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    A lady's touch is one to remember...

    Name:
    Mary Lynn

    Age:
    21

    Race:
    Human

    Hair Color:
    Black with blond streaks that comes down to the middle of her back

    Eye Color:
    Green

    Height:
    5'5

    Weight:
    130

    Occupation:
    Assassin/demon hunter

    Personality:
    Mary really don't have one. She kept to herself all her life. Raised as a single child since she was 9, she really don't have a personality. Just scared of almost anything that could be perceived as a threat to her life. Once she gets scared, it's hard as hell to get her back to her shy self.

    Appearance:
    Standing at five-foot five, she is your average height girl. Her hair is pure black with blond streaks hiding her green eyes. Fearing her eyes would show her some a sign of weakness. Her black hair up in a pony-tail, just down her back and not up and perky. Her top is a cotton sewn halter top. Around her neck is a locket, and inside this locket is a picture of her and her brother before he disappeared. Around her waist is a leather studded belt that helps to hold up her wallet and fanny pack. Inside the pack is a lighter, flints for the lighter, matches and a pack of cigarettes. As for her pants, she is wearing a pair of jean cargo pants.

    History:
    Being born into a poor family, Mary had a life she wanted. No one watched her when she stole from friends and candy stores. No one ever suspected her of anything. Then one day her life changed when her older brother was shipped off. Her parents only excuse was He needs discipline. That was over ten years ago. Her older brother is the reason she is still alive, and not locked up behind bars. From the day he was shipped out, she has spent all her free time trying to find out where he is, and why he was shipped out period.

    Skills:
    Above average hand-to-hand combat i.e. fists to fist. Above average ranged weapon mastery. Anger control: Once she gets angry, her strength doubles till she calms down.

    Equipment: A pair of leather gloves with a steel stud on each knuckle. Cigarettes, lighter, spare flints, matches, and a locket.
    Last edited by Lady's Touch; 08-09-10 at 04:14 PM.

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    Non Timebo Mala
    EXP: 126,303, Level: 15
    Level completed: 46%, EXP required for next level: 8,697
    Level completed: 46%,
    EXP required for next level: 8,697
    GP
    6,582
    Letho's Avatar

    Name
    Letho Ravenheart
    Age
    41
    Race
    Human
    Gender
    Male
    Hair Color
    Dark brown, turning gray
    Eye Color
    Dark brown
    Build
    6'0''/240 lbs
    Job
    Corone Ranger

    This character is a rather blatant copy of Lady from the Devil May Cry 3 video game, and I'm rather certain you're aware of it too. As we don't allow plagiarism here or usage of already established characters, I advise you to completely revise your profile and come up with a more original concept.
    "Turning and turning in the widening gyre
    The falcon cannot hear the falconer;
    Things fall apart; the centre cannot hold;
    Mere anarchy is loosed upon the world,
    The blood-dimmed tide is loosed, and everywhere
    The ceremony of innocence is drowned;
    The best lack all conviction, while the worst
    Are full of passionate intensity."

    William Butler Yeats - The Second Coming

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    Non Timebo Mala
    EXP: 126,303, Level: 15
    Level completed: 46%, EXP required for next level: 8,697
    Level completed: 46%,
    EXP required for next level: 8,697
    GP
    6,582
    Letho's Avatar

    Name
    Letho Ravenheart
    Age
    41
    Race
    Human
    Gender
    Male
    Hair Color
    Dark brown, turning gray
    Eye Color
    Dark brown
    Build
    6'0''/240 lbs
    Job
    Corone Ranger

    It's acceptable. You are approved. Thank you for your cooperation and welcome to Althanas once again.
    "Turning and turning in the widening gyre
    The falcon cannot hear the falconer;
    Things fall apart; the centre cannot hold;
    Mere anarchy is loosed upon the world,
    The blood-dimmed tide is loosed, and everywhere
    The ceremony of innocence is drowned;
    The best lack all conviction, while the worst
    Are full of passionate intensity."

    William Butler Yeats - The Second Coming

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