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    Member
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    Storm Veritas's Avatar

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    Storm Veritas
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    38
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    Human
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    More pepper than salt.
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    Grey or Blue
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    Defiler.

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    Your character has a dream/nightmare. How does it go?

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    Radical Radasanthian
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    Otto's Avatar

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    Otto Bastum
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    Orc
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    Amber
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    210cm / 105kg
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    City guard (corporal), armourer

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    Your PC may be a certified genius/font of raw magic/unstoppable killing machine, but they are up against a master. How is your character thoroughly trounced at their own game?
    Previous levels: I - II - III - IV - V

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    Blind Lore Mod in Trainin
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    Bard's Avatar

    Name
    ----
    Race
    whatever the situation requires
    Gender
    ---
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    ---
    Eye Color
    ---

    And since its March, perhaps we should have folks write about a betrayal, particularly by a close friend or lover.
    INEED to see your vision, and the layers you apply sometimes make that difficult" (By Storm).
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    Screen-reader user, welcome, PM me with questions on how the site works with your software

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    Reaching beyond the stars
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    Gnarl
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    Your character witnesses multiple persons breaking his/hers strongest moral code. This is not acceptable. How do you deal with it?
    The Destroyer of Worlds

    Part 1: The Gnarled Roots of Osiris
    - Philomel ~ "One of the best "opening" threads by any character I have ever read."
    Part 2: The Truth we Left Behind
    -Currently writing-

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    Deliver Us
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    Shinsou Vaan Osiris's Avatar

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    Shinsou Vaan Osiris
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    31
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    Human
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    Brown
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    Gold
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    "Executor" (Leader) of the Brotherhood

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    Just a quick heads up to apologise for the wait in getting the vignette's judged. We're working on getting the old ones cleared in the next few days between us. Thanks for your patience!

    Althanas Operations Administrator



    "When we were young, was this the dream we had? We're celebrating nothing. We need to find our way back."

  6. #46
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    Ebivoulya's Avatar

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    Nyadir D'Var
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    Half-Elf
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    6'3, 220lbs
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    I've got a few ideas to toss onto the table:


    Your character interacts with a group of NPCs; write this without ever using the names of them, or their races, only describing their differences.

    Your character is captured. Create a group of new NPCs to rescue them, complete with reasons for doing so, and tie it into your character's history.

    The stakes are high, and your character is called upon, but they fail. Describe the repercussions, and how they handle that failure. -- Used already.
    Last edited by Ebivoulya; 01-05-17 at 09:37 PM.
    Sings we a dances of wolves, who smells fear and slays the coward,
    Sings we a dances of mans, who smells gold and slays his brother.


    Ebivoulya (Level 3)

    Steppe It Up (feat. Storm)
    Who You Gonna Call? (feat. Elthas)
    Low Stretches The Hand (feat. Gum)

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    Gum's Avatar

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    Gum
    Age
    41
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    Dheathain Human
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    Male
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    Black
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    Brown
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    5'11'' / 165lbs
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    Xangu Shaman

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    suggestion: base your vignette entry on a well known idiom. for example, "to steal someone's thunder" -- you could make a whole story out of that pretty easily. for inspiration check out the wikipedia list of idioms here. ty for your consideration!!!
    【LƎVƎL.3】
    👻🐆💀

    xangunationalist
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    Maul-Slayer
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    Breaker's Avatar

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    Joshua Breaker Cronen
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    Ageless (looks 28)
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    Demigod (human)
    Gender
    Male
    Hair Color
    Light Brown
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    Hazel
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    6 feet / 202 lbs.

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    With Halloween upcoming, here's a suggestion that's probably been done before.

    "Your character encounters a ghost from their past. Who is it, and how will they react?"
    ... They fell to him as prey to bluefin
    for the Jya's warriors knew not how to swim...
    13-3-2

    I wrote a book! ~ Most Suave Character 2010

  9. #49
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    Ebivoulya's Avatar

    Name
    Nyadir D'Var
    Age
    26
    Race
    Half-Elf
    Gender
    Male
    Hair Color
    Black
    Eye Color
    Blue
    Build
    6'3, 220lbs
    Job
    Murder-Hobo

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    'Tis the newest of years, so I've tossed together a few prompts in the vein of newness.


    Write in a scene in which your character learns something unexpected about themselves.
    Examples would include discovering a vindictive streak, or a soft-spot, or that they're un/suited for something.

    Create a situation in which your character tries doing something new, and describe the results.
    Examples would include a new job, new skill, or even a new hobby.


    My personal favorite, this one could be paired with something else, or stand on its own:

    Write the/a scene in a completely different way from your normal style, either switching from 3rd/1st person, present/past tense, thin/dense prose, plain/flowery style, or any combination thereof.

    There's also some unused ones posted by myself and others if you scroll up. The only used one was mine, so I marked it off.

    Gum's sounds like the most fun, though.
    Sings we a dances of wolves, who smells fear and slays the coward,
    Sings we a dances of mans, who smells gold and slays his brother.


    Ebivoulya (Level 3)

    Steppe It Up (feat. Storm)
    Who You Gonna Call? (feat. Elthas)
    Low Stretches The Hand (feat. Gum)

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    Deliver Us
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    Shinsou Vaan Osiris's Avatar

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    Shinsou Vaan Osiris
    Age
    31
    Race
    Human
    Gender
    Male
    Hair Color
    Brown
    Eye Color
    Gold
    Build
    6'0", 155lbs
    Job
    "Executor" (Leader) of the Brotherhood

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    For the next vignette, we'll be using Gum's prompt. In February, we'll go with one of Ebi's.

    Althanas Operations Administrator



    "When we were young, was this the dream we had? We're celebrating nothing. We need to find our way back."

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