I've made some adjustments which I'll list below.

I cut the magical aberrations down to blaspheming and bodily harm.

Added a limitation based on how far the sound of speech travels, with unavoidable potency dropoffs after ten feet. (If the sound even gets that far to begin with.)

I also added a clause that requires the speech to be heard by an individual to affect them, but with no guarantee that it will, and that the less you are able to hear (if not totally blocked out) the more mitigated the effects become.

I also added your clause about consent, which I should have written down in the first place but I'm a big dumb.

For the null,

I added the clause that powerful enough effects can ignore it altogether.

I specified the time that it takes for the null to grow to a functional size and the time it takes to maximizie.


If I still need to tweak it around to make it doable just let me know, of course. I realize this all has the potential to be busted so I'm willing to work it into something acceptable.