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EXP: 31,310, Level: 7
Level completed: 54%,
EXP required for next Level: 3,690
Hey there Duffy we've met before so lets get down to it.
First things first I love the picture medieval effigy!
All right with that out done and done let me say that your approach to setting was a lot of fun to read it really popped out of your story. The same goes for your use of the same technique to describe your character and the dialogue to support your descriptions it really shows what kind of character Duffy really is. I can tell that you are well practiced in writing being able to balance both character dynamics, setting and main character development and then I looked at your level and said "oh that's why."
I don't have any real complaints about your work it's not a wall of words, it's pacing is great, and I can't see if you goofed on any grammar or punctuation.
I know you are looking for constructive criticism but I can not give any constructive or other wise. You are a very strong and capable writer and I am out of my depth when it comes to give you any thing short of a lot of praise! Congrats.