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  1. #11
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    Forwards and onwards the group slowly marched, making one gruesome discovery after another along the road. Bodies littered the ground while wagons and other constructs of Alerarian design were left to the wayside, crushed and broken. Signs of struggle suggested that these people had been caught unawares by the sudden and swift change that had overtaken these lands. Umbra noted one particularly grim scene where the arm of a dark elf had reached out for salvation from under the wreckage of a wagon that had been overturned. Any hope for succor had long since waned and the arm had remained motionless ever since.

    Many amongst the group felt righteous indignation and swore vengeance upon the demon horde that had swept across these lands, while others quietly sulked with solemn prayers for protection. Umbra did neither of these things. They felt hardly anything about it at all; there was no smoldering anger for the lives lost, nor sorrow for the ones that would not see the light upon the morrow. There was just a silent indifference and a grudging acceptance.

    Umbra had learned a lesson in ages past; to be indifferent to such sights, to be unmoved by senseless slaughter and to be fearless of the fleeting grip of death. Or, so they silently told themselves. All the while, Umbra’s hand gripped the weathered hilt of their sword even tighter with a strengthening urge to crush and maim. Their eyes lingered, before tearing themselves away from the mangled remains and refocusing their attention back along the winding road along the hellish landscape of Alerar.

    Just like the Aegis cliffs that had nearly ended their journey early, more jagged spires of rock lay across the land in clusters of untraversable peaks and spines. Early explorers must have once thought that the edge of the world lay just beyond this expanse of land that they had called the dragon's teeth.

    One of their group whispered stories that once told that the land itself was actually that of an ancient Wyrm. One day, it would snap it’s maw shut, devouring all within before ripping itself from the land that had formed over it while it slumbered.

    ‘It certainly feels like we're entering the mouth of a beast.’ Umbra lamented, thankful that the superstition of those early explorers had given way to those more industrious; those who sought out the precious minerals that lay far below their feet. Without them, there would not have been a paved road that made these jagged peaks far more hospitable and traversable.

    ‘That still does not mean that we are welcome.’ The mercenary thought while casting their attention upwards.

    The black clouds overhead coiled and rumbled in displeasure as an acrid wind blew through the spines. This created a haunting melody that resonated with the unearthly howls of unimaginable beasts lurking up ahead. Indeed, the very land itself felt as though it had turned its gaze upon the small group that descended the winding roads and bid them unwelcome.

    Almost as unwelcome as the dignitary that clung to their side for protection. Although Troy’s face was one of steel, the fearful glint in his eyes as they turned to track every noise in the distance gave away his emotional state each and every time. Umbra did not care for the man, not one whit. They had known many men like this one, and each and every single one of them had been the architect of their own downfall.

    “Remember your contract Umbra. You are to be our eyes and ears. And our sword if needs be,” Troy stated between his gritted teeth. His eyes bore hatred at Shinsou, who walked just up ahead as the leader of the party. Umbra gave a noncommittal grunt of acknowledgement as they thought of that baleful contract. The situation had changed and yet even with their only retreat now in splinters, Troy was all too eager to give Umbra the order to stab the Telgradian in the back at the earliest opportunity.

    If he didn’t go and get himself and everyone else killed first.

    “You forget yourself! I know exactly who and what you are!” He quietly seethed between his clenched teeth, hissing under the blatant dismissal

    The offhand comment all but demanded Umbra’s full attention as the faceless helmet turned to look directly at the dignitary. They stared very carefully at the man before them, gauging if he was bluffing or not. With a curious tilt of the iron helm did Umbra consider the point moot.

    “Good for you.” The mercenary said slowly with a distorted metallic voice. “I hope you're able to sleep better because of it.” The mercenary muttered quietly before dismissing the man and his claim once again without a second thought.

    ‘He’s just bluffing, and even if he wasn’t...’ Umbra calmly reasoned. He considered that if Troy did actually know who and what Umbra was, then that would likely warrant an investigation. That was something Troy really didn’t want to happen.

    As the group crested a small hill that took them under one of the land's jagged spines, ‘Sanctuary’ was visible just a small trek up ahead. Both figuratively and literally in this hell hole, Sanctuary was an Alerarian fortress in an otherwise inhospitable land. It was encircled by a ribbed steel battlement, covered in large misshapen pipes that flowed along it’s walls before reaching out towards the rocky spires that surrounded it.

    The keep itself dominated the center of the landscape. It was a man made monstrosity, with sloped curved walls atop one another in clear cut layers that were separated by dull metal ramparts and windows that cast a warm cozy light in this barren landscape. Lightning crackled as it cut a crooked ark through the air and struck one of the keeps’ spires that served as a lightning rod.

    Machinery whirred to life as the main gate creaked and groaned, opening as they approached. Armored dark elven soldiers poured out of the gates to greet them with sharpened blades.

    “Hold yer horses ya damn dim witted pointy eared elvish sons of a bloated whore!” Eloquently cursed a middle aged dwarf as he roughly pushed past the dark elven soldiers that stood at the rear. The dwarf took a long drag of his cigar as his eyes swept over the group before them, lingering curiously on Shinsou and passing by Celandine completely to take stock of Troy.

    “I’m guessing you'd be the diplomat sent from Corone?” He asked curiously as he exhaled a pungent cloud of smoke from between his lips. “We’d figured you would all be dead by now, considering the last report we had was that Antega was under siege. Heh, you’d forgive us for not rolling out the red carpet, things have not been going well as you can surely guess by now.”

    “And the armed welcome?” Umbra spoke up, causing the dwarf to turn their way with an appraising eye that lingered over their iron armor. “Yeah, see, you ain’t the first to turn up looking to get in. Had some trouble with a few nasty demons that could change shape.”

    “Be that as it may, we are here now.” Troy smugly replied as he stepped forwards while pushing back the hood of his cloak. “By some miracle at the very least.” he uttered under his breath.

    “I am Troy Ashton, acting as the rep-” Troy was suddenly cut off as the young faun indignantly pushed past Troy with a huff and stood fearlessly before the dwarf, who gave her a curious look.

    “As the acting representative of the Radasanth delegation, and witness to the horrors of what these demons are capable of, I'm eager to start talks as soon as possible.” Celandine spoke eloquently as she came to the fore. Her voice bore no hesitance, as though she had been doing this for years.

    The dwarf looked at her curiously," The name’s Sabal” he introduced himself after a moment’s pause. “Being a faun, you wouldn’t happen to be the Philomel would you?” The dwarf asked with a hopeful tone.

    “I am Celandine Van der Aart, sir. Philomel is my mother.” The girl politely answered after a moment of hesitation.

    Troy seethed as he looked down upon the faun with hatred. He moved only slightly to reach forward and pull the young girl back behind him, but hesitated when he caught sight of Shinsou’s glare. It was a clear, silent warning; that if he did anything to the girl, there would be hell to pay. Umbra’s gave their own dismissive shrug and left the delegation member to silently stew all by himself.

    Umbra would have been honest to say that they thought that Celandine was still too young to be here, acting as a diplomat of all things. Even without Troy’s off hand comment (that the girl was supposedly even younger than she physically looked), it did little to ease those doubts. But Umbra still preferred Celandine acting as their diplomat over the bumbling antics of Troy any day of the week.

    The Dehlar plate clad dwarf stroked his long black beard thoughtfully while taking another drag on his cigar. “Too bad, I was kinda hoping that someone of her renown would be here. No offense.” The dwarf grumbled with a heavy frown.

    “While I ain’t no diplomat like yerself, i’m just an advisor on the account that I helped find the bloody damn gate in the first place!” He lamented with an almost regretful tone. “Ah, but this ain’t no place to harangue a guest. Come in. We will talk more where it’s nice, warm and safe,” he said with a toothy grin and flashed a dirty look back to the dark elven guards

    “Now, if only they could learn the same manners as you,” he said to Celandine with an amused twinkle in his dark eyes, before ushering the group within the ‘Sanctuary.’ No doubt they would find a warm bed along with food and water to sate their hunger and quench their thirst.

    The large mechanical gate began to shut, groaning and protesting as massive gears span like complex clockwork from somewhere within the metal fortress’ walls. Umbra paused only long enough to look back as rocks began to tumble down along a steep cliff. Though Umbra was quick to trace the source of the falling stones, they were not able to ascertain who or what had disturbed the rocks in the first place.

  2. #12
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    Sanctuary.

    Originally built as an outpost of last resort for Alerar’s ruling family, the black steel fortress was intended to protect almost thirty generations of dark elven bloodline. The walled citadel’s function since the end of the Raiaeran conflict had changed to meet the needs of the times, and while it was still considered to be one of Alerar’s most impregnable defences, it now routinely hosted a variety of diplomatic events ranging from routine state visits to extraordinary council meetings.

    On this particularly miserable evening, it happened to be hosting one of the most important pan-Althanian conferences in Alerar’s history.

    Shinsou Vaan Osiris marveled at Sanctuary as he followed the Radasanthian delegation through its dark metal maw. It was as bold on the inside as it was intimidating on the outside; they first walked down a huge corridor plated with dark steel and adorned with overhanging mechanical contraptions that serviced the working parts of the fortress’s internals, before reaching a welcoming hall. As if conjured from the workbooks of Ettermire’s finest engineers, every stone slab, metal sheet, doorway or feature was precise and even. These were walls made to protect a community, to echo with the whispers of steel and song and be the shelter they needed for the millennia to come, and anyone who walked these halls could tell that had been achieved with great aplomb. The elves who constructed this were truly set on perfection, as if they really loved what they had made, but also had an absolute understanding of the reason of their undertaking.

    An attendant quietly showed the group from the welcoming hall into a smaller room on the west wing. As the delegation filed through the slightly narrower doorway, the Telgradian nodded his acknowledgement to the young elf and squeezed through.

    Celandine, however, froze at the door. So sudden was the faun’s stop that those behind her were caught off balance, swerving around or crashing into her back.

    Shinsou frowned, placing a hand on the girl’s shoulder. “What’s up? You okay?”

    There was no response. The Telgradian circled back in front of her, kneeling and looking into her eyes for any sort of reaction in her pupils. They were fixated on the room ahead, as if she had seen a ghost.

    “Celandine?” He repeated, shaking her shoulders lightly. “What's up, Celandine?”

    "N-nothing...” She said, her voice trembling slightly.

    “Doesn't seem like nothing to me...” Shinsou replied quietly as people barged past the two of them, “What's going on?”

    There was no response. The girl looked faint.

    “Let’s sit you down. Have something to eat and drink – you’re probably exhausted from the trip.“ The spellsword’s whisper reached her as he took the faun’s hand, crouching beside her. Ahead, a plethora of diplomatic representatives from all sorts of creeds and cultures were seated in a circular chamber. They sat on white marble steps that fanned out from a small, central well in the middle right to the outer rim of the room. This new hall, some sixty of these ‘steps’ in size, opened up to a single walkway that led to chambers that Shinsou understood to be reserved for the Alerarian delegates alone.

    The Telgradian helped walk Celandine to her own seat, allowing the Radasanthian party to file past them first into their own places on the ‘step’, before walking back up to the entrance of the room. Umbra faced him now at the other side.

    “What happened?” The armored guardian queried as they settled into their picket.

    “A fainting fit, I think. I’ve told her to get something to eat and drink. Something we should be doing, really. But, priorities.” To most, guard duty was hardly a concession to luxury, and Shinsou was particularly unaccustomed to it.

    About half an hour passed as the gathering were served a relatively light dinner, consisting mostly of fish and jugs of warm Alerarian liquor. At the head of the room squatted Sabal the dwarf, who sat quietly without eating and instead set about polishing the head of his Delyn warhammer. During a pause in the meticulous cleaning, the dwarf’s brown eyes flashed towards Shinsou, and then back across the numerous faces ahead of him. Two female Alerarian dark elves entered from the chambers behind the podium pre-prepared scripts and itineraries well in hand. Dressed in matching robes of pale washed lime, the one on the left approached the podium and began to address the conference.

    Patience, Shinsou reminded himself, as he cleaned the blade of his sword Enpera with the loose sleeve of his coat, casting another glance over the faun as she righted herself to eat in her seat. Not long now.

    “To the nations of Althanas, we welcome you to Sanctuary,” A pair of gentle silver eyes flitted between the speech and the gathered. Her slender face, framed by caramel hair, tried to show a reassuring expression “Thank you for coming such a long way. We are gathered here today because we find ourselves in the crescendo of a-“

    The Alerarian spokesman’s voice trailed off into the back of Shinsou’s mind as his attention remained on Sabal. The dwarven master engineer was bulkier and looked more dangerous looking than anyone present; he wore mismatched tatters of clothing underneath a prideful display of dehlar and dragonscale armor, likely forged by himself. Sword scars of conflicts long past marked his bare forearms. He styled himself something of a genius in the field of mechanics, and despite his size and heritage seemed to possess a reasonable intellect.

    It wasn’t long after another few second’s worth of eye contact from Sabal that a tingling occured in the depths of the Telgradian’s gut; his magically attuned senses alerting him to an imminent presence. The dwarven master exited the room, flashing the Telgradian a final look with a venomous glare. Shinsou’s golden eyes narrowed in response, which Umbra immediately noticed.

    “Are you ok? You seem distracted.” It tilted its head with the query. The Telgradian could almost feel its eyes piercing through him from underneath the helmet.

    “Stay here.” Came the instruction, as Shinsou’s head turned back towards the entrance. “Something’s off. I’ll go-”

    The sentence shattered into inaudible nonsense as a blast of air sent the Telgradian reeling against the wall, and everyone else crashing to the floor. Spots of crackling plasma began to appear at the entrance to the room, each anomaly morphing from gas, to plasma, to solid, before everything pooled into a whirling orbit of pentagonal and hexagonal discs. Unseen forces converged, and matter and energy combined as two translucent avatars phased from the space between the portal walls. The first was a woman. Her dark skin and silver eyes gave her away as a dark elf, and her Vlince and Njalian Spidersilk garments marked her as such. The second was an usual type, clearly a dark elf, but lumbered with a harsh looking mechanical breathing apparatus.

    “…He’s here, Jivvin.” The words passed her thin, grey lips as the elven woman’s silver eyes washed over those in attendance. In the grasp of her right hand, a sword glowed a luminescent blue hue; its white runes shimmered with arcane power and pulsed with a metronomic rhythm. Jivvin stared at the gathered as audible gasps and alarmed exclamations filled the room.

    Jivvin’s pale yellow eyes flicked left just in time to see the manifestation of something dark beside him. Dark Matter formed the dour core of the magic; a portal carved from pure power that contained the deadly lances of Shinsou’s Enpera Kurohitsugi. The ornate and functional granite blocks beside him began to dissolve as the magic holding portal hung in the air, chewing through the materials like acid through paper. Finally, he turned to meet the Telgradian’s gaze.

    “Shinsou Vaan Osiris, as bold as ever,” The dark elf quipped, appearing unfazed as Cazri settled into a stance. “How long has it been now?”

    Celandine gaped in surprise at the unexpected statement, confusion writ clearly upon her features. Shinsou knew these people? Then all of this, all along…

    Her eyes darted about in panic, and they finally settled upon the faces of her companions, who were all equally shocked.

    “A year since we met, I believe.” Shinsou reasoned as he stood there unfazed.

    Yeah, a year. I was stuck in Alerar still thanks to Arius, while Storm went through hell in Raiaera. You got me out of there on a promise - that I’d help you find the Temple of Elrohir Fararil, so that you could find the Sword of the First King. It was a cost I was willing to pay - the prize at the end was worth so much more.

    Jivvin’s mechanical lung clunked away in the background as it converted air into the noxious gasses he thrived on. “We had to improvise a little on adjusting the timescales for this little deception. Given that your vessel got wrecked and you got attacked at Malgrior, you did well getting here. Unfortunately, pulling the sword gave us some unexpected results.”

    “Indeed.” Cazri confirmed. “A demonic gateway opened within the temple and connected directly to Tular. As you can imagine, this set in motion a cataclysmic chain of events that had led us here. We’ve had to make choices we weren’t expecting to make.”

    Yeah, no fucking kidding. Shinsou lamented, side-eyeing his dark elven peer as his deadly magic remained poised. “What of Storm? Any word?”

    “None yet.” Came Cazri’s response. “I hope he hurries. After what we’ve done, there is no future for us in Alerar or for you in Corone anymore. The demons saw to that for us, and your choices here will seal your fate with Radasanth. Can I trust you to deal with this for us?”

    The Telgradian sighed, reluctantly twisting a hand. The portal containing the lances of Enpera Kurohitsugi twisted on its axis until its dark maw faced the twenty or so politicians gathered within Sanctuary’s chambers. Their gasps and shrieks of horror filled the air as they realized what was about to happen, and who was about to send them to their maker.

    This is it. No going back now after this.

    He could not help but tremble slightly at the daunting undertaking, for the choice he would now make would change the course of his life forever. But, whatever that choice was, it was a necessary one. In fact, nothing was more necessary than this now. It all now depended on whether he was capable of it anymore.

    “Enpera…”

    Suigetsu.

    Those close to Shinsou might have spotted the sly difference of the vocal incantation for Enpera Kurohitsugi, but there were none present who realized the significance of it. Regardless, The Telgradian did as was bid, rising solemnly to his feet and unleashing his lances towards the front of the hall. The cries of the dying rasped around the chamber as the spears tore through bone and sinew, painting a masterpiece of blood and gore over the white marble canvas of Sanctuary’s interior. As his assault stopped, Shinsou paced like a psychotic through the bodies; the hackles on the back of his neck rising as he fielded angry and astonished glares from the two he had let live. Celandine and Umbra appeared to have been held at bay by the presence of Cazri and Jivvin, and seemed to be too shocked to react to what had just unfolded.

    “Kill them.” Cazri spat, indicating coldly to the pair who had lived.

    The moment seemed to dissolve like winter snow on salt. Shinsou Vaan Osiris sighed, although whether in sympathy or in regret the dark elf had no way to tell. A wave of a hand dismissed this notion entirely, and he walked away without a second thought. A disparaging glare followed him back to the foot of the room.

    “I said, kill them!”

    The Telgradian shrugged Cazri away like an inconsequential fly, falling back on years of experience dealing with subtle disobedience. “Your political opponents are destroyed. There is nothing to gain by killing a child and a mercenary, and our time is short.”

    Only then did Cazri finally give in to Shinsou’s defiance. She took a moment to weave the Sword of the First King about her person, and as she did a hot backdraft swept through her golden hair. The blade’s edge traced a cross through the air, leaving an invisible thread of light that first glittered before tearing open into a portal of black expanse. With a tug, she pulled the sword free of the arcane energies and sheathed it into the scabbard on the side of her body.

    “Sabal has already retreated. Let us go to the Temple of Elrohir Fararil.”

    Cazri and Jivvin stepped through, leaving Shinsou alone for a second with the frightened faun and her armored charge. Before anyone could say anything, or muster up the courage for an attack, the Telgradian waved a hand, and shot Celandine and Umbra a final, knowing glance.

    Sorry, but this is something I have to do. You can chew me out later.

    As Sanctuary was left to contemplate Shinsou’s actions, deep within the warp gate traveled Sabal, Cazri, Jivvin and the Telgradian. So entrenched within the folds of space and time, none were able to interact with each other. Instead, they stood apart in the void, each surrounded by a crystalline membrane that pulsed gently. A continuous kaleidoscope of colors wrapped around them all as the dimensions continued to twist and bend to the sword’s whim. All the while, Shinsou's mind settled into a meditative state, and a measure of satisfaction came to him. It had been a huge gamble, but a power he had not used in over five years had come back to him. Indeed, it had been activated in that very chamber. Now, he would show those left behind the truth by deactivating it.

    Release, Enpera Suigetsu.

  3. #13
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    That look. That look.

    She was beyond frozen in fear. Her heart hung heavy with betrayal. Her mother's once true love now with the devious enemy, a man who had promised to protect her from all ills.

    And he had. But he had also …

    Also killed. Yet also given her that striking look. Drys above! What did it all mean? What was she to do? A sea of bodies lay around them, and the portal that had brought those grim demons along with the sword of legend that she had so longed to study was gone. Damn, it was gone.

    And she had seen - seen…

    Seen what? A large room. A well like construct in the center. Steps aplenty leading towards or away, all the room gray of granite but also brilliantly lit by the lanterns and then - the flash of light. The feeling of danger. Blood stains on a well and the sound of breaking glass. The hunger that seemed to emanate from everywhere, a rich desire and conflict and horror -

    She had known it was all to go wrong. She had felt the pain and the suffering that they would go through and yet she had done nothing. She had only glanced at Shinsou and said.

    It's nothing. But then - that look …

    And then she breathed out. And it was as if when she did the world simply melted away. Shimmering and mesmerizing, the scene was reality for a moment. It showed the awful betrayal of their friend and companion - but then it was not. Air twisted, light glistened, and the world churned. The illusion fell away in a shower of crystalline ice snow as if it had never been there before.

    They were alive. They were all alive. The spears that had struck them were nothing but ghosts and the bodies that had been flung to the side were nothing but tricks in the light. Clinging onto Umbra's firm metal arm, now able to move, Celandine gasped, her eyes widening as she finally understood what Shinsou had been trying to tell them.

    That look. That, knowing, serious look. He had been telling them that it was all a ploy, all part of his devious mind, and that after all they could trust him! He was not wicked of heart after all!

    All those bodies, all that death - it was not anything! It was not reality. The young faun gazed in amazement as the victims of the supposed betrayal began to come to their senses.

    "What?" some asked, "what - where - who?!"

    "The sword! Of the first King! I saw-!"

    "Demons! And betrayal! How could this be?! This place is-"

    "Full of woe! My heart is full of woe. We are-"

    "We are in serious danger!"

    Celandine clutched at her new compatriot's hand. "Shinsou was part of this - in his planning. He didn't want to kill everyone so… an illusion. But I saw - last night I dreamt of the pain we would suffer here." She whispered. "He's gone deep. Much deeper than is safe. This whole adventure is a misadventure. Demons and spies are everywhere. We need to get out of here."

    She paused, glancing around as if anyone was now a suspect. "Are you with me, bold knight? I can conceal us from this, but I need you to trust me. We have to do our own investigation from hereon in."

  4. #14
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    The amount of fear that had coalesced within the room after Shinsou’s ‘apparent’ betrayal was almost palpable to the hired mercenary’s ire. "How annoying," Umbra groused irritably as they observed the respected dignitaries from far off nations devolve into a hysterical panic in the face of their own mortality.

    "Leave it to a person like Shinsou van fucking Osiris to fuck up what should have been a nice freindly chat about an obvious alliance to repel a demon fucking invasion," Umbra hissed from between their gritted teeth. Their iron armour rattled silently as the mercenary shook with the resolve to punch the man in the face the next time they met.

    "Forget what his reasons are!" The mercenary mentally resolved that the punch was now fated to happen one way or another. Umbra’s hidden gaze swept across the room to the men and women that had apparently ‘died’ under an illusion, and ended up only cursing Shinsou even more for his unwillingness to include both Celandine and themselves from the massacre.

    Idiot, if you're going to go all in you don’t leave room for doubt.’ Umbra mentally scolded the man that was no longer with them and wondered if a single punch was enough for that man. "Was he always so sentimental?" Umbra mused while shaking off their own annoyance to deal with the young diplomats' own blossoming concern.

    “Bold knight?” Umbra repeated and looked down to the young girl that was lightly holding onto their gauntlet, With a shake of their head their head the mercenary proceeded to say in a soft tone, “I would not go after him if I were you. Shinsou has chosen his own path to follow, and interfering with it now in any attempt to ‘save’ him from this choice may end up not only putting yourself in danger it may also unravel any idiotic plot that Shinsou is scheming.”


    The look of surprise and disappointment upon Celandine’s face was evident to anyone that happened to look upon her at that moment in time. “"I didn't mean go after him, Umbra," she hissed. "I meant ... Us. Get out of here. Together. This is all going to fail. It's darker than anyone could have predicted.” The faun snapped in annoyance, though Umbra remained unmoved by her apparent vexation.

    “Be that as it may, I'm not at liberty to off galavanting around on my whims.” The mercenary said irritably while turning their gaze to the other dignitaries, “As much as you don’t care for it right now, your place is here in this room. Though organizing this lot into any semblance of an alliance against a demon invasion may seem like it’s the farthest thing on your mind right now. But isn’t that the responsibility that your mother tasked you with in her stead?” Umbra asked with a pointed nod at their young charge.

    “T-that's - that's not quite what I …" she glared at him. "So you're staying here? Not coming with me to protect me?" Celandine muttered.

    “I’m bound by my contract.” The warrior answered honestly. “To act as the eyes and ears of Radasanths dignitary, and to reign in Shinsou should he present an immediate risk.” Celandine's eyes glinted with annoyance and turned her back upon the mercenary. Umbra lightly sighed in response while wondering if they had pushed the girl too far. Once more Umbra struggled to view the young girl for the diplomat she ought to have been, Troy’s allegations of her real age lingered in the back of their mind, giving form to lingering doubts.

    Fine then, so you want out of this place, i can arrange that.’ Umbra thought sadly and turned to wave down the closest guard that was still up and about though more than a little confused with the current proceedings. “Take this one too her room,” Umbra ordered the guard once he came close enough, his eyes widened just as much as Celandines as she looked up at Umbra in surprise.

    “Don’t look at me like that.” Umbra gently admonished. “Consider this meeting adjourned, Troy can handle things until we're ready to reconvene.”

    The look of doubt that settled upon the young faun’s face was almost comical “Troy - I'm not a child. I'm trying to -” She made one last effort to appeal for Umbra’s aid though she seemed to be able to sense that the warriors' resolve was as firm as the armour they wore.

    “Go, take her, make sure she gets some rest," Umbra asked the guard who nodded and proceeded to lead the Faun out of the room with a gentle hand upon her shoulder. The faun resisted the gesture and violently shook off the offending hand to turn and glare at both Umbra and the guard.

    "I'll leave of my own accord!" she snapped.

    Celandine held her glare as though daring them to say anything else though a gleam in her eyes made Umbra almost reconsider allowing the girl to do what she wanted, but chose to wave to the two off instead. Celandine twirled in a fit of rage, her chin held high, sauntering out as the guard struggled to come to their wits and hurry after her. Umbra did not stop to watch them leave as they were already bearing down upon the miserable Troy who remained sat at the table with his head buried in his palms.

    Umbra brow grew heavy once they noted the piss staining the man’s pants but ignored it in favour of slamming an armoured hand down upon the table next to Troy to gain his attention. The man predictably almost jumped out of his skin at Umbra’s sudden action and traced the armoured arm back up towards the faceless iron visor with fearful eyes.

    “U-Umbra, for god's sake, you scared the living daylights out of me!” He hissed.

    “No more than what Shinsou did, are these talks salvageable?” Umbra asked the man calmly and watched as a frantic glint began to shine in the man’s eyes.

    “Salvageable?” Troy barked out in annoyance before waving his hand at the shaken dignitaries. “This is a disaster! Even if any talks could take place now we are cut off from Radasanth, from Corone! And none of these people would be willing to form an alliance with us after we escorted an assassin to their table!”

    “And what of the dwarf serving as the dignitary of Alerar?” Umbra questioned “surely he can’t be excused for conspiring with said assassin either, if Corone has been implicated in this crime, then so too is Alerar. And I think they need our help now more than we need theirs.”

    Troy narrowed his eyes at the armoured warrior and clenched his fists together in anger “And what would a mere mercenary know of Alerar’s political situation?” Umbra huffed in annoyance, “Enough to know that your earlier comment about knowing who and what i am was merely a bluff.”

    Umbra gripped the back of Troy's seat and roughly pulled him away from the table. “I’ve been patient with you thus far, more than you deserve. But as your eyes and ears I am not at liberty to do more than I have already done, so if you want to do something worthwhile on this trip, then I suggest you man up, change your pants, and start negotiating like we were supposed to do from the beginning.”

    “How. Dare. You!” Troy’s voice rose sharply in indignation as he flew up onto his feet to glare at the lowly mercenary. “If you think you can badger me into doing what you want then you have another thing coming!” The man rored at the top of his voice and stormed away from the table, where he waved over a nearby dark elven guard and uttered something about taking him to his room.

    Umbra watched him leave with a long weary sigh, “I hate politics.” Maybe trying to snap Troy back to his senses by using such an aggressive method was not the right choice, not that Umbra could think of any other means as such aggressive tactics were all too commonplace back in the day of their fathers court…

    Umbra immediately dismissed such forlorn memories in favour of observing the feast that had been thrown across the room in the initial appearance of that demonic portal. It was a shame, it had looked like a nice spread too with a delectable looking piece of pork that now rested in the corner of the room. With a reluctant sigh the armoured knight made their own way out of the room to find some corner to bunker down in until either Celandine or Troy were willing to play their proper roles.

    Though the guard that was quickly rushing up towards the mercenary left only a pit in their stomach. “T-the girl! I just looked away for just a moment, she was there and the next she was gone! I looked everywhere but I just could not find her!”

    “So you went off on your own after all,” Umbra whispered under their breath, but the damage was done now, the girl's earlier comment about being able to get them out of the room left little doubt that whatever method she had meant to use she had done so to escape her escort.

    “Research, the little lady meant to do research, is there a library or archive within these walls?” Umbra asked the guard with a thinly veiled annoyance.

    “Well, err yes, there is a library meant for-” Umbra quickly cut off the guard. “Then go check there first, I'll keep an eye out in case she decides to double back around.” Umbra lied as the guard took off for wherever the library was on a wild goose chase.

    Idly, now that they were currently free from any obligations that the contract held over them the mercenary pondered on a method that could resolve the current situation as neatly as possible.

    Only to then begin to wonder if they even should. ‘No, I'm not going to allow these talks to fail.


    - - - -


    It was some time later when Troy began to stir from his sleep. However the warm blankets and comfortable mattress that had been afforded to him within one of the guest rooms did little to ease his mind from the awful events that he had been made to endure on this journey.

    The storm that had been building up mere hours ago now buffeted and battered the fortress in all of it’s unrestrained fury. Thunder clapped as arcs of lightning struck the lightning rods under its relentless assault. Troy shivered as a strong cold wind swept through his room through an open window.

    An open window? His tired mind wondered as they swore that the window had been closed when he had crawled under the beds sheets. He groaned at the indignity of having to get out of his bed to close the window as servants were in short supply within Sanctuary and none had been tasked to see to his needs.

    The man shuffled across the floor holding the bed sheets close to his body to ward off the chilly wind as he closed the window and flicked a clasp to avert the window from opening up again. His tired mind now satisfied that he had rid himself of one problem began to wonder how he should rid himself of that pesky slip of a girl and that boorish mercenary.

    He knew that he need not bother to entertain thoughts of Shinsou, that man had written his own cheque and his time in Corone was coming to a close all with his own doing. Troy chuckled as his head rested against the pillow, giving no thought as to how or why the window had been opened despite being previously closed. Nor did he notice the shadowed figure waiting in the corner of his room watching the man intently with ruby red eyes.

  5. #15
    Althanian

    EXP: 1,484, Level: 1
    Level completed: 75%, EXP required for next Level: 516
    Level completed: 75%,
    EXP required for next Level: 516


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    Preston Fletcher
    Age
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    Human
    Gender
    Male
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    Hey hey! So I will be doing a condensed version of the rubric for the tournament. I will still be adding commentary to the sections, so you may see random comments as I notate and read through things. If you have questions or concerns please feel free to reach out to me to discuss. I wish you all the best!

    Plot
    (Story, Setting, Pace) 26

    All: For the most part I have no issues with the story at all, everything seemed to flow well together. The setting was very well done by all 3 of you as well. The pacing flowed very well - some of the later posts were a bit longer, and in turn a little long-winded so slowed the pace of reading down.

    Character
    (Communication, Action, Persona) 25

    All: You all wrote your characters incredibly well, and displayed the type of writing that displays characters not just through narrative, but through action and reaction as well. I think there was a bit of over-dramaticized action related to Troy at times. Communication was great, outside of some of the interaction with Troy as mentioned. Some of the later actions were a little clunky to read, but overall well done.

    Prose
    (Mechanics, Clarity, Technique) 24

    All: I couldn’t find but a couple mechanical errors throughout the entire thread. Umbra, some of your posts seemed a bit choppy with the way the paragraphs were, but not enough to throw anything off too much.

    Wild Card
    9
    • Interact with at least one faction, either as an ally or enemy - or create your own and that faction must interact with the others somehow
    • Overcome one “political” obstacle - Completed in spades
    • Due to the hurried nature of everyone scrambling to get to the new discovery, your characters are not fully stocked/prepared in some way - [Post 7] mentioned not having enough gunpowder and supplies for the ballista though not sure how it impacted anything



    Score: 84

    Rewards:
    Shin - 2652 exp | 250 gold
    Celandine - 1325 exp | 250 gold
    Umbra - 1225 exp | 250 gold

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    Welcome to Level 17 Shin!

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