Hey all,
So this is a request but I'm not sure if anyone is going to be willing to take this on. Still, I thought I'd ask. Unfortunately, this isn't a sanctioned anything so I can't give you rewards beyond what I have, which at best may be some gold (assuming they let me disperse gold even).
So Orphans and I have completed and submitted a thread that was part of a four-part story. The last thread is
here. At the top of the thread are the threads that preceded this, mostly Orphan's writing and other co-authors, culminating in this final thread.
If anyone is willing, you have two options. One is to read the 4 part series and give feedback, and the other is to read all in order and provide feedback, on the whole storyline. I'm not looking for mechanics or depth of technique, though feel free to comment. I'm interested more in the big picture. How were the characters? What fell flat? What worked well? What did you want more of? What were plotholes that you saw? etc.
I'm not sure if Orphans would divvy up any gold so I won't make any promises but I can do my best. It's really all I have to give other than my gratitude. I was only involved in the 4 part story. Please let me know if you have any questions.