February Vignette

[Tyr]

Mikael


Use of Topic- I was curious and even kind of excited to see how the community would write out this topic, and you certainly didn't disappoint. You gracefully carried me through each element I was looking for with this prompt and you even added some that I enjoyed. I had to go take a peek at your character registration to see if Mikael would be educated enough to write this remotely close to how you and I would, and I can see him having that ability. Which could of just been a coincidence. :P (Speaking of your character registration: it's been caught and we are working on getting that visible to the community again. It's definitely still there, but it seems only staff can see it right now. Please feel free to PM me for details and updates.)


Creativity- Beautifully done here. I enjoyed being pulled into your creative mind, through not only the point of view of Mikael, but through The Writer in this Vignette entry with a light and fun atmosphere. I wasn't expecting that going into this. You painted both point of views vividly without swamping me with descriptions and details throughout both worlds which was certainly refreshing.

Well done managing to keep the transition smooth without utterly stabbing the pacing which can be difficult to do with shifting worlds multiple times. I enjoyed the snippets of the personalities within the new worlds and what each were experiencing, discovering new things in both(That one with Ayveriel laughing at you and the Valentine's tribute was a nice touch). A form of love was definitely found with both. Nice job.


Mechanics- I'm not going to harp on this area due to the fact our characters were supposed to be the writer, and I can't expect our characters to be knowledgeable with Mechanics. I think you did well with staying true to your character throughout this prompt. It was definitely a fun read!


Mikael wins by default, as his was the only entry! Congratulations!


Mikael receives:

200 EXP
200 GP

Rewards Added


Thank you so much for your patience and participation! Hope to see you 'round these parts again!