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    Name
    Master Narratov Dru'Sil
    Age
    430 Elven years, Was transformed at the age of 210, therefore looks 21
    Race
    Dunpeal, Elf Descent
    Gender
    Male
    Hair Color
    White, quite Long
    Eye Color
    Silver and Blue
    Build
    5'10, Weighs roughly 58 kilograms.
    Job
    Hunted. Works as a Blacksmith of Magical Arms.

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    Name:Narratov Dru'Sil

    Age: 430 Elven years, Was transformed at the age of 210, therefore looks 21

    Race: Dunpeal, Elf Descent

    Hair Color: White, quite Long

    Eye Color: Silver and Blue

    Height: 5'10

    Weight: 58 Kilograms

    *Occupation: Blacksmith of Magical Arms, Bounty hunter for hire

    *Personality: Narratov Is calm and quite well spoken, he was educated by the elfs, so one would expect as much, he has strong morales, and though he is a Dunpeal Vampire, he controls his thirst of blood around allies. Enemies do not get such luck. He is best described as Calm, Romantic and Sly.

    Appearance: Narratov stands at a moderate height, not overly tall, not overly short, he has long silvery-white hair that is hidden by his cloak, and carries a sword in his hand of in the cloak. When the sword is in the cloak, it seems to vanish completely untill he needs it once more. He has Ivory skin. Extremely pale, but still seems full of life other than the obvious vampyric traits. His eyes are amazing, They seem to be slightly like that of a cat, yet at the same time more human than any other vampires eyes he has seem before. on his chest are some tattoos, They are tribal designs of his sire, the one who converted him. He was given them on the day that his sire; the Vampire Meier Takas, Died

    History: Narratov was born as a common elf, and raised quite normally, he always loved metals, and found himself quite skilled in manipulating them with basic magic, when his father; who was a great blacksmith, saw this. He took Narratov to the smithy, and set him to work.

    One day, a Dark man entered the village, he asked Narratov to repair a sword for him, the sword was dark red and black, and has strange runes covering its entire blade. as Narratov touched it, It burst to life, and he flew back into the wall. The sword has in fact, tasted his life essence and tainted it, Making him not a fullblooded vampire, but a Dunpeal, one of the most hated crossbreeds by his society.

    Narratovs' father sadly sent him on his way, and the dark man soon caught up to him. The man took Narratov under his wing, and taught him secrets long forgotten by the elven people. Narratov grew fond of him, and on the day the man had had enough, Narratov himself ended his life with the stake. The man rest in peace at last... With the mans' blood, Narratov coated his body and As it leaked off, tribal markings formed on his chest, They have unknown meaning as of yet... This is where he is now.

    Skills:

    Bloodlust: As a Half blooded vampire, Narratov can enter a trance-like state where he loses all sense of pain, and gains incredible strength and speed boosts, this form is largely taxing on his body, and cannot be sustained without the comsumption of blood. (boost = Level +.5 times normal human More)

    Shadow Lore: This is Narratovs' Main magic type, at the moment, he has the following abilities under it: (White Skills are not obtained yet)

    Shadow Orb: Creates balls of Shadow energy used for various purposes.

    Shadow Shield: raises resistance to all magic other than Holy or Light.


    Shadow Step: Instantaneous travel between two points hidden in shadow. At the current level, range is 100 ft

    Shadow heal: By manipulating the energy held in his own shadow. Narratov Heals himself or an ally slightly, Not very powerful as of yet, It can heal completely once per day, Or numerous small wounds 3 times a day.


    Vampire: As a vampire, Narratov is stronger and faster, and cannot die by normal mortal means. He can be killed by an attack to a Fatal area (Head and heart), Burning or Sunsickness if It gets to bad. (1.25 times stronger and faster than the average human.


    Equipment:

    A Sword imbued with an obsidian-colored mineral, it glows red when blood touches it, and seems to absorb the liquid as the glow grows stronger. It has elven runes on its blade spelling the words "Blood" and "Drinker". The sword grows as it absorbs blood, and can reach the size of a Greatsword if enough is absorbed. It has other Benefits that are unlocked as Narratov levels. (Sword "Levels" with him.)

    Vampire Cloak, Resistant to Low level magic/Projectiles and Slashing weapons. It also protects Narratov from sunlights most harmful power, making him immune to its intense burning. He can, however, suffer from "Sunsickness". A disoriented and dizzy-like state where he must get in shade as soon as possible (Also "Levels"

    *Familiars: A small Imp, Capable of casting minor healing magic and creating streams of cold water, It is named "Iki"
    Last edited by Raven; 08-28-07 at 04:55 AM. Reason: Fixed Slightly Again

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    Santhalas
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    Hi Raven, welcome to the forum.

    A few questions:

    - Is the disappearing of your sword into your clothes magic in anyway, or is it part of the outfit?

    - Is a dunpeal an elf/vampire mix? I'd like to hear more about this race/type of people.

    - I noticed that you have six abilities under skills (counting the vampirism). We typically approve 0-level characters with only 2-3 skills, so is it possible you could save some for when you're a higher level?
    -The Althanas Chief Administrator and Editor

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    Member
    GP
    200 (300)


    Name
    Master Narratov Dru'Sil
    Age
    430 Elven years, Was transformed at the age of 210, therefore looks 21
    Race
    Dunpeal, Elf Descent
    Gender
    Male
    Hair Color
    White, quite Long
    Eye Color
    Silver and Blue
    Build
    5'10, Weighs roughly 58 kilograms.
    Job
    Hunted. Works as a Blacksmith of Magical Arms.

    Okay, the swords Dissapearance is not really dissapearance, It simply seems to, This hints at the cloaks inner workings, and its apparent vastness for storing items.

    Dunpeal is usually the Offspring of a human Mother and vampire father, the mother must not be converted to vampirism during the pregnancy. A Dunpeal has vampyric strength and speed, as well as most of their other powers, yet feels the lust of blood less, Most Dunpeals would rather die than give in totally to their vampire Heritage.

    This One in particular, Was tranformed to it through magic, therefore he does not have their codes of honor and views on Vampires, he doesn't mind getting his fangs dirty if need be.

    Hows that?

    The magic I can make it to be unlocked later if You wish.

    the "Skill" Vampire, Is not a Skill, But A Race trait. I Will Say he does not have the magic just yet, Other than the Shadow step if that is okay.

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    Santhalas
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    Race
    Elven
    Gender
    Male
    Hair Color
    Brown
    Eye Color
    Green
    Build
    6'4/200 Pds.

    Yeah, that sounds good. I would make your character earn/gain these skills when you reach a specific level.
    -The Althanas Chief Administrator and Editor

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    Member
    GP
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    Name
    Master Narratov Dru'Sil
    Age
    430 Elven years, Was transformed at the age of 210, therefore looks 21
    Race
    Dunpeal, Elf Descent
    Gender
    Male
    Hair Color
    White, quite Long
    Eye Color
    Silver and Blue
    Build
    5'10, Weighs roughly 58 kilograms.
    Job
    Hunted. Works as a Blacksmith of Magical Arms.

    So he is Accepted?

    And just thinking to say, Shadow lore is the skill, All those things in black under it were merely some of the spells under its book of magic.
    Last edited by Raven; 08-26-07 at 09:06 AM. Reason: ..

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    Santhalas
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    Race
    Elven
    Gender
    Male
    Hair Color
    Brown
    Eye Color
    Green
    Build
    6'4/200 Pds.

    If you describe the "Shadow Heal" in more detail, and limit the number of times he can perform it (let's say in a day), then I'll approve you.
    -The Althanas Chief Administrator and Editor

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    Member
    GP
    200 (300)


    Name
    Master Narratov Dru'Sil
    Age
    430 Elven years, Was transformed at the age of 210, therefore looks 21
    Race
    Dunpeal, Elf Descent
    Gender
    Male
    Hair Color
    White, quite Long
    Eye Color
    Silver and Blue
    Build
    5'10, Weighs roughly 58 kilograms.
    Job
    Hunted. Works as a Blacksmith of Magical Arms.

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    Name
    Santhalas
    Age
    257
    Race
    Elven
    Gender
    Male
    Hair Color
    Brown
    Eye Color
    Green
    Build
    6'4/200 Pds.

    Alright, looks good Raven. You are now approved and ready to go! I recommend checking out Scara Brae, which is our forum for new players, and the Introduction/Outroduction in the Flying Stone Tavern, which is a place to introduce yourself to Althanas OOC.

    Also, don't forget that you start with 300 Bazaar credits, which you must use within a month from now.

    Welcome!
    -The Althanas Chief Administrator and Editor

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