Ah, the troubles of life...

[Cyrus the virus]

Balls of elements = Not really interesting. No offense, buddy

Not that I'm innocent of unoriginality, as I'm boring, but you know. Stop making balls of things, people.

That's my contribution

[Ataraxis]

Make squares! Or spheroids from the fourth dimension! Sharp corners and all.

[hamnat]

You have to remember that she only has one offensive spell at this point....and that it's a ball of fire. So, I expanded on that some. I would've made it star-shaped if it had been the shape of the original spell. But one spell can only change so much. Besides, balls make sense because they are infinitely symmetrical.

[Atzar]

It can change as much as you want it to. You were in dreamland. Honestly, if you brought a freaking comet down on Tshael's head, I wouldn't have docked you any points - in fact, I may have given you a point or two for originality. Who uses comets on Althanas?

My point is that you can do anything in your dreams, and I felt that Tshael utilized that freedom much better than you did. Battles don't always have to be strictly attack and defense... they can be much, much more.


Also, I'd appreciate it if you would PM me with any grievances about my judgments in the future. I'd rather you didn't complain about them behind my back like you did here.

[hamnat]

ehehe...sorry...I sometimes get a little bit excited is all...it affects my judgement rather badly. But...although it is a dream, Shenjara was actually real because of the Dreamweave ability. For instance, if she'd been killed in the dream, she would have really died. Her spells will become more potent because of it, but it wasn't a lucid-dream kind of thing. It was dream-contact with no degree of lucidity. Otherwise I could have just sent Tshael to the moon or something similar. Last point, it was Tshael's dream, not Shen's.

She could no more call down a meteor than she could in real life(not to mention there isn't really an outer-space for the meteor to come from).

But at any rate, what's past is past. I got a 53, my second score so far, and my first higher than a 50. Didn't mean to complain, just was a bit suprised. And I got some more XP!!!(even if it was a bit low, but I did lose)

[Atzar]

If this is the case, then you need to find a way to tell me IC that this is true. I read this battle with little knowledge of either of your characters, and there was no way that I could know this. That falls into Setting (adequately describing your character, not just everything around you), Action (explaining your actions enough so that they make sense), and Clarity to a lesser extent.

I'm not trying to argue, I'm just trying to tell you some of what I look for in a battle.

[hamnat]

cool....I'll try to add in some of the more relevant information when I write in the future. I was acting a bit on asumption that you knew some of these things, but I see now that I also have a lot more to learn.(^_^)

[Tshael]

Eee. That was fun, hamnat. Thanks for accepting, even if it took a few days for you to. XD And thanks Atzar for a good judging. I was surprised when you asked why Tshael was in Radasanth, but then I am very very bad at giving backstory. Don't feel bad hamnat!

And I liked the cold fire ball. It was really interesting to react to a burn and a freeze at the same time.

[hamnat]

*bows* Shenjara Flamespire, at your service(Tolkien....humor).