Got Questions About Writing Action?

[Tobias Stalt]

"But Breaker! My action scene is supposed to be elaborate and colorful, so it has to be long winded and use tons of descriptive language to make sure the audience can picture it right?"

[Niko]

"But Breaker! My action scene is supposed to be elaborate and colorful, so it has to be long winded and use tons of descriptive language to make sure the audience can picture it right?"

I feel personally attacked.

Any advice for incorporating dialogue into action, especially more fast-paced scenes? It normally feels clunky.