Yvonne Mythrilmantle: Wild Mage

[Shinsou Vaan Osiris]

Hi Yvonne. Thanks for posting your update!

I have a couple of questions off the bat.

Firstly, mana manpiulation. Are the spells it refers to the ones listed in your abilities, or are you referring to a general ability to manipulate earth and water upon touch? I realise you have gone to great length in the description but the clarification is needed.

The reason I ask that question is because Wild Magic (my next point of query) can use spells not in her spell book. This in itself gives me a bit of a headache, because in theory approving this would give Yvonne carte blanche with her arsenal of spells (willpower or no). I think you may have to reword this ability a bit to give an idea of some sort of limitation (I'm thinking perhaps a certain strength or potency cap on the spell). I'll let you have a think about what you want to do with it.

As an aside, just need to give you a heads up that Realm of Greeting abilities are not approvable as spoils from thread. You can link back to the thread in an update, but my understanding is you can't just obtain, say, a hurricane of fire as a spell outside of an update. Again this may affect how you want to proceed with that spell so i'll let you think on it.

Wild surge looks hilarious, but the killer on this ability is that it can affect Yvonne AND a player character so it can be classed as offensive magic. Not a problem in itself, but this reduces the amount of drawback on Wild Magic, firstly, and also does some pretty crazy stuff to an opponent on an offchance.

My thinking is this: I know that you aren't likely to use the spells that need player approval in competitive RP, so if you are prepared to accept that those abilities that need such approval can't be used in competitive tournaments (such as the LCC, Serentii, Gisela etc) or the Citadel until later levels, I'm fairly happy to let you roll with it. I understand these are an integral part of your character so I don't want to bleed too much out of it as long as it meets TPL.

Anyway, let me know what you come back with and I can do a TPL calculation and see where you stand.