Thanks for putting this up.

Firstly, I love the re-write.

Now, the one thing we don't usually do here is moderate skills, which are different from abilities in that they are effectively flavour text for what your character can do. I do usually have a glance through these anyway to make sure that there isn't anything in there that can be misperceived by the community as a disguised ability (accidentally, I might add). On this point, I just need to clarify one thing with you:

Quote Originally Posted by (Skill) Monster-Touched
– The Witch often finds symbiotic resolutions when dealing with truly evil beings. A demonic beast known for wanton carnage may be inclined to follow her directions to a new field of slaughter, and leave her unmolested in return.
My assumption here is that this is simply to ward off unwanted attention from demons in a non-competitive setting, and not a spell of "control" over an NPC or demonic race characters to gain an advantage. Am I correct?

I'm pretty happy with the rest of the profile, as it stands.