Intermission (solo)

[Skie and Avery]

Quest Judging
Intermission (solo)

Because this was a speed thread, I hope you don't mind if I'm skimpy on the commentary.

STORY

Continuity ~ 7/10. One thing that did kind of irk me, but I didn't take points for, was that this thread goes against what's happening this Chapter at the Spire in the Modded Quest about that area. I suppose it's unfair to assume you would have done the homework, so no points taken away. It just bugs me, is all.
Setting ~ 4/10.
Pacing ~ 5/10.

CHARACTER

Dialogue ~ 6/10.
Action ~ 6/10.
Persona ~ 5/10.

WRITING STYLE

Technique ~ 5/10.
Mechanics ~ 7/10.
Clarity ~ 8/10.

MISCELLANEOUS

Wild Card ~ 6/10.

TOTAL ~ 59/100.

Homunculus gains 2282 EXP and 200 GP
Homunculus also gains the following skill:
Body Manipulation: Can manipulate body three times per thread, for ten minutes at a time in the following ways - stretch one body part up to 6 inches or give limbs supernatural flexibility. Can also grow one extra limb one time per thread and sustain for two minutes in character.

If you want this skill stronger, it must be submitted to the realm of greeting mods for approval. Also remember to link to this post when you add this skill to your profile to make it easier on the realm of greeting mod to see exactly what was approved at the finish of this thread.