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    Looks good. Thanks, and enjoy Althanas!

    Looks good. Thanks, and enjoy Althanas!
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    Thanks! That's helpful, but could you add more...

    Thanks! That's helpful, but could you add more detail such as how big/damaging the magic attacks can be, and how enhanced the agility is?
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    Welcome to Althanas! This looks like a good...

    Welcome to Althanas! This looks like a good start, but could you expand on Ricter's abilities a bit? Try to give me an idea of how powerful his magic is and how enhanced his agility is.

    I'd also...
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    Hey there, welcome to Althanas. Looks like an...

    Hey there, welcome to Althanas. Looks like an interesting character from the background you've provided. Could you put more of the character's info into this thread, formatted like this? You can keep...
  5. Thread: Althanians.

    by Breaker
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    Go crazy!!!

    Go crazy!!!
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    I am alive, I'm up for some low-commitment...

    I am alive, I'm up for some low-commitment writing on Althanas at the moment. I recently did a short story writing contest and I'm adapting my story into a novel (slowly).
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    The haze cleared from Breaker's eyes, and he...

    The haze cleared from Breaker's eyes, and he stared into a frostbite blue gaze.

    "Who are you?" he demanded.

    Across the square stood a muscular dark-haired man with a scar on his left cheek.
    ...
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    Breaker padded down the mountainside. His bare...

    Breaker padded down the mountainside. His bare feet did not feel the sharp edges of the hard rocks beneath. They beat a relentless rhythm over stone and moss alike, driving him ever downwards until...
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    Who Stole Breaker's Boots?

    The sun bowed beneath the horizon off the western coast of Corone. Breaker rose in darkness, his deified gaze penetrating the gloom.

    I'm alive.

    The realization left him confused, but grateful....
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    The situation presented an impossible...

    The situation presented an impossible opportunity.

    Breaker had not become the most feared fighter on Althanas by failing to act in such scenarios.

    Y'edda leapt off the cliff, and almost like...
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    Happy dirksday, Max Birth.

    Happy dirksday, Max Birth.
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    Rewards added. Flamebird reaches level 9!...

    Rewards added.

    Flamebird reaches level 9! (zoinks!)

    Philomel reaches level 15! (double zoinks!)

    Congratulations.
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    All of my godlike senses, speed, and reflexes...

    All of my godlike senses, speed, and reflexes became useless in the rowdy tavern. Somehow I'd failed to spot Shinsou Vaan Osiris and what could only be his latest apprentice tailing me. I also hadn't...
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    October-November 2020 Vignette Judgment This...

    October-November 2020 Vignette Judgment

    This was an interesting prompt with two very different submissions. I don't have any general comments other than that, so on to the judgments!

    Flamebird...
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    The battle is my dance, the mayhem my music, and...

    The battle is my dance, the mayhem my music, and you folks would tempt me with a ball...

    Stuck in the cramped quarters of The Foul Stench, I marveled at having finally found a place worse than...
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    [NEW] This looks fine, welcome back and approved! Go...

    This looks fine, welcome back and approved! Go have fun :)
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    [NEW] Hey there, nice character! Great to have you here...

    Hey there, nice character! Great to have you here on Althanas. I just need to get a few clarifications and adjustments on the abilities.

    For Testudo, please specify that it can only be used on...
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    Cu'Tak: The Birth of New Art

    The night smelled fresh and clean, like a short cut from a sharp razor. Blood had not yet spilled…

    Soon it would.

    The fighters from Fallien followed the demigod out of the forest in...
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    Shin and Phi, please get in touch with me on...

    Shin and Phi, please get in touch with me on discord so I can link you to my storyline doc :) Flamebird has already written her part into it so we're almost ready to get started. On that note, I may...
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    “Wait! Do not go! I have more to ask you!”...

    “Wait! Do not go! I have more to ask you!” Breaker raced after the fleeting breeze, clutching at grey wisps even as they thinned to nothing. His sprint carried him to the edge of a cliff, which...
  21. Thread: Storytime

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    Once in a life does a hologram become more vivid...

    Once in a life does a hologram become more vivid than orange garages. Vivid Lee Rogers strutted amazingly with a popsicle crammed between his eyes. But there was never more a glamorous coat than the...
  22. Thread: Hox: Level I

    by Breaker
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    [NEW] You are approved but with the caveat that your...

    You are approved but with the caveat that your level 2 update may need to be a slightly modest one. I'll be interested to get your opinion on my workup.

    Now go have fun!
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    by Breaker
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    [NEW] Thanks! Haha, if it wasn't you I was gonna get my...

    Thanks! Haha, if it wasn't you I was gonna get my meds rechecked. Nice character! Calculating...
  24. Thread: Hox: Level I

    by Breaker
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    [NEW] Hello, and welcome to Althanas! Thanks for...

    Hello, and welcome to Althanas! Thanks for writing an easy to understand and well laid out profile.

    The first sticking point here is in the description of prog-knife. I'm sure what you meant is...
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    June Vignette Contest 2020

    Welcome to the June Vignette Contest!

    Prompt
    Your character experiences extreme hot weather, unlike anything they've encountered before. How do they respond and/or adapt?

    Rules
    1. One...
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