Ragnarok: Livin' in Sin

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Ragnarok: Livin’ in Sin

Dissinger
Zantetsuken

STORY (16/30)(15.5/30)

~ Continuity ~ {4} {4.5}

I didn’t really get a whole lot of why either of you were there, or what the significance of the place you were fighting was. The general lack of background info threw me off at first, but the fight more than made up for it.

~ Setting ~ {5}{5}

~ Pacing ~ {7}{6}

I felt that Zan kept the pacing up a little bit better, though both of you kept it going well.



CHARACTER (18/30) (20/30)

~ Dialogue ~ {5} {6}

Zan: Your dialogue seemed too much at times, as if saying too much between attacks. It felt like you were talking because you had all the time in the world, instead of as if you were facing a powerful character.

~ Action~ {7} {7}

~ Persona ~ {6}{7}

I got a little bit more of whom and what Dissinger was, though not by much. Both of you expressed the characters very well.



WRITING STYLE (21/30)(21/30)

~ Technique ~ {7}{6}

~ Mechanics ~ {7}{8}

~ Clarity ~ {7}{7}


WILD CARD!!! {7}{7}

TOTAL

(62/100)(63.5/100)

Dissinger Wins!

GAINS/REWARDS!

Dissinger gains 3850 exp; 180 gold

Zantetsuken 1050 exp; 180 gold

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Exp and GP added!