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    To Vipress, the explosion didn't even register. She had been winding her way through the smoke, Rask before her and his frostbitten knights beyond, their swords rippling toward the gate or after the fleeing mortals. Then, the world vibrated so much that her matter began to diffuse even before the shrapnel struck. It tore through her, leaving ragged holes that spewed great plumes of starlit dust from the exit wounds. She knew pain then, the true sense of pain that separated this material world from her own. It was a fire that burned from every wound, filling her fragile form until her entire essence felt as if it were falling backward into unnatural decay.

    She might have lost her immortal self to the cruel material forces, had the voice not reached her. Immediately, she knew it like a long awaited kiss. Xem'zund was everywhere. But, more importantly, within her. He had grown so strong. She felt the ground tremble under the push of his forces and his own power. It was as close to perfection as any one on this miserable rock could attain, and she felt, for the first time, what affect it had on the mortals. Though she was not the target, she felt the weight levied upon them, the binding agreement between will, time, and fate that they would all be destroyed. It was fear, and it was haste. If she did not act soon, the tide would wash over her and render her nothing. Or, worse, just another subordinate in his army. She had to use her own power now, despite the lack of payment the shadow had demanded.

    As awed as a newborn, Vipress opened her eyes. She saw the wreckage of the elven bridge and the newly crafted replacements. Rask stood where the old bridge had ended, howling over the bodies of his brethren. They burned and crackled while their swords lay dormant, and the ancient elves from the other bank filed over the bridge to take their place emotionlessly.

    The river swelled with an incoherent mess of rubble and bodies that had once been upon the bridge while the dark serpent shapes churned beneath, fighting the river's strengthened current because it could not froth over the earthen bridges. The living within the river had already been consumed, but Vipress saw the traces of life that animated the undead. Insufficient but priceless. She pushed her cloudy, rematerializing form to the bank between two bridges and sent a command into the water. Forcefully, the savage frothing began anew. Stone, earth, or undead, her serpents consumed it all. Then, each other, until all that remained was the lone mother as swollen as a creation god. Her form towered upward, heavy and broken and screaming until she arched her neck forward to spill the contents of her stomach upon the scarred ground. Wretching sickly, she collapsed upon the decaying pile.

    ~

    The ship's sails went limp, its crew lapsing into stillness. At the bow, the cloaked shadow stood with cowl directed at the capital. "The other side has paid its toll. Now, so shall we." The zombies waited uncaringly.

    The shadow's arms lifted its rotting hands up, only to let them fall from the sleeves like litter. Then, the cloak openned. Within it was nothing but the blackest pitch, a color beyond night or darkness. It was death, and it spread as hungrily as death does. If hearts still beat among them, they would only have done so thrice before the ship was encased, the rigging and hull torn, the zombies' bodies consumed completely. Alone, the shadow and his cargo remained, only to disappear from the frantic waves.

    ~

    The flesh, the rubble, and the serpent's head atop it all burst into flame instantaneously. A putrid, black fire that billowed forth a heavy cloud of smoke. From that tight, rolling mass, the salvaged creatures of legend emerged. First came the harpies. Not the tempting figures of bar room boasting, though, nor the mocking gatekeepers of campfire tales. These harpies were the wretched kind, wasted bodies of men stretched and crushed into the skins of vultures and bats. They were hideous and disproportionate, yet they flew with an uneven grace unmatched by living beings. A whole storm of them, over a thousand strong, swelled from the organic bonfire to blot the sky and cast the land into a shifting haze of pre-dusk red.

    When the tide finally slowed, another beast emerged from the fire and turned the most child-like of myths into nightmares. It was a unicorn, white coat souled with decay and elegant horn twisted with rot. Its eyes burned and dripped angry, bloody tears. The anger, mostly likely, was for the figure on its back, the remains of the man that had bridled it into mortality and then ridden it unto death. The man did not celebrate, though, for he was a nothing more than a legless growth from the beast's spine, his skin-smooth head bowed and broken arms holding the reins as if posed. Even in death, man could not beat the unicorn.

    Suddenly, the fire sputtered and died. The smoke shrank also, part of it condensing into a cloak that enshrouded what remained. Fair elven hands, miraculously untouched by the flame, hovered from the ashes and embedded themselves in the sleeves. The shadow moved forward, flexing and appraising its new hands, and stopped before Vipress' misty, pitted form. "You did not pay in full. The rest are trapped within, waiting," it said, the words dangerous, the tone uncaring.

    Vipress smiled despite the pain of her body coming back together. The unicorn cantered to her side and stopped, as calm and docile as if it had finally found a proper master. "Then you'll have to collect them," she said teasily as she pointed to the fleeing mortals. Without waiting for an answer, she climbed astride the unicorn, held tight to its decorative rider, and rode after the ancient elves and their enraged leader.

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    1200 harpies - Frail, quick monsters that like to pick people up and drop them from deadly heights.
    30 ancient elves - Led by Rask and charging near the front of the undead army. They will disrupt their enemies with wind blasts before attacking.
    1 undead unicorn - carrying Vipress a short distance behind
    1 cloaked shadow - moving along farther behind
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    Tyreles could only watch in horror. Through the thick flames and columns of smoke that now obscured the southern reaches of the battlefield and the river, he could not help but see the small dark shapes on the opposite side suddenly grow, forms with weapons materializing as mere shades beyond a frame of crimson. But Tyreles knew that once they passed that border, they would be much more than mere shades.

    And they were already crossing. Waves of them streamed across land bridges, placed so as to avoid the flames and rubble of the docks. Ships burned, the water churned...the serpents that had attacked the ships seemed to have become one enormous monster which flopped into the ruin of the docks and burned like a torch. But he had not time to take in the scenery...hundreds of zombies were already on the north shore. And the spiders and wolf shape-shifters were still bearing quickly. He made his decision.

    "Back to the walls! Into the gates...send a rider to Commander Law to abandon his position, ride for the safety of the city. We will sally forth again only if the Dagorathar commands it, and then we wi--"

    Every elf knew that when the Horn of Velicë was blown, it was the signal for the city to empty itself. It called the hosts to battle, it let every citizen know that the last stand was nigh. On pain of death, it could not be blown unless authorized by the High Bard himself. And Tyreles suddenly found his voice cut off by a sudden sound from the city. He looked north in wonder, speechless, awestruck.

    The Horn of Velicë Arta was blowing.
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    Power seeped through him like nothing he'd ever felt. It was a high, a rush, a screaming thrill that Caden never wanted to let go of. He built it, focused it, channeled and created a Work -- a spell he'd probably only ever be able to use once in his life.

    Assuming he even lived that long.

    The dark hordes were coming, and now was the time. Now, now he'd show them all...

    ...if that damned Horn didn't ring.

    "Retreat!" Kenvas ordered, and Caden knew better than to argue. As Wizards will, he wanted to live just that little while longer. Courage is forever the lesser half of Discretion.

    Focus it...bind it...crush it down, he thought, and did just that. Inch by inch by square meter, the light didn't fade so much as it concentrated and took a shape; an outline of a man wearing a rather pointy hat. At its zenith, it was so bright as to be painful to look at...

    ...then it blinked out.

    Just like that.

    Caden doubled over and vomited blood all over himself. In between the heaves, he still had the presence of mind to tuck his scalpel back into his sleeve. Much to his own dismay, it fell to Leister to haul him up to his feet, and a pair of footsoldiers helped to half-carry, half-drag the bloodied, metaphysically bruised Wizard from his Circle of Power.

    "Be sure," he managed to say, and his eyes were a glazed mess beneath red-tinted goggles. "Deny them...its use..."

    And that was an order some of the men were all too happy to carry out. A few stayed behind, scraping runes out of the dirt and willfully erasing magic's record from the land itself. They died screaming and in glory, with Turlin arrows lodged in their bodies as they fell.

    The world went black as they carried him all the way back to Eluriand. A lesser man would've been left behind, but Caden did them well and the Blueravens took care of their own -- one way or another.

    Caden remembered their names. All 407 of them, plus five. He would never forget.
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    MQ: Beyond the Bridge of Souls

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    Continuity ~ 6/10.
    Setting ~ 7/10.
    Pacing ~ 9/10.

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    TOTAL ~ 75/100.

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