Lye's Art Dump

[Lye]

Just finished a commission for a friend. I hate it, but let me know what you think/tell me what I need to work on.

[Massacre]

Missing some shadow on the other side of her legs I'd say, to make it look like she's really sitting on the mushroom, she's kinda floating it seems.

Her finger gets cut off on the left side too. Overall I think it's well done, is it for anything in particular? Art always seems better when it's applied elsewhere.

EDIT: Is this digital art? Like photoshop? I think it is, it has that 'look.'

[Saxon]

Wow, I didn't even notice that. Massacre, your attention to detail is spooky. Almost.. Adrian Monk like.

Anyway, other then what was previously pointed out, the drawing seems to be in tip top tip shape. Fix it and ship it out, eh? =P

[Reiko]

I like it, a fairy that doesn't look like she hasn't eaten anything in weeks. Sorry I'm not much when it comes to art. I'm a caveman with art and I just go: "Whoo pretty, Me like!"

though I do like your work and especially your furries. a bit of practice makes perfect.

[Artifex Felicis]

I have to say that you've improved a lot from when I last saw you. Good works! resists

That mushroom looks high too, kinda like a slide for the pixie. Just sort of an idle thing I saw. Maybe a little lower and more 'mushroomy' (?) would work a little better. And that was basically just me trying to add something to help you. Still good work nonetheless.

[Ranger]

I'm a fan of your art. Love it. Though I think instead of a fairy you should draw a catepillar on the mushroom, smokin' a hookah, blowing letters and such. It'd rock.

[Elijah_Morendale]

Yeah, it could use a bit of shadow underneath her bum and legs to make it seem like she's not floating...

But other than that, I like it!

[Lye]

Thanks for the comments and critiques. I'm really bad with coloring and shadows and such. I did do this via Photoshop since my ability to color is actually much better with all the cheap tricks it can do. Next piece I color I'll try to keep in mind what you all suggessted. And for the record: I HATE PIXIES! D:<

[Massacre]

Hey, all you have to do is take a mid-tone grey, set the opacity of the brush to around 15-20% and mess around with the shadows a bit.

I look forward to more work, if that's your plan.

EDIT: I hope you don't mind, but I did a little minor work on the shadows, to give you an idea of what I had in mind. I'm not very good with photoshop myself but here it is:



Click to enlarge it, folks! And make sure you click it again to have full resolution.

Also, I didn't even try to fix that finger on the left.

[Ziggy]

I'm a fan of your art. Love it. Though I think instead of a fairy you should draw a catepillar on the mushroom, smokin' a hookah, blowing letters and such. It'd rock.

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EDIT:: Very nicely done btw.