... Death.

[Sekkekkyū]

Name: Smight Sekkekkyū FlameShadow
Gender: Female
Race: Dark Elf/ Demon
Age: 16
Height: 5'5
Weight: 67 ibs.
Eye color: center is red with a black pupil, outside is blue.
Hair color: Black with front parted hair blood red.
Skin Color: White pale with several small freckles on her cheeks.
Occupation: … Death.

Appearance:
Skin that is so pale it's white. Short black and blood red hair, a shadowy cloak, chains attached to her arms and legs, and a scythe. Smight could be mistaken for the Death Reaper! - Although she is not anywhere near as powerful to the reaper, not even close. Smight wears black, leather leggings, a short sleeved black shirt, and has a black leather belt with iron spikes. She has knee high black boots as well. Her belt has her quiver attached to it.

Personality:
... Death.

Abilities:
- Dark Telekinesis (Class One): She can control any of her own weapons freely from up to thirty yards away. She cannot use this on any other objects outside her chains, scythe/ bow, and sword. She can only use it three times, three posts.
- Strength: She has the strength to lift up a heavy rock and handle all her weapons with ease. She can lift up to two hundred pounds.
- I am Fear (Passive): Anybody who surrounds her feels dread and even fear to those without will power from up to ten feet away. The closed to her the more the effects of this power accelerates.

Weapons:
- Seven large, heavy chains she can attach to her wrists and ankles.
- Scythe with a curved handle she can use as a longbow if she attaches the string. Both parts of the weapon are made of iron.
- Eight, black arrows with the strength of iron.

Armour:
- Leather gauntlets.
- Leather leggings with thin, soft cloth used on the inside for comfort.
- Iron shoulder plates
- Iron ankle plates.
- Iron helmet that covers her entire face but has black glass for her to see through.

Other Equipment:
- Sturdy, iron coil to attach to scythe for bow feature.
- Black cloak with hood and vale alongside several layers of pure black cloth.
- Red pendant.
- Iron coil with clear nixstella diamonds attached coiled around the part of her scythe/ bow (scybow??) where her blade is attached.
- Black quiver that holds all her arrows and has a leather sheath attached for her dirk.
- Iron arm and ankle cuffs to attach her chains to.

History:
Classified since I'm cruel like that.

[Sekkekkyū]

For some reason this won't let me edit all the time. Like, sometimes it will but mostly it's left blank. :/ Try to bear with me while doing the approval with me please. Thank you :P

[Hysteria]

There seems to be an issue with editing for some people. Not sure why its going on.

This character looks pretty good. I like the concept a lot.

The character's strength though is seem quite a fair way above a starting character. Being able to teleport instantly to another location is something you'll rarely see below a level five character. You can either nerf it down so its really weak, or probably better lock it until a later update and pick a different ability for starting.

It is also going to sound a bit petty, but can you chance all your steel items to iron (including the chains)?

[Sekkekkyū]

I thought I already stated that all of my weapons are made of iron :/ If it was the cuffs though that got you I reduced them to iron since they also could be used as armor.

And I completely replaced dark transport with another ability.

[Hysteria]

That one is a bit better, although it is still worded quite strong. For example you could use all your items to attack at once. An example ability that you want to grow would be something like:

Dark Telekinesis (Class One): She can cause any of her weapons to return to her as long as they are within thirty yards away. She cannot use this on any other objects outside her chains, scythe/ bow, and sword. They move at a speed slightly less than a hard throw.

[Ashla]

Do you think I could make it to where I could only use one weapon at a time (one string of chain for example)? I really want to use this as an ability for attacking and not just returning them to me when I drop them.

[Hysteria]

You could limit it to one item at a time and that you have to stand still. I'd ask then that you then also remove the drain reference in I Am Fear. What do you think?

[Ashla]

Okay, I'll remove the drain part. It currently only makes people feel afraid and a little hopeless.

I can probably have it while she's standing still, it still leaves me unsatisfied though. I could remove the sword from the weapons slot though.

[Hysteria]

The issue as it is now is that she could for the entire length of the battle attack someone from every direction. Limiting it to one weapons limits that somewhat, but she could again attack from one direction while the item from another. When I compare the ability to other ones it is closest to normal telekinesis, which generally will be limited to something 'Can be used for three posts'. If you'd prefer a post limit and limiting it to one item then it would fall back into the acceptable level for a new character.

[Ashla]

So she would be able to use it three times? One post per time? I could do that. (Will edit depending on luck :P)

EDIT: Edited!

EDIT: So can I split up the posts? Like she first uses it in ppst 3, then she stops then uses it the second time post 8? Then the last time on post 16?