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    EXP: 127,650, Level: 15
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    GP
    14,025

    Name
    Philomel van der Aart (+ Veridian)
    Age
    30 (+10)
    Race
    Faun (+ Fox/Earth Spirit)
    Gender
    Female (+ Male)
    Location
    Corone

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    Hello and welcome to Althanas! I'm Phi and I hope your enjoy your time here!

    I'm here to help you through the approval process.

    To start off can I please ask you to move 'Ancient Counsel' to the Abilities section. This is because it could potentially be used to give an advantage in combat by way of tactics and so on.

    For your abilities 'Priestess of the Lake' and 'Water Weaponry' these are fine as stands and have lots of room to develop as your character does.

    Your ability 'Water Defence' however - could I please ask how much of the body it covers? Is it a whole set of armour or just a breastplate, for instance? Does it include a helmet?

    Thank you and regards,
    Phi
    *admin at your service*

    Matriarch of the Gilded Lily and of its brothels, associated establishments and the army.

    Characters:
    The family triplet: Philomel, Vaeron and Celandine.
    The god and kenku triplet: Stare, Avin and Vixen.
    The Primordials: Professor Charles and Moros.

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    GP
    200

    Name
    Afton of the Lake
    Age
    1022 (cyrosleep)
    Race
    Spellbinder
    Gender
    Female
    Location
    Raiaera
    Hi Phi!!!

    I updated the 'Ancient Counsel' so it's better understood what it's really meant for. I'm not one to be an asshole to write a complete advantage over another by the use of ancient spirits. In US terms, that's just a d*ck move bro

    Also, for 'Water Defense', how much armor would be allowed for it to be considered a Power Level 3 ability??

    Thanks!!!

    Afton of the Lake

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