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    Would you like me to change them then to my own wording, because if i was to do so it would still sound pretty much the same. These are the rules the Assassin's in the Assassin's Order follow, therefore since this power group is based off of the order the same rules, punishment and everything else is also the same for the Brotherhood. i will change the wording if you wish, but the meanings will stay the same.
    "I have lived my life as best I could, not knowing its purpose, but drawn forward like a moth to a distant moon; and here at last, I discover a strange truth. That I am only a conduit, for a message that eludes my understanding."
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    We could have all told you that one was pretty obvious, at least those of us who have played the game. The biggest difference I've noticed is no Templar fighting. You guys may want to consider editing your mission statement and maybe a few other things here and there. People tend not to flock to direct copies of established groups.

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    As far as I can tell, it's not quite "you guys" as much as it's still just the one person.

    The trouble with the group as is, I feel, is that while you have got the frontend of it (the "be an assassin and kill people") part of it, you haven't thought about the back end. The games don't cover the back end because it's not as action-packed and whatnot and doesn't interest the same market of gamers.

    You have to think about the back end, about how the organization works. How does it recruit? How does it select? Where does it get its funding? How does it select its targets? Where does intel come from? Who gives it political support? &c &c

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    I have to agree with Wizard. It is important that all parts are covered. Example: Why was Abrinano Accepted when he is famous, by NPC's? He would stand out like a sore thumb.
    Last edited by hoytti; 07-26-12 at 11:48 PM.
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