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    Vanatul Olornis
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    Workshop: An Arboreal Contemplation

    What is the name of your thread?: An Arboreal Contemplation https://www.althanas.com/world/showt...o)-An-Arboreal
    Who participated in the thread?: Vanatul
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    Last edited by Vanatul; 06-23-2019 at 07:02 AM.

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    Shinsou Vaan Osiris's Avatar

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    Hey there Vanatul!

    Thanks for putting this up. You weren't to know this but what happens when you submit a workshop is that the staff get a notification in the staff forums to issue rewards for this thread and once that has been dealt with, we then put up exactly this kind of thread. We close the old one and archive it.

    As you've already done the workshop setup itself may I ask you link to your thread in this post and i'll have staff issue rewards to you.

    Everyone else can comment away as soon as the thread is linked!
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    Philomel's Avatar

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    Hi Vanatul,

    Could you also please let us know if you would like any spoils from the thread (weapons etc, anything that the bazaar could provide).

    Phi
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    My apologies there Shinsou. I'll refrain from logging in and submitting threads like that in the future, my bad. I didn't even realize that's what it was asking for.

    Philomel: Uhm, no rewards from the bazaar that I can think of?

    Link is now in first post, again, sorry!

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    Thank you Vanatul!! It's all there now!

    I'll be responding to this judgement in a few days
    Matriarch of the Gilded Lily and of its brothels, associated establishments and the army.

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