I would say keep the boom for the next chapter.
All else a run up earthquake or two and lots of raining ash sounds all fine.
I would say keep the boom for the next chapter.
All else a run up earthquake or two and lots of raining ash sounds all fine.
*admin at your service*
Matriarch of the Gilded Lily and of its brothels, associated establishments and the army.
Characters:
The family triplet: Philomel, Vaeron and Celandine.
The god and kenku triplet: Stare, Avin and Vixen.
The Primordials: Professor Charles and Moros.