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This had the makings of a good battle. It's a shame that it didn't go any farther than it did.
Patois, you use present tense. While this is a refreshing change when it works, be careful not to switch between past and present. You did it a number of times. Also, I noticed a few spelling errors that SpellCheck in Word would have caught.
Izvilvin, you were a lot better in terms of mechanics. I only picked up two errors in your posts.
This is really all that I had to comment on, given the lack of completion.
The verdict: because of the Patois' disappearance during the last week of the round, Izvilvin advances to Round 3!
Izvilvin receives 250 EXP.
Patois receives 50 EXP.
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