upon the cheek of night
EXP: 224,444, Level: 20
Level completed: 0%,
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That limitation would help... after further revision I'm also going to suggest that you put a threshold on how big/heavy Ketsu can grow if given access to unlimited blood. And, hopefully lastly, please put a time limit on how long Ketsu can remain in pieces before they must reunite. Thanks for your cooperation!
"The breeze did not stir. The stars did not twinkle. The trees did not sway and the brook did not babble.
For the world did not turn when Am'aleh wept, and a tear had tumbled down her cheek."