No general comments here, as I think you're both getting the hang of Althanas.

Tobias Stalt

Story - 4 (Solid introduction)
Setting - 4 (Your first post was excellent, but you lost some of the descriptive edge as the battle carried on)
Pacing - 5 (Starting in the midst of "a" battle added suspense)
Persona - 4
Communication - 4
Action - 4 (I didn't like your dodge. Though Black Shadow left the attack open ended, RP courtesy dictates you'd at least acknowledge it as an attack on your character. This is an example of where the setting can hurt your score)
Technique - 5
Clarity - 6
Mechanics - 7 (Solid writing, but I noticed a few excess commas)
Wildcard - 4
Total - 47/100

Black Shadow

Story - 4
Setting - 3
Pacing - 4 (Breaking the action to run to the forest slowed the pace of the battle down in a negative manner)
Persona - 4
Communication - 4
Action - 4 (You played through Tobias' convenient dodge well & tried to cater the battle to your character's strengths, but the actual act of running to the forest detracted from a good interaction)
Technique - 5
Clarity - 6 (Easy to understand)
Mechanics - 6 (Your spelling was good until the last few posts, then you started with the run-ons. Remember, if you can add a period and have two full sentences, you should add a period).
Wildcard - 3 (Missed two more days than Tobias)
Total - 43/100

Tobias Stalt advances!

Black Shadow is eliminated.

Tobias Stalt earns 750 EXP and 47 GP
Black Shadow earns 225 EXP and 42 GP