Kratos meets Astaroth
But so much cooler
5/10
Kratos meets Astaroth
But so much cooler
5/10
Althanas' Vishnu, almost to the letter w/ a trite backstory. Only Chris' solid storywriting has prevented Shinsou from being a marysue.
5/10.
Thank god someone is judging Shin on something other than his cover!
Max Dirks is overlord. 0/10.
Same as last time/10
"I can't be proud of anything. I am ashamed of everything."
"I gave my heart, my allegiance, all my energy for this and got nothing but ashes in return. What on earth did I do to deserve being chewed and spit out like this? Time and time again, it's all the same."
Felicity Playlist.
Smollest ragechild
Cruel and brutal are the blades for the Beast
It's time to Carve and Clatter and Cleave.
A member of the NevCrew:
Nevin: Thread count: please, don't try.
Erik: Thread count: five or six. Maybe seven...
Huntsman: seven. Maybe eight. Shhhhhhh.
Telli' thread count: zero. I just can't get into writing the little hellion.
He's a hunter who hunts big, scary things! With a big scary spear! But also a Drow.
4/10
Being a neko automatically docks originality points. She's rambunctious, energetic, and seems to be an optimist. Also, (biological) parents are dead or missing cliche.
8/10 Still love your character though! Our insaniac teenage girl characters should get together and burninate towns or something sometime! B)
"I can't be proud of anything. I am ashamed of everything."
"I gave my heart, my allegiance, all my energy for this and got nothing but ashes in return. What on earth did I do to deserve being chewed and spit out like this? Time and time again, it's all the same."
Felicity Playlist.
7/10, because I know next to nothing about your character but can gather most of it from avatar and profile blurb alone.
Cocky, know-it-all street fighter, huh? Some things like the "I'm a street fighter nobody but I'd love to rule the world" and the fact that he can summon a troll adds a little bit of originality, but...
7/10
"I can't be proud of anything. I am ashamed of everything."
"I gave my heart, my allegiance, all my energy for this and got nothing but ashes in return. What on earth did I do to deserve being chewed and spit out like this? Time and time again, it's all the same."
Felicity Playlist.
Felicity is a half-neanderthal lady berserker harbouring seemingly uncontrollable magic. She gets stronger when wounded as you'd expect from a berserker, but her blood is mildly caustic and she gives off nuclear radiation. A living bomb with a temper to match but also has a scientific mind for alchemy. A fighter that probably enjoys picking flowers for potions.
2/10. I imagine Felicity to be the end result of asking the question, "How do I take the common fighter archetype and run the hell away from all the cliches?"
So I’m cutting that branch off the cherry tree.
Singing this will be my victory.
Then I, I see them coming after me.
And they’re following me across the sea.
And now they’re stinging my friends and my family.
And I, I don’t know why this is happening.
~ Thrice, Black Honey.