and the silence that accompanied the shots. There was one fact she could not deny, and that was the brutal efficiency of a firearm, and watching the warlock’s reaction she knew the man was boned the second the girl opened fire. The fact she could be so accurate the Drow owed to the fact that her opponent had tried to dodge and so the shots that would have gone astray if he had stood still slammed home into him.

    In one last bit of spite he shoved out a wall of energy and she only had time to curse before it hit her, “Shu!”

    The Drow word for shit didn't help her one wit as she rebounded off the walls of the arena and promptly began a new vomiting fit even as the shurikens and walls raced towards her opponent. Drusilia hated dry heaving but was thankful she didn't have to taste hard tack yet again in this fight. Recovering came slowly as she pushed herself to her feet even as she tried to suppress follow up heaves, forcing her stomach to calm down despite the contact with magic. It was one of the more horrid aspects of having progressed so far down the path of the Hunter, dealing with magic now actually violently made her ill.

    Standing over the mage she sneered, “That all you have? A few flesh wounds like that and you’re done?”

    "Tell you what, luv," he growled, he then managed to get on his feet slowly even as the Drow took up a ready stance. He continued, words slurred, "'ow about we shoot you a few times, see 'ow you 'old up!"

    She raised an eyebrow appreciatively as she brought her sword in for a standard slash testing his reflexes. He seemed slower but still managed to keep up even as she continued to press her advantage against him. It was no longer the test of skill it had begun as. He could fight, but was slowed and seemed to be running out of steam, “This is pathetic! I wanted a challenge not a practice dummy. I swear to the Thayne above if you let me down in the next chamber I will have your balls for a trophy!”

    "Ha! I like you, sweetness. Maybe after this, I'll give you my balls, and my entire prick to go with 'em," he tried to wink, but it became more of a wince.

    They continued to go at it but it was obvious the mage was done for. He just didn't have his tricks anymore. Frustration reared its ugly head as she brought in a kick to his chest that saw him go down in a grunt of pain. She towered over him growling lowly, “This isn't even fun anymore, it feels like finishing off a child.”

    "Finish off kids a lot, do you?" he laughed, a small trickle of blood worming from the corner of his mouth as he went for a stab with his remaining knife.

    “No, I finish off smarmy mages who think they have what it takes to upset the natural order of this plane,” Drusilia said even as she batted away the slash contemptuously. At least he was fighting to the end. She had to give him that much. She sighed as she started reciting the final rite of execution, "A l' yorn belbaunin ulu uns'aa a l' Silinrai d' Ettermire, Usstan sarn'elgg dos xuil elghinn. Gaer shlu'ta tlu nau ka'lith whol l' og'elend, l' c'nros, l' og'elend. Xuil Nindol Aster Usstan sarn'elgg dos. Xal l' phraktos inbal ka'lith pholor dosst quortek."

    "I am not," he snarled, mustering up enough will power to launch one final attempt at dousing the arrogant bitch in Hellfire, "a pikin' mage!!"

    Seeing the attempt she sent out a backhand, the inhalation being a sure sign of his attempt to breath flames upon her. Knocking his mouth askew the blaze was deflected safely away as she snorted, “Mage, whatever the hell you are, it makes no difference to me, you’re just a dead magical abomination now.”

    “Oh, you 'ave no idea what kind of abomination I am," he smirked through the pain and humiliation of defeat. His eyes lit up with inspiration as she brought the sword ready for a piecing stab to finish off the would be mage.

    “I don’t care, there’s a difference.”

    He smiled, blackened blood coating his teeth before he spat at her. Instinctively she covered her face, in worry that his blood might be acidic only to find it was not. Lowering her hand she looked down to see his blade lodged deeply in his throat, a broad grin etched in his features. His choking gasps resounded through the dome as a wet chuckle echoing in her mind. A sigh of disgust crossed her face as she looked at the last opponent in the arena, aware she may have taken too long finishing off the not-mage.

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    Permission by Aurelianus Drak'hal to bunny his death.
    Last edited by Mage Hunter; 10-03-13 at 10:03 PM.
    "A l' yorn belbaunin ulu uns'aa a l' Silinrai d' Ettermire, Usstan sarn'elgg dos xuil elghinn. Gaer shlu'ta tlu nau ka'lith whol l' og'elend, l' c'nros, l' og'elend. Xuil Nindol Aster Usstan sarn'elgg dos. Xal l' phraktos inbal ka'lith pholor dosst quortek."

    -Drusilia Liadon reciting the Rite of Execution

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    A smug grin flashed across the exorcist's lips as the bullets tore through the half-demon. Her mind didn't have room to register the third fighter still alive as she savored his shock and pain, even forgetting the empty pistol she still white knuckled in her right hand. Resolve relished her anger, thrived in it, and channeled it into the competition. Luned had always harped on her for her temper, but here, it proved itself a blessing.

    But the vile creature hadn't finished. In Resolve's moment of triumph she missed his sleight of hand, and the shuriken-laced eldritch blast caught her completely off guard. Instinct kicked in, her second and last teleportation allowance spent in her panic, but this time, the reflex came far too late.

    The girl vanished from sight just as the force of the blast slammed into her, saving her from a hard collision with the forcefield, but the worst of the damage had been done. When Resolve reappeared a few arms' reaches behind the villain she collapsed to the grass like a rag doll, unbearable pain searing through her abdomen, chest, legs, arm. Several of the savage little discs had embedded themselves deeply into her bared flesh. She screamed.

    And she knew, without a doubt, that she was truly fucked. The girl could pack a punch, but taking a hit was a completely different matter. She'd take note of that later.

    For a long moment, she laid on her back in a gasping daze, only knowing the ravaging heat of the projectiles. At this point, Resolve hurt too badly and had bled too much to inspire an attempt to stand. Her trembling hands hovered above her torso, afraid to discover the dress of gore she'd donned. Fading eyes fixed on the storm of mystic magic above her and she imagined what she must look like, a beacon of vibrant crimson amongst the tornado's wreckage, mystic blue and curdled blond strewn to make her bed. The vision nearly struck her as pretty. She coaxed a fresh will-o'-the-wisp of energy into her palms and it warmed her.

    She overheard the elf and the tiefling continue their fight a short distance away, feeling the pulse of their lives in the peripherals of her astral sense. One flickered –– Aurelius'. This didn't please her as much as she'd have liked.

    As she focused her concentration on the mage hunter, her intuition piqued as an inkling of doubt settling in her gut. The anti-magic warning went ignored; self-preservation had long escaped her as an option. Barely lifting her head to aim –– she almost needn't have, with her spare sight –– she extended her arm and sent the blast careening toward the other remainder.

    Whether it hit or not, she didn't stop there. Following the mage hunter with all her available senses, she sent blast after blast in her direction, hoping to pummel her into the ground.
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    Thayne bless it she’s going to-

    The thought was cut off as she tuck and rolled looking for the object that would save her. Another shot rocketed out at the Mage Hunter as she let her momentum carry her another roll, craters spewing forth from the earth as the woman showed her magic wasn’t just for show. Finally she felt her hand brush against the shield that had been half melted by the not-mage’s shield of flames. Coming to a halt she saw the next bolt streaking towards her and managed to get her hand into the handles of the shield in enough time to put it between her and the mage.

    CRACK!

    The shield was beyond useless as the mage continued to hammer away, the force jarring to the Mage Hunter. Glad she had a brief respite she saw the woman was hammering steadily at Drusilia with a methodical steadiness. The shield buckled again as another and another blast hit the malformed shield. If she continued to get hammered like this, it was going to shatter her arm with the repetitive force of it. Her only saving grace was it had not formed enough of a crater to compact the force, and so it was dispersed across her arm, rather than at a single spot.

    “How many fucking times can she do this?” Drusilia managed through gritted teeth as she began moving to try and evade the blasts. When a couple missed the Drow she started leading the shots causing the Dawnbringer to take another one to the shield barely in time. This was not a winning game for the Mage Hunter; the second one bolt hit her, this was going to end badly. One caress of magic and she’d be puking once more and that would be the only opening needed to hammer her with more bolts.

    So, she had to pray her aim was true. Reversing her grip on her sword she evaded one last bolt of magic, gritting her teeth as it finally shattered her arm with the shield. Lucking out that it was only the impact and not the magic itself caressing her skin as she bit back the scream, and with every last ounce of skill and strength she chucked the sword, point first like a javelin at the mage. It was then the bolt hit her, causing a resounding crack to echo once more though the dome as she took a shot to the ribs. It floored her, skidding her back as the puking fits began again, rolling onto her side in case her body had produced enough bile or stomach fluids to actually vomit even as the bolts started erratically hitting the area about her.
    Last edited by Mage Hunter; 10-03-13 at 10:09 PM.
    "A l' yorn belbaunin ulu uns'aa a l' Silinrai d' Ettermire, Usstan sarn'elgg dos xuil elghinn. Gaer shlu'ta tlu nau ka'lith whol l' og'elend, l' c'nros, l' og'elend. Xuil Nindol Aster Usstan sarn'elgg dos. Xal l' phraktos inbal ka'lith pholor dosst quortek."

    -Drusilia Liadon reciting the Rite of Execution

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    Resolve sputtered on the last of her resources when something heavy and sharp sliced through her side. The blade lodged itself in the flesh of her hip, grinding against bone and tearing through cloth. A second flash of pain hit as the unbalanced sword fell to the ground, traumatizing the wound further. She felt the heat of fresh blood as her very life escaped to meet the grass.

    The exorcist screamed again, an excruciating sound which waned into a pitiful whimper of disappointment. Her mind flooded with last thoughts, the chief of which being that she'd never died before. She wasn't sure if she could get used to the unsettling sensation, the pervasive chill. Didn't true warriors do this all the time? Did that make her weak?

    In the grand scheme of things, the elf didn't matter; she'd shot the real bastard. He'd gone down. Did that count as vengeance? No, she winced. In mere hours, the monks would work their magic and he'd walk again. Resolve could have wept with the shame of knowing she'd fraternized with the half-demon who'd terrorized some of the dearest people in her life. But some hope sparked in the encroaching darkness: now that she knew his face, perhaps she could hunt him down after the tournament for a real fight…

    "You win," Resolve choked to the mage hunter with the last of her energy, "you win! Just–– do me a favor––"

    A long moment passed as she breathed through the pain.

    "Castrate that fucker," she gasped with admirable vindication, and then fell into restful silence.

    The end.
    Last edited by Resolve; 10-03-13 at 11:20 PM.

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    Drusilia remained on her side for a moment in utter disbelief in what she had heard. She won? She had defeated every last opponent? With a grunt she felt the sting of her ribs, possibly broken from that last impact, her hand going to them even as she managed to hobble her way to a standing position. Standing up she looked about the arena, at the dead Tiefling and the dying woman. Moving over to her blade she looked down at the man before she nodded, “I’ll do you one better…”

    ~*~

    A few minutes later the twig and berries of the mage that wasn’t a mage rested in his own mouth, and she was cleaning her blades off before carefully sheathing them. Every breath was agony, but she had been in such pain before she could endure it in the meantime. Looking up at the tower she shouted out;

    “Hey, Lord Orlouge!” She waited until she felt all the eyes on her and continued, “How about next time you throw a shindig this big you wait till everyone is in the cage before you close it? I’m tired of puking up a fit every time I want to enter or leave your little mouse trap!” The supposed ally of Queen Valsharess should have certainly at least heard of the Mage Hunter project, even if he didn’t know the specifics. Even if her Queen was dead it was an insult to a former ally to put them at the biggest disadvantage.

    Moving to the edge of the arena she felt the barrier still there before she shouted out, “Drop the fucking barrier, anyone with two brain cells knows this is done!”

    The Dawnbringer had survived and as she felt the magical aura about the edges of the arena dissipate her first steps of freedom as agonizing as when she had fought the Necromancer Xem’Zund. Still the fights were easier though not any less brutal like every other time she had attempted to destroy the remnants of the Forgotten One. Moving on she continued to move past everyone before she smelled the scent, almost bringing a wistful smile on her lips.

    She could smell the acrid scent of Coronian Golds, Godhand’s favorite cigarettes. She didn’t dare break the illusion, the thought that the merc was watching her leave, with an approving smile on his face. It was childish she knew, that she could feel so strongly for the deceased leader of the nWo. He was gone, and yet he still lingered on, in her heart, at least as the poems go. This was a good first step in proving she didn’t need his protection anymore. She had survived a brutal and bloody chamber, coming out on top of two mages.

    That had to mean something, every other time she had fought the Necrosition she had been suffering from Mana Burn, this time she had managed to keep herself from amassing too much Mana to contain, and walked away victorious. She knew she’d see the odd Tiefling again, and perhaps the other mage, but it didn’t matter to her. What mattered is she managed to walk away when they hadn’t. Perhaps that’s why she had seen fit to shove his testicles deep down his throat and follow it up with his phallus. That extra grain of spite to make up for the fact he committed suicide before she could off him herself.

    She let out a brief chuckle before she leaned against a fence post and groaned in pain once more. Shaking her head she finally looked about and muttered, “Where the fuck is the medical tent?”

    Out of Character:
    This concludes Emma Chamber. Good fight guys I think we steal best in show!
    Last edited by Dissinger; 10-04-13 at 04:20 AM.
    "A l' yorn belbaunin ulu uns'aa a l' Silinrai d' Ettermire, Usstan sarn'elgg dos xuil elghinn. Gaer shlu'ta tlu nau ka'lith whol l' og'elend, l' c'nros, l' og'elend. Xuil Nindol Aster Usstan sarn'elgg dos. Xal l' phraktos inbal ka'lith pholor dosst quortek."

    -Drusilia Liadon reciting the Rite of Execution

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    I've been asked to step in and judge this chamber. Overall, it's what I expected. You sacrificed story and character development for action and pacing. I only have two overall tips. First, try to avoid descriptive pronouns in mass participation threads. While some were obvious (like "the mystic" when referring to Kyla), most were not (like Aur referring to all younger females in the battle as "chits"). I realize third person personal (or limited) is a popular writing style, be aware of its limitations in this regard. Second, don't be afraid to venture out and attack multiple folks. The thread was boring in this regard, as most of your battles molded into one-on-ones with an odd one (Gold) out.

    Because this is a tournament, individual commentary will be provided upon request only. Scoring is below:

    Mage Hunter Amber Eyes Gold Resolve Herald of the Tempest Aurelianus Drak'shal Cicilix
    Story 5 4 3 6 4 6 6
    Setting 6 5 4 5 5 5 4
    Pacing 4 4 2 4 5 4 5
    Communication 5 4 3 4 4 5 4
    Action 4 6 3 5 6 5 6
    Persona 5 5 3 6 5 5 4
    Mechanics 6 6 4 6 6 6 5
    Clarity 6 5 5 6 5 5 5
    Technique 6 5 4 6 5 6 5
    Wildcard 3 6 3 5 5 5 5
    Total 51/100 50/100 34/100 53/100 50/100 52/100 49/100

    Resolve, Aurelianus Drak'shal, Mage Hunter, Amber Eyes and Herald of the Tempest advance to Round Two!

    Mage Hunter receives 1750 EXP and 92 GP
    Amber Eyes receives 2500 EXP and 60 GP
    Gold receives 500 and 48 GP
    Resolve receives 1250 EXP and 85 GP
    Herald of the Tempest receives 750 EXP and 80 GP
    Aurelianus Drak'shal receives 1250 EXP and 73 GP
    Cicilix receives 500 EXP and 69 GP

    Congratulations to everyone who participated!
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