I'm working on what should be a fairly comprehensive guide to writing action and character movement in fiction. You could help me out by posting any questions, confusions, or difficulties you have regarding those aspects of prose. I estimate I'll have put 20+ hours of work into this guide by the time it's finished (the table of contents has over 30 subheadings) and I'll make it available to everyone here. Your input would be appreciated
I'll do my best to also answer your questions in this thread so you won't have to wait for the finished product.