Nuclear Rage
EXP: 64,948, Level: 10
Level completed: 99%,
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Thank you for replying my beta thread!
Thanks for the pacing tip. I keep reading about how readers lose interest really quickly, and I feel like I have to describe things/ characters quickly or the "flow" suffers. Plus, not entire physical descriptions are needed right? But I can see your point. As for clarity, this is set in Act 2 of the novel, so sorry if stuff is confusing, lol!
I'd save full rubrics for seperate scenes added. Feels like a massive amount of time to spend a whole rubric on a single scene. I have the first half of chapter 1 for example.
"I can't be proud of anything. I am ashamed of everything."
"I gave my heart, my allegiance, all my energy for this and got nothing but ashes in return. What on earth did I do to deserve being chewed and spit out like this? Time and time again, it's all the same."
Felicity Playlist.