Great story. Writing elements made the difference here. As always, you can PM me for specific comments.

Roht Mirage

Story- 6
Setting- 7
Pacing- 6
Persona- 6
Communcation- 5
Action- 5
Mechanics- 7
Technique- 6
Clarity- 6
Wildcard- 5
Total- 59/100

Taste of Treason

Story- 7
Setting- 6
Pacing- 5
Persona- 7
Communcation- 5
Action- 5
Mechanics- 6
Technique- 6
Clarity- 6
Wildcard- 5
Total- 58/100

Roht Mirage wins, which means there will be a rematch next round!

Lye will be around to add rewards shortly.