Manda-

Your art is really coming together now!!!

Keep up the good work.

My suggestion is to look up Manga Proportion studies for your faces and anatomy. I know Manga-Ka style is slightly different than Western art is, but the proportion rules for anatomy tend to be the same. (More or less) So what I suggest is really locking in the proportions of your face. I noticed while looking at your drawings that the eyes are a bit off in terms of spacing, and in one case, the placing of the eyes. Do you sometimes struggle drawing the eyes? If so I suggest drawing a LOT more eyes and really tackle your problem areas. I hope my advice can help you out from one artist to another. Proportion and anatomy skillz can take a life time to lock in. Don't give up! Just keep arting!!! And I admire you for approaching the Manga-Ka style like that. Keep up the good work, and stay drawing!!!

~Pav